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Here's mine.

Wilson @

-Willow....."She looks hot, fever maybe?"

-Wolfgang....."Brawn no Brain"

-Wendy....."Looks as If she's seen a ghost"

-WX-78....."Always wondered where it went"

-Wickerbottom....."What a wrinkly old know it all"

-Woodie....."He would be more useful to me transformed"

-Woodie Werebeaver....."One possible cause of increased CO2 emmisions"

-Wes....."How weird"

-Maxwell....."We meet again"

-Webber....."Could he be?"

-Wigfrid....."Great, another primitive hooligan"

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Here's mine.

Wilson @

-Willow....."She looks hot, fever maybe?"

-Wolfgang....."Brawn no Brain"

-Wendy....."Looks as If she's seen a ghost"

-WX-78....."Always wondered where it went"

-Wickerbottom....."What a wrinkly old know it all"

-Woodie....."He would be more useful to me transformed"

-Woodie Werebeaver....."One possible cause of increased CO2 emmisions"

-Wes....."How weird"

-Maxwell....."We meet again"

-Webber....."Could he be?"

-Wigfrid....."Great, another primitive hooligan"

Looks good. Btw you didn't have to close the previous thread or apologize for it, just this one is still fairly recent and it just seemed a tad redundant to me. If this thread was over a month old I would encourage a newer thread to avoid necroing this one but providing a link to it so people can take a look at the older submissions if they choose to. 

 

Anyway, back on topic, the quotes look quite good overall and I hadn't thought of examining Woodie in his werebeaver form :)

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Took from J20hawk's thread. This is my version!

 

Wilson @
-Willow....."What a fiesty lady. No wonder her clothes don't burn off."
-Wolfgang....."Do you even lift?"
-Wendy....."I don't want to come play with you."
-WX-78....."It is alive! It is alive!"
-Wickerbottom....."Can I borrow your book?"
-Woodie....."Nice beard."
-Woodie Werebeaver....."Nice stache."
-Wes....."..Why are you following me?"
-Maxwell....."Long time no see."
-Webber....."I have the best beard, and you know it."
-Wigfrid....."Don't touch me please."

 

Maxwell @

-Wilson....."How's the science going, pal?"

-Willow....."Stay away from my book."

-Wolfgang....."His muscle growth still disturbs me."

-Wendy....."Are you having fun with your sister?"
-WX-78....."You're still functioning fine."
-Wickerbottom....."We're on the same page."
-Woodie....."Tell Lucy I said hi."
-Woodie Werebeaver....."It's not that terrible."
-Wes....."I'm surprised you're still alive."
-Webber....."You okay in there?"
-Wigfrid....."We're on the same stage.."

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Maxwell to Wendy - "Odd I remember her somehow..."

 

I'm going to be the grammar Nazi here; you should really add some punctuation between "Odd" and "I", such as a semi-colon (joins two related statements, as I did there! ;) ) or a hyphen (indicates linkage, creates a pause for the reader).

You could also go for an ellipsis (...) to create a pause or indicate a trail of thought.

 

If you don't like punctuation, you could use an adverb instead of a (wrongly utilised) adjective: "Oddly, I remember her somehow..."

 

With that being said, I do like the ideas :D <3

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I'm going to be the grammar Nazi here; you should really add some punctuation between "Odd" and "I", such as a semi-colon (joins two related statements, as I did there! ;) ) or a hyphen (indicates linkage, creates a pause for the reader).

You could also go for an ellipsis (...) to create a pause or indicate a trail of thought.

 

If you don't like punctuation, you could use an adverb instead of a (wrongly utilised) adjective: "Oddly, I remember her somehow..."

 

With that being said, I do like the ideas :grin: <3

Or it could be "Jack told me about her and that ghost being twins."

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I'd love some dialog between Wilson, Wendy, and Abigail.

 

Wilson (upon examining Abigail): That offends me as a scientist...

 

Wendy: I didn't know being a scientist made you ignorant

 

Okay those lines suck but you get the point.

