NightWonder7 Posted November 14, 2016 Author Share Posted November 14, 2016 7 minutes ago, Net Spectre said: Really? Oh, that's quite strange. Thank you for the offer, dear, but you know the nature of these beasts... nothing can quell their wrath... Oh. Oh no! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fruerte Posted November 14, 2016 Share Posted November 14, 2016 Just now, NightWonder7 said: Oh. Oh no! Ash is seeping through my fingers Painting all in white and grey Sticky malice clings and lingers Rage and hate won’t go away Crimson tears are flowing down Dried red coats my arms like gloves Voices mumble, sneer and growl Drowning fear, shame and remorse Red eyes shielded by white hair I slice until I’m out of breath Cursed knife sweeps through the air Singing hymns of pain and death Watch in horror, watch in shock You can’t help me, you’re too late Let me kill and run amok Lost in the murderous, wonderful state Of Hysteria! Oops I did it again 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arlesienne Posted November 14, 2016 Share Posted November 14, 2016 10 minutes ago, Net Spectre said: Ash is seeping through my fingers Painting all in white and grey Sticky malice clings and lingers Rage and hate won’t go away Crimson tears are flowing down Dried red coats my arms like gloves Voices mumble, sneer and growl Drowning fear, shame and remorse Red eyes shielded by white hair I slice until I’m out of breath Cursed knife sweeps through the air Singing hymns of pain and death Watch in horror, watch in shock You can’t help me, you’re too late Let me kill and run amok Lost in the murderous, wonderful state Of Hysteria! Oops I did it again Nice meter. Would you mind me performing scansion on it, with some rhythmical suggestions? In your own thread, maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightWonder7 Posted November 14, 2016 Author Share Posted November 14, 2016 18 minutes ago, Net Spectre said: Ash is seeping through my fingers Painting all in white and grey Sticky malice clings and lingers Rage and hate won’t go away Crimson tears are flowing down Dried red coats my arms like gloves Voices mumble, sneer and growl Drowning fear, shame and remorse Red eyes shielded by white hair I slice until I’m out of breath Cursed knife sweeps through the air Singing hymns of pain and death Watch in horror, watch in shock You can’t help me, you’re too late Let me kill and run amok Lost in the murderous, wonderful state Of Hysteria! Oops I did it again Marvelous!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fruerte Posted November 14, 2016 Share Posted November 14, 2016 (edited) Just now, Arlesienne said: Nice meter. Would you mind me performing scansion on it, with some rhythmical suggestions? In your own thread, maybe? You really wish to do this for my amateurish mad ramblings? (I just write what "feels right" and don't bother with proper... terms, or structure, or whatever...) Oh, I'll be most honoured. I classify my poems as chaotic bouts of insanity that just happen, not really worthy of their own thread... through PMs, maybe? Just now, NightWonder7 said: Marvelous!!! Remember, you did this to meee... *cough* I mean, thanks. Edited November 14, 2016 by Net Spectre 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arlesienne Posted November 14, 2016 Share Posted November 14, 2016 1 hour ago, Net Spectre said: You really wish to do this for my amateurish mad ramblings? (I just write what "feels right" and don't bother with proper... terms, or structure, or whatever...) Oh, I'll be most honoured. I classify my poems as chaotic bouts of insanity that just happen, not really worthy of their own thread... through PMs, maybe? Remember, you did this to meee... *cough* I mean, thanks. Of course I do! I would not be asking if you have a thread if I didn't have this prickling impression you possess a spark you don't believe in. We learn the system to enjoy writing even more. It's something deserving to be shared! My inbox here is a mess at the moment, I store several big game-related projects in there, but I have Steam, Discord, Origin, DA... 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fruerte Posted November 14, 2016 Share Posted November 14, 2016 (edited) Just now, Arlesienne said: Of course I do! I would not be asking if you have a thread if I didn't have this prickling impression you possess a spark you don't believe in. We learn the system to enjoy writing even more. It's something deserving to be shared! My inbox here is a mess at the moment, I store several big game-related projects in there, but I have Steam, Discord, Origin, DA... Well... I do have Discord (it's barren as heck though, because I'm friendless), so we can go with this option. I've same name and face there. Edited November 14, 2016 by Net Spectre 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightWonder7 Posted November 15, 2016 Author Share Posted November 15, 2016 (edited) Wilson! What have you done?! Edited November 15, 2016 by NightWonder7 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted November 15, 2016 Share Posted November 15, 2016 The way Wilson has his eyes wide open in those two panels looks like he painted his eyes so he could fool people that he's awake. Not your intention, just something that ran past my mind while reading and the infuriated expression from Alice. