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I'm not over doing it, am I?

 

Maybe.....just a little. You've dropped a large amount of plot bombs in a small number of pages. 1, winter queen-esque spirit, 2, Alice-In-Wonderland-style council, 3, three or four new characters in a row, 4, Albert used to be the Grue.

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Maybe.....just a little. You've dropped a large amount of plot bombs in a small number of pages. 1, winter queen-esque spirit, 2, Alice-In-Wonderland-style council, 3, three or four new characters in a row, 4, Albert used to be the Grue.

 Ah, understandable, but trust me, this is probably the last plot-bomb for now. As for Jokul and the others, they're minor characters who won't have much to do in the current comic for now. 

 

But I'm also willing to read ways to fix this so I don't make a habit of plot bombs. 

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