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Ooh, I did one of these on the steam forums. Hang on, I'll copy my examples over...

Wilson
-Willow "I think I smell smoke..."
-Wolfgang "I think I saw him on a circus poster...."
-Wendy "Is she talking to herself?"
-WX7eight "He doesn't look like a chess piece..."
-Wicker8ottom "Such fickleness never got anyone anywhere"
-Woodie "What a magnificent 8eard!"
-Woodie were8ever "He's going to have a hell of a hangover..."
-Wes "He's too quite, this one..."
-Maxwell "I hope he'll give me more knowledge..."
-We88er "You really did it this time, Maxy... "
-Wigfrid "Perhaps the pig people are evolving..."

Willow
-Wilson "Ew, he smells of dead 8irds"
-Wolfgang "I wonder if muscle is flama8le?"
-Wendy "She's so cold..."
-WX7eight "The temptation is almost overwhelming..."
-Wicker8ottom "I wonder if she has any kindli- I mean 8ooks I could 8orrow"
-Woodie "He smells like the trees... I hate the trees..."
-Woodie were8ever "NO! STOP EATING THE FUEL!"
-Wes "This guys up to something, I know it..."
-Maxwell "I wonder if he'd mind me "8orrowing" his lighter for just a 8it little longer..."
-We88er "GOOD GODS, KILL IT WITH FIRE!"
-Wigfrid "She's too loud..."

Wolfgang
-Wilson "Hah! hair is so messy!"
-Willow "She is so tiny! Is funny to me"
-Wendy "She is keeping staring at me..."
-WX7eight "I am not sure how I feel a8out... ro8ots..."
-Wicker8ottom "pfft, 8ooks will not make you strong!"
-Woodie "I am not sure how I feel a8out... democracy..."
-Woodie were8eaver "Is not muscle! Is fur! You cheat!"
-Wes "I do not like clowns..."
-Maxwell "I wonder if he will give me more muscle?"
-We88er "ARGH! IS THING OF NIGHTMARES!"
-Wigfrid "I wonder if she likes arm wrestling?"

Wendy
-Wilson "How many has he killed for the 8enefit of "science"?"
-Willow "Fire only 8rings destruction, destruction only 8rings death"
-Wolfgang "I wonder if strength follows you into the afterlife?"
-WX7eight "Ro8ots aren't alive, they only pretend to 8e alive..."
-Wicker8ottom "She practically already is a ghost..."
-Woodie "What is he doing here?"
-Woodie were8eaver "Its all fun and trees till "someone" gets cursed..."
-Wes "He's too quiet... I don't trust him"
-Maxwell "May8e this time he'll let me see my mother again..."
-We88er "ACK! THE HORROR!"
-Wigfrid "Does she even think a8out all the things she's killed?"

WX7eight
-Wison "DADDY?"
-Willow "THE PRODUCTION LINE WARNED ME A8OUT PEOPLE LIKE HER"
-Wolfgang "ESTIMATES DETERMINE THIS MAN IS IRRATIONAL AND UNPREDICTA8LE"
-Wendy "DO HUMANS DREAM?"
-Wicker8ottom "THE HUMAN LIFESPAN IS PITIFUL"
-Woodie "TESTS DETERMINE THE "8EARD" IS ARTIFICIAL."
-Woodie were8eaver "IS THIS THE HUMAN EQUIVALENT OF AN "UPGRADE"?"
-Wes "THIS CREATURE IS NOT TO 8E TRUSTED"
-Maxwell "PERHAPS HE WILL TEACH ME HOW TO LIVE, AGAIN"
-We88er "IT MUST 8E EXTERMINATED!"
-Wigfrid "TESTS DETERMINE CARNIVORE-- PROCEED WITH CAUTION"

