PsiKid Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 This seems like it'll be an interesting thing, especially once it becomes fully fleshed out with all the unfortunate souls revealed. The only thing I'm wondering is how you'll 'group' the characters you'll have in the story. Will you keep them separated until the confrontation against Maxwell or will you allow them to find each other? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted March 3, 2014 Author Share Posted March 3, 2014 This seems like it'll be an interesting thing, especially once it becomes fully fleshed out with all the unfortunate souls revealed. The only thing I'm wondering is how you'll 'group' the characters you'll have in the story. Will you keep them separated until the confrontation against Maxwell or will you allow them to find each other?I have absolutely no idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Percival Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 I have absolutely no idea. I have lost all faith in Hell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted March 3, 2014 Author Share Posted March 3, 2014 I have lost all faith in Hell.What, you expect me to think things through before I do them? PFAHAHAHAHAHHHAHHA! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 Can you release a list of the people you plan to incorporate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoneyHam Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 Yeah, you haven't really told people if they're accepted or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DwerBomb Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 (edited) Yeah, you haven't really told people if they're accepted or not.That would ruin the fun of surprise Edited March 3, 2014 by DwerBomb 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PsiKid Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 That would ruin the fun of surprise Surprises are nice, until they try disemboweling you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TRENTOMINOUS Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 Surprises are nice, until they try disemboweling you...Unless you have no bowels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted March 4, 2014 Author Share Posted March 4, 2014 (edited) Segment 7"Nobody Likes Times New Roman Anyways" The small rabbit gnawed at the grass cautiously, taking looks around him at regular intervals. It knew the dangers of feeding this close to THE FACTORY, but everywhere else the grass has been chewed to the ground. The rabbit, like all small animals in the area, knew about the dangers that THE FACTORY held. He had seen the horrors that came out of that place, seen his friends horribly mutilated by the terror that lurked within. Once you were within the clutches of the one who dwelled within THE FACTORY...there was no escape. The dining rabbit was oblivious to a small, pale figure creeping up behind it. It had a vaguely humanoid shape, with round, glinting shapes in place of its eyes. A long, thin needle was clasped in one hand, a drop of crimson still hanging on it. In the other, it held a spool of black thread. The creature stepped out of the shadows cast by THE FACTORY, and then, the rabbit saw him. It made a frightened sound, but the humanoid shape moved with lightning speed, wrapping a bit of thread around the rabbits neck. With surprising strength, it dragged the unfortunate animal into a drainage pipe, and into the depths of THE FACTORY. The next day, the rabbit hopped out of the drainage pipe, relatively unharmed. It went back to chewing grass, right where it had been already. There was, however, one difference about the animal, one that sent chills down the spine of whoever saw it there on out. In place of its eyes, there were two round, glinting shapes. They were buttons. @ the Sentient Voodoo had been living in the Smielderfell Button Factory for as long as he could remember. The abandoned workplace had plenty of buttons and needles with which to pursue his craft, which was mainly sewing buttons into things and mutilating already dead hamsters. (The place was infested with them, for reasons nobody to this day knows.) Pecival made his home high in the rafters, and had a somewhat substantial living quarters in a gap between the wall and an ancient vent. Being (technically) a doll, he required little comforts and so the space was sparsely decorated, with only a makeshift bed, a small desk and a few pieces of colored yarn lying around. One day, Pecival began to feel extremely tired. Not having the same qualms with sleeping as Battal had, he had a rest. And...well, use your imagination. Edited March 4, 2014 by Lord_Battal 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blewcheese Posted March 4, 2014 Share Posted March 4, 2014 And another forumer joins the party! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Percival Posted March 4, 2014 Share Posted March 4, 2014 (edited) I shall write about what I think of while I dream, if you don't mind.And I'm a homunculus. Research next time.Floating gently, falling through memories that aren't mine. A mere imitation of human life, I have the deepest wish to be introduced to reality.An outcast by normal society, I simply created my own world where I fit. Now, in this world, everyone wants to be friends. Everyone loves me. Everyone puts me in their highest honor.And if they don't, they die.After all, toys are meant to be played with until they break. When my friends break, I simply make more.Friends are easily replaceable, don't you think?And yet, they talk behind my back, unaware of all the 'eyes' I keep hanging around. At least I have spare parts.Sigh.Why must they talk about me? Even if I am an imitation, I still have feelings. If they are blind to that fact, then I'll make them permanently blind.Since I don't really draw the back of my, let me tell you there is a zipper there. My head has space to hold materials. Edited March 4, 2014 by Pecival Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabbitfist Posted March 4, 2014 Share Posted March 4, 2014 Congratulations Percival, hopefully I get in too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted March 4, 2014 Author Share Posted March 4, 2014 Trust me, most of you are going to get in. I wouldn't worry too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Percival Posted March 4, 2014 Share Posted March 4, 2014 I wonder how it would end up...If only I could type.The whole reason I sew buttons onto people in the first place is because it makes me feel secure about myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoneyHam Posted March 4, 2014 Share Posted March 4, 2014 Trust me, most of you are going to get in. I wouldn't worry too much.I see how it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Percival Posted March 4, 2014 Share Posted March 4, 2014 I see how it is It must be hard writing about a sentient...object. Wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoneyHam Posted March 4, 2014 Share Posted March 4, 2014 i just noticed the hamster joke Battal.That's THE BEST 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted March 4, 2014 Author Share Posted March 4, 2014 Yeah, it is pretty damn good, isn't it. wat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Percival Posted March 4, 2014 Share Posted March 4, 2014 i just noticed the hamster joke Battal.That's THE BEST I keep telling you, I had an unstable sanity when I was young. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted March 4, 2014 Author Share Posted March 4, 2014 I keep telling you, I had an unstable sanity when I was young.AND U DONT NOW?!?! Ahem...back on topic guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Percival Posted March 4, 2014 Share Posted March 4, 2014 AND U DONT NOW?!?! Let me add one more post; The sanity I have now is nothing compared to back then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PsiKid Posted March 4, 2014 Share Posted March 4, 2014 The only thing that I'm thinking of as I read this is "Why are you being so mean Maxwell?" I mean, sure we've played the game but it's still a bit cruel to bring so many people all at once... I curse my inactivity for nearly a year, Perhaps I'd feel more inclined to ask if I could join if I actually posted here during that time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KidneyBeanBoy Posted March 4, 2014 Share Posted March 4, 2014 (edited) I shall write about what I think of while I dream, if you don't mind.And I'm a homunculus. Research next time.Floating gently, falling through memories that aren't mine. A mere imitation of human life, I have the deepest wish to be introduced to reality.An outcast by normal society, I simply created my own world where I fit. Now, in this world, everyone wants to be friends. Everyone loves me. Everyone puts me in their highest honor.And if they don't, they die.After all, toys are meant to be played with until they break. When my friends break, I simply make more.Friends are easily replaceable, don't you think?And yet, they talk behind my back, unaware of all the 'eyes' I keep hanging around. At least I have spare parts.Sigh.Why must they talk about me? Even if I am an imitation, I still have feelings. If they are blind to that fact, then I'll make them permanently blind.Since I don't really draw the back of my, let me tell you there is a zipper there. My head has space to hold materials.That reminds me vaguely of Coraline. Edited March 4, 2014 by KidneyBeanBoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Percival Posted March 4, 2014 Share Posted March 4, 2014 (edited) That reminds me vaguely of Coraline. On a different note, has anyone ever played with something called the "thread and button"? Edited March 5, 2014 by Pecival Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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