Derpime Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 And in case if anyone is uncleared how mad Wilson is in the cinematic trailer,then through Loop's manga,we can now see a fully mad scientist/inventor/mad Wilson,...etc.He built himself a portal to another dimension by listen to the crappy radio and then trust a mutant spider that can talk,has 4 eyes,unusual spider legs on his face...@ImDaMisterL:AlsoTime: Blood Level: Loss Rate: 3:05 5698ml 12ml/s 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theinsanefruitloop Posted June 18, 2015 Author Share Posted June 18, 2015 (edited) Page 18 I was busy on house chores and I played a lil don't starve with Weirdobob then back to chores. So here's an update! 8D Surprise surprise >v> @ImDaMisterL OH I WAS PLANNING TO PLAY THAT! 8D oh and Webber can do it! That adorable kid has it in him ;v; @Derpime I found Wilson mad and in his situation he's getting desperate so yeah oh and I'm laughing at that surgeon simulator you did there EDIT: I try my best to edit the eye angle. BTW I love Corpse Party one of my favorite games. Oh and also, I have referenced in a DGM manga, which I forgot to put here. EDITEDIT: Apparently Wilson looks like a zombie without the pupils >v> Edited June 18, 2015 by Theinsanefruitloop 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derpime Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 (edited) It doesn't look well on the phone though,all over the places:[Last panel though,Wilson's eye looks creepy,like some Corpse Party right there.And somehow i manage to see another head on Wilson's face if you just concetrate on the nose and the eye part.Anyway,i think that you need to fix the pain facial expression,either no pupil or like the first panel:1st from the left but with wider mouth and more downward eye-line(i guess?)You will get the idea:/.Or simply you can just fix the eye~_~. Edited June 18, 2015 by Derpime Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theinsanefruitloop Posted June 18, 2015 Author Share Posted June 18, 2015 It doesn't look well on the phone though,all over the places:[Last panel though,Wilson's eye looks creepy,like some Corpse Party right there.And somehow i manage to see another head on Wilson's face if you just concetrate on the nose and the eye part.Anyway,i think that you need to fix the pain facial expression,either no pupil or like the first panel:1st from the left but with wider mouth and more downward eye-line(i guess?)You will get the idea:/.Or simply you can just fix the eye~_~.Wait wait, it's okay on my part...? I've been looking for a reference on the last panel though. I don't know how to fix it because I'm really not used to the angle. On the picture here the reference Oh and I'll try what I can do on what you suggested. I'm still a poorly amateur artist but thank you for the suggestion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Developer ImDaMisterL Posted June 18, 2015 Developer Share Posted June 18, 2015 20 Seconds, alright!1*Wilson starts screaming*2345678920!AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 Wait wait, it's okay on my part...? I've been looking for a reference on the last panel though. I don't know how to fix it because I'm really not used to the angle. On the picture here the reference Oh and I'll try what I can do on what you suggested. I'm still a poorly amateur artist but thank you for the suggestion I was actually fine with the pupil being split due to shininess. Now Wilson looks like a frking zombie mid-resurrection. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theinsanefruitloop Posted June 18, 2015 Author Share Posted June 18, 2015 I was actually fine with the pupil being split due to shininess. Now Wilson looks like a frking zombie mid-resurrection.Come to think of it, he looked like a zombie without the pupils I'll go to your suggestion Mobbstar xD 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaStar23 Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 *cringe* Daaamn... :s 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theinsanefruitloop Posted June 18, 2015 Author Share Posted June 18, 2015 Page 19 Woke up too early today although chores are done and it's 6 am in the morning. *sighs* Wait's 30 minutes to watch the live stream. Oh and also, Webber will meet a firestarter and a robot soon. Althoughhhhh he might be a lil mad because they burn the forest where his spider friends lives *cough* 8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Developer ImDaMisterL Posted June 18, 2015 Developer Share Posted June 18, 2015 WEBBER USED TORCH IT'S SUPER EFFECTIVE! CRITICAL HIT! WILSON FAINTED. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asparagus Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 Sekai @__@... Did you see the Corpse party OVAs? It was... underwhelming... :TThe ending though O__OSatoshi was...