Wicker8ottom
-Wison "An uncouth gentleman with untidy hair"
-Willow "A ruffian schoolgirl with a smoking pro8lem"
-Wolfgang "A preposterous oaf who values 8rawn over 8rains, pitiful"
-Wendy "A young lady with a dark side "
-WX7eight "An automaton who insists on shouting"
-Woodie "A hairy lum8erjack who talks to his axe"
-Woodie were8eaver "Fool, have you no acumen? "
-Wes "A suspicious individual"
-Maxwell "Perhaps now is a good time to ask if he has any more 8ooks I can pu8lish for him..."
-We88er "I DESPISE CHILDREN JUST AS MUCH AS I DESPISE SPIDERS! GET IT OUT!"
-Wigfrid "An aging individual with a taste for dress-up"

Woodie
-Wilson "A rookie in the eyes of the 8eard world..."
-Willow "Lucy doesn't like that one..."
-Wolfgang "Pfft... what a pathetic mustache"
-Wendy "Wait, what is she doing here?"
-WX7eight "I think Lucy might need to 8e "personally introduced" to this one..."
-Wicker8ottom "Lucy is actually an avid reader, I wonder if she does autographs?"
-Wes "Lucy tells me I don't want anything to do with this guy..."
-Maxwell "May8e this time I should ask if I can 8ring my daughter 8ack..."
-We88er "LUCY WARNED ME A8OUT CREATURES LIKE YOU!"
-Wigfrid "Axe 8eats spear, idiot. Weapons triangle."

Wes
-Wison "*Puts 8oth hands on head to sym8olise hair"
-Willow "Does a little prance"
-Wolfgang "*Flexes muscles*"
-Wendy "*Makes a "peeka-8oo" Gesture*"
-WX7eight "*Does "the ro8ot" dance*"
-Wicker8ottom "*Waggles finger with a stern look, as if lecturing someone*"
-Woodie "*mimics cutting down a tree with an axe*"
-Woodie were8eaver "*Poses like the were8eaver*"
-Maxwell "*Cowers*"
-We88er "*Does the "incey wincey spider" mime*"
-Wigfrid "*Mimes roaring and shakes imaginary spear*"

Maxwell
-Wilson "*I think this one wanted knowledge..."
-Willow "This one wanted to 8urn things..."
-Wolfgang "This one wanted to 8e stronger..."
-Wendy "This one wanted to see her sister..."
-WX7eight "This one wanted to live..."
-Wicker8ottom "This one wanted inspiration..."
-Woodie "This one wanted to hear his wife again..."
-Woodie were8eaver "This... Ok, this one wasn't my fault..."
-Wes "This one just really peeved me off..."
-We88er "This one only wanted a friend..."
-Wigfrid "This one was tired of 8eing a vegetarian..."

Maxwell
-Wilson "*I think this one wanted knowledge..."
-Willow "This one wanted to 8urn things..."
-Wolfgang "This one wanted to 8e stronger..."
-Wendy "This one wanted to see her sister..."
-WX7eight "This one wanted to live..."
-Wicker8ottom "This one wanted inspiration..."
-Woodie "This one wanted to hear his wife again..."
-Woodie were8eaver "This... Ok, this one wasn't my fault..."
-Wes "This one just really peeved me off..."
-We88er "This one only wanted a friend..."
-Wigfrid "This one was tired of 8eing a vegetarian..."

We88er
-Wilson "*Ooh, a scientist! I wonder if he likes ara-chi-nades?*"
-Willow "A Girl! We didn't have many girls in our school..."
-Wolfgang "Wow! A strongman! Just like in the circus!"
-Wendy "Huh? Why is she so sad? May8e we can cheer her up!"
-WX7eight "Cool! a ro8ot! can ro8ots 8e friends?"
-Wicker8ottom "An "Old" person! ... meh"
-Woodie "Woah! Look at his axe!"
-Woodie were8eaver "aw, its a 8eaver! Its so cute!"
-Wes "... Even I don't want to 8e friends with this guy"
-Maxwell "Oh, its him again! I wonder if he'll make me even more friends?"
-Wigfrid "Is she playing dress up? I WANNA PLAY"