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightWonder7 Posted November 15, 2016 Author Share Posted November 15, 2016 1 minute ago, minespatch said: The way Wilson has his eyes wide open in those two panels looks like he painted his eyes so he could fool people that he's awake. Not your intention, just something that ran past my mind while reading and the infuriated expression from Alice. It was a long, boring lecture XD 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted November 15, 2016 Share Posted November 15, 2016 Why are the strips so big? 0_0 Still good, non the less though. 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fruerte Posted November 15, 2016 Share Posted November 15, 2016 1 hour ago, NightWonder7 said: It was a long, boring lecture XD Oh no... This is even worse than geology... 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightWonder7 Posted November 15, 2016 Author Share Posted November 15, 2016 44 minutes ago, DragonMage156 said: Why are the strips so big? 0_0 Still good, non the less though. Hm, yeah, I will need to shrink them. I shall fix this eventually! Thank you! OwO 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PiturcaClaudiuStef Posted November 15, 2016 Share Posted November 15, 2016 6 hours ago, NightWonder7 said: It was a long, boring lecture XD well it's not like he's got something else better to do anyway jk xD anyway nice comic 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted November 15, 2016 Share Posted November 15, 2016 6 hours ago, NightWonder7 said: Hm, yeah, I will need to shrink them. I shall fix this eventually! Thanks, I have to ctrl+- to get them to shrink down so again, thanks so much for taking Mage's advice. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightWonder7 Posted November 15, 2016 Author Share Posted November 15, 2016 8 hours ago, DragonMage156 said: Why are the strips so big? 0_0 Still good, non the less though. 52 minutes ago, minespatch said: Thanks, I have to ctrl+- to get them to shrink down so again, thanks so much for taking Mage's advice. Alright, I think they're fixed now ^^ sorry for the inconvenience ^^; Let me know if there is anything else ; ) 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted November 15, 2016 Share Posted November 15, 2016 3 hours ago, NightWonder7 said: Alright, I think they're fixed now ^^ sorry for the inconvenience ^^; Let me know if there is anything else ; ) Thanks. That's much easier to read ^_^ 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightWonder7 Posted November 16, 2016 Author Share Posted November 16, 2016 (edited) What? Wouldn't you be supportive too? ',: ) And who said you could snoop around in my fridge whenever it suits you?! Edited November 16, 2016 by NightWonder7 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted November 16, 2016 Share Posted November 16, 2016 Wonder's fascinated with the nitpicky carnage~ 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arlesienne Posted November 16, 2016 Share Posted November 16, 2016 1 hour ago, NightWonder7 said: What? Wouldn't you be supportive too? ',: ) And who said you could snoop around in my fridge whenever it suits you?! Next chapter: Wilson gets ghostbusted and proceeds to turn all flowers in the household into the evil counterparts. Also, wet goop. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted November 16, 2016 Share Posted November 16, 2016 2 minutes ago, Arlesienne said: Wilson gets ghostbusted Time to hitch up those protopacks. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arlesienne Posted November 16, 2016 Share Posted November 16, 2016 Just now, minespatch said: Time to hitch up those protopacks. Exactly! I haven't played AMR myself, but I have a working knowledge of the genre and lore. This is not what Wilson could enjoy. (Also, I'm still waiting to see Alice and Willow bonding over the desire to rub some of his recent smugness in his face .) 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted November 16, 2016 Share Posted November 16, 2016 Panel 6: Guys! Please stop fighting! Panel 8: Oh nevermind, continue. I love that! XD 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightWonder7 Posted November 16, 2016 Author Share Posted November 16, 2016 1 hour ago, Arlesienne said: Exactly! I haven't played AMR myself, but I have a working knowledge of the genre and lore. This is not what Wilson could enjoy. (Also, I'm still waiting to see Alice and Willow bonding over the desire to rub some of his recent smugness in his face .) Don't worry: I'll make sure he'll "enjoy" his treatment 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arlesienne Posted November 16, 2016 Share Posted November 16, 2016 Just now, NightWonder7 said: Don't worry: I'll make sure he'll "enjoy" his treatment That sounded... Um. @MeingroessterFan? Real-life vocabulary support please? 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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