Paxtonnnn Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 9 minutes ago, Battal said: (Paxton, remember how we talked about pacing? It's probably a bad idea to have Wallan figure out the biggest character-related secret in the RP seconds after finding out about it. Just because you can figure something out doesn't mean your characters can; or should.) (Okay, sorry. I fixed it.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeklo Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 (I kinda disagree. I believe their character is more than capable given their right side, but agree that it may fall into the can but shouldn't. They are a child after all.) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DwerBomb Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 Much Earlier "THAT'S THE SPIRIT, LITTLE FUR FRIEND!" Now-ish Jaw stands up and points at Wallan "A NEW CREW MEMBER?? MY NAME IS JAW, I AM THE CAPTAIN. I DO THINGS A CAPTAIN DOES, LIKE TALKING TO CREW MEMBERS TO GAIN THEIR RESPECT AND CONFIDENCE. SO I ASK YOU, WHAT IS YOUR NAME, HALVED PERSON??" 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paxtonnnn Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 (edited) (Also, I'm really sorry if I'm ruining this RP by being really bad at pacing...) Edited July 16, 2016 by Paxtonnnn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GuyNamedChris Posted July 16, 2016 Author Share Posted July 16, 2016 (Don't worry about it.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YouKnowWho Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 (edited) (Don't worry, you're doing just fine for a beginner!) Trevor stands up and takes a deep sniff of that regular sized regular air. Smells like air! A large grin grows on his face. What a time to be alive! The corrupted boy was still not yet discovered by the fisherman. He was too distracted by the fact he wasn't like three inches tall anymore. He happily begins to start fishing after so long. Not long after, Trevor amassed a nice amount of fish. He carefully divides the fish pile so that Dragon gets 1/4 of the fish, and the rest of the humans and humanoids and puppers get 3/4. He caught four fish. It wasn't very complicated. Trevor picks up the largest fish and offers it to Dragon, the fellow cripple. Edited July 16, 2016 by Youknowwho 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paxtonnnn Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 (edited) 22 minutes ago, Youknowwho said: Trevor stands up and takes a deep sniff of that regular sized sized air. Smells like air! (WAIT WHAT PLOT TWIST) (Also you wrote "sized" twice") Edited July 16, 2016 by Paxtonnnn 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YouKnowWho Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 6 minutes ago, Paxtonnnn said: (WAIT WHAT PLOT TWIST) (Also you wrote "sized" twice") [Or did I??????!?!??!?!?!?!] 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wxps350 Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 Crab still wasn't moving Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paxtonnnn Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 5 minutes ago, Youknowwho said: [Or did I??????!?!??!?!?!?!] (OMG) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DwerBomb Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 (edited) (Dont worry, you're doing ok, but please reply when your character is asked stuff ahah) (and please keep your off-topic posts limited in number, possibly by putting them with actual action posts) Edited July 16, 2016 by DwerBomb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paxtonnnn Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 (edited) 9 minutes ago, DwerBomb said: (Dont worry, you're doing ok, but please reply when your character is asked stuff ahah) (Wallan had already asked Kate something, and Mena recommended I don't ask one character a question then talk to someone else before they answer) Edited July 16, 2016 by Paxtonnnn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DwerBomb Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 5 minutes ago, Paxtonnnn said: (Wallan had already asked Kate something, and Mena recommended I don't ask one character a question then talk to someone else before they answer) (I said "asked" not "asking". Jaw is talking to him.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paxtonnnn Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 Wallan jumps a bit as he sees Jaw. "AAAH KILL IT!!!!" He makes a shadow sword and cuts Jaw in half. "My name's Wallan." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DwerBomb Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 "HELLO WALLAN. YOU CAN START BY CLEANING THE DOCK. I THINK THAT'S WHAT NEWBIES DO ON BOATS? MAYBE..." He stops to reflect about Wallan's role on board 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paxtonnnn Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 Wallan's shadow eye looks at Jaw suspiciously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wxps350 Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 Crab twitched, but still wasn't moving. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YouKnowWho Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 (edited) Nobody really cared if crab died so they did nothing about it. But still, Crab is a very memorable character and somebody should probably save him. Edited July 16, 2016 by Youknowwho 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paxtonnnn Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 (edited) Wallan looked at Crab, lying dead, and suddenly realized he's hungry. Wallan doesn't even notice Crab. Edited July 16, 2016 by Paxtonnnn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WaddleDee Posted July 16, 2016 Share Posted July 16, 2016 Wiffleball had been wedged into the railing by the explosion, and for the past few minutes (after setting Noctimus aside, of course), he'd been squirming around in an attempt to dislodge himself. It didn't take much longer than that for him to give up - no dice, his body was stuck fast. Hm...Well, he could always just use shado- At the mere thought, he doubled over in pain, a feeling of strong nausea gripping his chest. Okay, that was new. A cold chill passed through his body, and he shuddered as a small amount of fuel dribbled from his mouth. It took him a few seconds to recover after the nausea passed, leaving him a bit shaken. Hm. Come to think of it, maybe outside help wasn't such a bad idea. After a few moments of thinking and a little careful maneuvering, he was able to pull his sewing kit out of his pouch and throw it forwards, hitting the back of Jaw's leg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted July 17, 2016 Share Posted July 17, 2016 19 hours ago, wxps350 said: Meanwhile, Crab stalked Angelle from the deck, holding two knives. He then leapt high into the air and did a triple flip... (Wasn't Crab below deck summoning something?) Otto couldn't see anymore explosions... or action. He also notices someone missing... or maybe his mind was just playing trick on him (giving Syndir is still in the air somewhere but... I highly doubt it... so maybe his mind is playing trick on him :/ ) Then Otto looked over at Crab on the deck. He was moving. When did he get here? he thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paxtonnnn Posted July 17, 2016 Share Posted July 17, 2016 5 minutes ago, DragonMage156 said: (Wasn't Crab below deck summoning something?) (No, that was Gyx.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MenaAthena Posted July 17, 2016 Share Posted July 17, 2016 (Oops, sorry to leave you hanging there Pax. I was away from the house for most of the day. And don't worry. Like the other said, you're doing fine for a beginner. We're not trying to scold you or anything, just trying to help you out so you can learn and improve :3 I also agree With Zek. With Wallan's abilities it does make sense for him to be able to see/figure out Kade is some sort of shadow with the evidence he has, but it's your call.) "I'm Kate, my brother is Kade, and the others are... um..." Kate tries looking around for the other people she mentioned, squinting slightly, but isn't having any luck spotting them. "Well, Wiffleball is an orange doll with long ears, Noctimus is a black puppy with a weird flickery tail, and Syndir is a loud guy with a weird mask. He's kinda silly." She tried to describe them as she continued to look. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paxtonnnn Posted July 17, 2016 Share Posted July 17, 2016 (edited) "Okay. Nice to meet you. My name's Wallan." (Wait, was she listening when he told Jaw his name?) "But, anyway, who's 'Meri'?" Edited July 17, 2016 by Paxtonnnn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MenaAthena Posted July 17, 2016 Share Posted July 17, 2016 "Oh, Meri is the sea monster that drives the ship." Kate answered, pointing towards Meri, as she knew the direction he went in. "He's normally bigger, and in the water." The whole time, she's talking like all this is completely normal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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