Wigfrid
-Wilson "*Hardly a söldier, perhaps a döctör?*"
-Willow "The 8attlegröund is hardley a place for a child!"
-Wolfgang "A wörthy challenger!"
-Wendy "We can möurn when the hunt is över!"
-WX7eight "Hmm... Döes he qualify as "fööd"?"
-Wicker8ottom "8ah, the öld are too chewy for my taistes"
-Woodie "A fine öppönent!"
-Woodie were8eaver "The hunt is ön!"
-Wes "... Even I wouldn't eat this guy"
-We88er "8LööD AND THUNDER! CREATURES LIKE THESE WERE 8ORN TO DIE"
-Maxwell "Yöu! Give me möre tö hunt!"

 

 

Sorry a8out the lack of formatting...I'm new to the DS forums, and not sure how to use the various functions like "Spoilers", etc.

._.;


Ooh, I did one of these on the steam forums. Hang on, I'll copy my examples over...

Wilson
-Willow "I think I smell smoke..."
-Wolfgang "I think I saw him on a circus poster...."
-Wendy "Is she talking to herself?"
-WX7eight "He doesn't look like a chess piece..."
-Wicker8ottom "Such fickleness never got anyone anywhere"
-Woodie "What a magnificent 8eard!"
-Woodie were8ever "He's going to have a hell of a hangover..."
-Wes "He's too quite, this one..."
-Maxwell "I hope he'll give me more knowledge..."
-We88er "You really did it this time, Maxy... "
-Wigfrid "Perhaps the pig people are evolving..."

Willow
-Wilson "Ew, he smells of dead 8irds"
-Wolfgang "I wonder if muscle is flama8le?"
-Wendy "She's so cold..."
-WX7eight "The temptation is almost overwhelming..."
-Wicker8ottom "I wonder if she has any kindli- I mean 8ooks I could 8orrow"
-Woodie "He smells like the trees... I hate the trees..."
-Woodie were8ever "NO! STOP EATING THE FUEL!"
-Wes "This guys up to something, I know it..."
-Maxwell "I wonder if he'd mind me "8orrowing" his lighter for just a 8it little longer..."
-We88er "GOOD GODS, KILL IT WITH FIRE!"
-Wigfrid "She's too loud..."

Wolfgang
-Wilson "Hah! hair is so messy!"
-Willow "She is so tiny! Is funny to me"
-Wendy "She is keeping staring at me..."
-WX7eight "I am not sure how I feel a8out... ro8ots..."
-Wicker8ottom "pfft, 8ooks will not make you strong!"
-Woodie "I am not sure how I feel a8out... democracy..."
-Woodie were8eaver "Is not muscle! Is fur! You cheat!"
-Wes "I do not like clowns..."
-Maxwell "I wonder if he will give me more muscle?"
-We88er "ARGH! IS THING OF NIGHTMARES!"
-Wigfrid "I wonder if she likes arm wrestling?"

Wendy
-Wilson "How many has he killed for the 8enefit of "science"?"
-Willow "Fire only 8rings destruction, destruction only 8rings death"
-Wolfgang "I wonder if strength follows you into the afterlife?"
-WX7eight "Ro8ots aren't alive, they only pretend to 8e alive..."
-Wicker8ottom "She practically already is a ghost..."
-Woodie "What is he doing here?"
-Woodie were8eaver "Its all fun and trees till "someone" gets cursed..."
-Wes "He's too quiet... I don't trust him"
-Maxwell "May8e this time he'll let me see my mother again..."
-We88er "ACK! THE HORROR!"
-Wigfrid "Does she even think a8out all the things she's killed?"