(Yay for gore!! ) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derpime Posted June 19, 2015 Share Posted June 19, 2015 Wilson does look like a zombie,indeed,like a zombieAlthough,that is like a great great artist considering that you stated that you are a "poorly"*cough*"amateur" artist*cough*cough.The script done right,the art done right,Chester done right,Skits done right,...My god,that is amazing Speaking of a arsonist,hmmmmm,how about a cute,fat Chester on Fire???With a clueless Wilson and WebberAnd then a robot?Hmmmmmmmm.....No idea,but please,make him as robotic as possible,don't make him half robot and half human,things are gonna get....trippy and weird outCorpse Party,there is 1 Corpse Party game that is considered "Reading Simulator".I like Corpse Party though,very good horror game.Say,when will the team meet winter? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theinsanefruitloop Posted June 19, 2015 Author Share Posted June 19, 2015 I was planning on making an animation of Wilson looking around with a torch on hand but I don't know how to use flash and I don't have a drawing tablet that might help me aha.So anyways. @ImDaMisterL PFfffttt. *insert theme song battle here* @Asparagus YES I LOVE HOW THE SHOW ENDED. Although poor satoshi though. @Derpime Very soon, if nothing goes wrong. Well, All I know robots don't have emotions on them. I will try to see how it will turn out. I'm still writing chapter 4. To be honest, I'm still an ameteur when it comes to comics/manga I'm still learning >v> 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Developer ImDaMisterL Posted June 19, 2015 Developer Share Posted June 19, 2015 Man! I LOVE THIS WILSON ART! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePreChewedTree Posted June 19, 2015 Share Posted June 19, 2015 I hope Skits comes back! 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theinsanefruitloop Posted June 19, 2015 Author Share Posted June 19, 2015 Page 20 Mr. Skits will come back~ Oh he will~ btw, Idea belongs to ImDaMisterL (the chester chasing a butterfly and Webber and him have a really serious talk) 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Developer ImDaMisterL Posted June 19, 2015 Developer Share Posted June 19, 2015 (edited) What Chester said: "Now we just need to have faith, faith in Wilson and in you, you did an amazing job back there and, quite frankly, I am sure you saved Wilson's life."What Webber understood: "pant pant pant pant pant pant pant..." Edited June 19, 2015 by ImDaMisterL 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derpime Posted June 20, 2015 Share Posted June 20, 2015 (edited) Skits and Chester riding to the sunset with a bunch of kittens and dancing happy marshmallows(my imagination is flying away again,have...to..stop.)....So,you hand draw these stuffs or you use computer? Edited June 20, 2015 by Derpime 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asparagus Posted June 20, 2015 Share Posted June 20, 2015 I just realized, Webber seems to have catfish whiskers on his face instead of spider legs O__O(looks good though ) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derpime Posted June 20, 2015 Share Posted June 20, 2015 ASPARAGUS got a point.You need to make it like more edgy(i guess)Make it more crab-like.Those look like kitten's whiskersOff topic question,how many eyes does a spider have?The actually functional eyes 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Developer ImDaMisterL Posted June 20, 2015 Developer Share Posted June 20, 2015 (edited) ASPARAGUS got a point.You need to make it like more edgy(i guess)Make it more crab-like.Those look like kitten's whiskersOff topic question,how many eyes does a spider have?The actually functional eyes Spiders have eight eyes. The two main eyes of a spider each have simple lens, and a retina which is made up of light sensitive cells whose surfaces point toward the light as it enters the eye. *cough* Totally didn't steal some of that from a site with spider facts *cough* Edited June 20, 2015 by ImDaMisterL 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theinsanefruitloop Posted June 20, 2015 Author Share Posted June 20, 2015 Page 21 ImDaMisterL is right. @Asparagus I rend to use cute spider legs to fit Webber to be honest. I'll try to make them like a spider legs I guess.In other news. SUNBURNNNNNNNNNNNN 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derpime Posted June 20, 2015 Share Posted June 20, 2015 (edited) ImDaMisterL:Thanks!Now i can go a teach my biology teacher a lessonSo,Webber now can understand Chester?Nice!Now Webber just need to learn how to sew without the sewing kit(he is a spider after all).And then he can be a stay home dadHeyyyyy.Second panel,there ya go,those are spider legs now.And what do you mean by SSSSUUUUUNNNNNBBBBUUURRRRNNNN,summer is incoming? Edited June 20, 2015 by Derpime Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Developer ImDaMisterL Posted June 20, 2015 Developer Share Posted June 20, 2015 Nice!Now Webber just need to learn how to sew without the sewing kit(he is a spider after all).And then he can be a stay home dadAnd what do you mean by SSSSUUUUUNNNNNBBBBUUURRRRNNNN,summer is incoming?Wait! CHESTER'S A DAD? BU HE 2 YUNG!!!!Also, be ready, *GoT moment* Summer is coming! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derpime Posted June 20, 2015 Share Posted June 20, 2015 (edited) Nooooo no no no,i mean webberBrace YourselfDragonfly is incoming Edited June 21, 2015 by Derpime Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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