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Kate's eyes widened as Trevor recklessly ran out into the darkness. "Tre-!!!" Her attempt to call out to him was cut short from a twinge of agony as she tried to get up. She fell back over onto her side and curled up again.Ā "Kate, don't move, you'llĀ just hurt yourself. Trevor will be okay."Ā Her brother tried to reassure her, but it didn't help.

Edited by MenaAthena

Trevor couldn't see a thing besides the roaring fire behind him. He wentĀ in the direction he remembered the pole was and found the following things: Sand, more sand, and a very loud noise that startled him. He tried to hide in his coat, which would of been a pretty successful plan if his left leg fit in his hiding place. This was then the time Trevor hoped that the white whale wasn't actually floating around in the darkness. This was because of his family history of the white whale "removing" AhabĀ left legs.Ā 

(Chris! The decision maker!)

Edited by Youknowwho

(You forgot to open your bracket.

Also, think about her situation; She's been on an island, with a hinted threat, alone, and a bunch of people, including a dog (which she hates) and she keeps on getting woken up. She's annoyed, the wound doesn't seem that bad, and people are being insanely retarded and running into the dark)

(I'd be angry too)

"By the maidens..."

Julian picked up a torch, lit it in the fire, and stepped out of the firelight, following his footsteps.

"I swear to the maidens, that if these people keep blindly leaving the firelight, I'm leaving the goddamn island!"

(Well he'sĀ not blindly leaving the firelight...he has his phone torch :p)

Jaw, who got woken up by Julian's shout, growls a bit, thinking something dangerous was going on. But realising it was a false alarm he goes back to sleep

Edited by DwerBomb

(I have a question.

How did Julia know about the threat in the darkness? Because by the way she talked when Kate got injured by it it sounded like she knew something was in there and expected Kate to know it too. Did she get hit by it? Did she see others get killed by it?

Also, Dwer, Famen is the only one with a phone light. Trevor doesn't have one; thus he did run into the darkness blindly.)

"What? I don't..."

The truth dawned on her.

"A fishing rod? Why the hell did you risk your life for a FISHING ROD!?"

She threw the torch on the ground, and placed a fallen leaf over it, which quickly lit.

"Answers.Ā Now."

(Do you like my new sig/profile pic?)

Edited by Dannyrulx

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