WX7eight
-Wison "DADDY?"
-Willow "THE PRODUCTION LINE WARNED ME A8OUT PEOPLE LIKE HER"
-Wolfgang "ESTIMATES DETERMINE THIS MAN IS IRRATIONAL AND UNPREDICTA8LE"
-Wendy "DO HUMANS DREAM?"
-Wicker8ottom "THE HUMAN LIFESPAN IS PITIFUL"
-Woodie "TESTS DETERMINE THE "8EARD" IS ARTIFICIAL."
-Woodie were8eaver "IS THIS THE HUMAN EQUIVALENT OF AN "UPGRADE"?"
-Wes "THIS CREATURE IS NOT TO 8E TRUSTED"
-Maxwell "PERHAPS HE WILL TEACH ME HOW TO LIVE, AGAIN"
-We88er "IT MUST 8E EXTERMINATED!"
-Wigfrid "TESTS DETERMINE CARNIVORE-- PROCEED WITH CAUTION"

Wicker8ottom
-Wison "An uncouth gentleman with untidy hair"
-Willow "A ruffian schoolgirl with a smoking pro8lem"
-Wolfgang "A preposterous oaf who values 8rawn over 8rains, pitiful"
-Wendy "A young lady with a dark side "
-WX7eight "An automaton who insists on shouting"
-Woodie "A hairy lum8erjack who talks to his axe"
-Woodie were8eaver "Fool, have you no acumen? "
-Wes "A suspicious individual"
-Maxwell "Perhaps now is a good time to ask if he has any more 8ooks I can pu8lish for him..."
-We88er "I DESPISE CHILDREN JUST AS MUCH AS I DESPISE SPIDERS! GET IT OUT!"
-Wigfrid "An aging individual with a taste for dress-up"

Woodie
-Wilson "A rookie in the eyes of the 8eard world..."
-Willow "Lucy doesn't like that one..."
-Wolfgang "Pfft... what a pathetic mustache"
-Wendy "Wait, what is she doing here?"
-WX7eight "I think Lucy might need to 8e "personally introduced" to this one..."
-Wicker8ottom "Lucy is actually an avid reader, I wonder if she does autographs?"
-Wes "Lucy tells me I don't want anything to do with this guy..."
-Maxwell "May8e this time I should ask if I can 8ring my daughter 8ack..."
-We88er "LUCY WARNED ME A8OUT CREATURES LIKE YOU!"
-Wigfrid "Axe 8eats spear, idiot. Weapons triangle."

Wes
-Wison "*Puts 8oth hands on head to sym8olise hair"
-Willow "Does a little prance"
-Wolfgang "*Flexes muscles*"
-Wendy "*Makes a "peeka-8oo" Gesture*"
-WX7eight "*Does "the ro8ot" dance*"
-Wicker8ottom "*Waggles finger with a stern look, as if lecturing someone*"
-Woodie "*mimics cutting down a tree with an axe*"
-Woodie were8eaver "*Poses like the were8eaver*"
-Maxwell "*Cowers*"
-We88er "*Does the "incey wincey spider" mime*"
-Wigfrid "*Mimes roaring and shakes imaginary spear*"

Maxwell
-Wilson "*I think this one wanted knowledge..."
-Willow "This one wanted to 8urn things..."
-Wolfgang "This one wanted to 8e stronger..."
-Wendy "This one wanted to see her sister..."
-WX7eight "This one wanted to live..."
-Wicker8ottom "This one wanted inspiration..."
-Woodie "This one wanted to hear his wife again..."
-Woodie were8eaver "This... Ok, this one wasn't my fault..."
-Wes "This one just really peeved me off..."
-We88er "This one only wanted a friend..."
-Wigfrid "This one was tired of 8eing a vegetarian..."

Maxwell
-Wilson "*I think this one wanted knowledge..."
-Willow "This one wanted to 8urn things..."
-Wolfgang "This one wanted to 8e stronger..."
-Wendy "This one wanted to see her sister..."
-WX7eight "This one wanted to live..."
-Wicker8ottom "This one wanted inspiration..."
-Woodie "This one wanted to hear his wife again..."
-Woodie were8eaver "This... Ok, this one wasn't my fault..."
-Wes "This one just really peeved me off..."
-We88er "This one only wanted a friend..."
-Wigfrid "This one was tired of 8eing a vegetarian..."

We88er
-Wilson "*Ooh, a scientist! I wonder if he likes ara-chi-nades?*"
-Willow "A Girl! We didn't have many girls in our school..."
-Wolfgang "Wow! A strongman! Just like in the circus!"
-Wendy "Huh? Why is she so sad? May8e we can cheer her up!"
-WX7eight "Cool! a ro8ot! can ro8ots 8e friends?"
-Wicker8ottom "An "Old" person! ... meh"
-Woodie "Woah! Look at his axe!"
-Woodie were8eaver "aw, its a 8eaver! Its so cute!"
-Wes "... Even I don't want to 8e friends with this guy"
-Maxwell "Oh, its him again! I wonder if he'll make me even more friends?"
-Wigfrid "Is she playing dress up? I WANNA PLAY"

Wigfrid
-Wilson "*Hardly a söldier, perhaps a döctör?*"
-Willow "The 8attlegröund is hardley a place for a child!"
-Wolfgang "A wörthy challenger!"
-Wendy "We can möurn when the hunt is över!"
-WX7eight "Hmm... Döes he qualify as "fööd"?"
-Wicker8ottom "8ah, the öld are too chewy for my taistes"
-Woodie "A fine öppönent!"
-Woodie were8eaver "The hunt is ön!"
-Wes "... Even I wouldn't eat this guy"
-We88er "8LööD AND THUNDER! CREATURES LIKE THESE WERE 8ORN TO DIE"
-Maxwell "Yöu! Give me möre tö hunt!"

 

 

Sorry a8out the lack of formatting...I'm new to the DS forums, and not sure how to use the various functions like "Spoilers", etc.

._.;

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they're 2 strings for maxwell...(and the all are *2)

 

Let's start mine!

 

Wilson:

 

willow:"Her lighter isn't real!"

wolgang:"Eating can't give those muscles...it's scientific"

wendy:"She has lost her twin...perhaps i can help her..."

WX8:"Could i built this?"

wickerbottom:"Perhaps she have some books, for science!"

woodie:"He's mad, talking to an axe..."

woodie/b:"It can be me, the madman..."

wes:"Make me again the cycle mime... i try to understand..."

waxwell:"He gets in a lots of pain....Awfull ragtime!"

webber:"Is this even possible?"

wigfried:"Meh, brainless."

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Wigfrid

-WX7eight "Hmm... Döes he qualify as "fööd"?"

-Wicker8ottom "8ah, the öld are too chewy for my taistes"

-Wes "... Even I wouldn't eat this guy"

 

Sorry, but I don't think Wigifrid eats other people.

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I'm still working on mine but here is some my ideas.

 

Wilson quotes:

 

Willow - You need to chill out.

Wolfgang - He's not very bright.

Wendy -

WX-78 - I wonder how it functions.

Wickerbottom -

Woodie -

Woodie (werebeaver) - Note to self, stay on his good side.

Maxwell - I still hate that guy.

Wes -

Wigfrid -

Webber - I kinda feel sorry for him.

 

Wickerbottom quotes:

 

Wilson -

Willow- She has symptoms common with Pyromania.

Wolfgang -

Wendy -

WX-78 - An android with a lack of empathy.

Woodie - His obsession with wood maybe a sign of Kastothropy.

Woodie (werebeaver) - It's clear that he suffers from Kastothropy. (kástoras is greek for beever)

Maxwell -

Wes -

Wigfrid -

Webber -

 

Webber:

 

Wilson - He's really nice to us.

Willow -

Wolfgang -

Wendy -

WX-78 - Yay! we have a robot friend.

Wickerbottom -

Woodie -

Woodie (werebeaver) -

Maxwell -

Wes - We prefer clowns.

Wigfrid - Why isn't she fat? (Reference to the quote "It ain't over till the fat lady sings.")

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Sorry for asking a noo8ie question, 8ut is there anyway to edit posts once they have 8een posted? I can't help 8ut feel my "Huge 8lack wall of text" is more annoying than constructive, is there any way to change it 8esides deleting and retyping? Sorry for having to ask, I'm just a 8it out of my comfort zone, as I'm used to using the steam forums x.x

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