Battal Posted April 19, 2014 Author Share Posted April 19, 2014 That is insulting and degrading to the cave spider community. For shame on you Battal. YOU CAN'T ARGUE WITH THE TRUTH Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spinorex Posted April 19, 2014 Share Posted April 19, 2014 YOU CAN'T ARGUE WITH THE TRUTHBut you can argue with lies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codysgroup Posted April 19, 2014 Share Posted April 19, 2014 I really like your stories Battal because they're awesome and because it tells me the personality of the forumers since I'm fairly new to the forums Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Percival Posted April 19, 2014 Share Posted April 19, 2014 Maybe I should make my own writing thread. NOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TRENTOMINOUS Posted April 19, 2014 Share Posted April 19, 2014 Maybe I should make my own writing thread. NOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPE.Do itttttttttt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted April 19, 2014 Author Share Posted April 19, 2014 (edited) Segment 18"Nightmare" Jakob Battal was awoken by s harsh, red light streaming through his eyelids. Blinking a few times while his eyes adjusted to the brightness, he stood up and went to get some food. Looking into their supplies, he found himself a large piece of cooked meat. The moment his hands touched it, however, the meat deteriorated in seconds, becoming a fly-swarmed pile of rot. He dropped the meat in disgust as the rest of their food supplies decayed as well, insects of all sorts diving to the rotted flesh like it was a five-star buffet. Battal looked around him for the first time that morning, to see the world had gone terribly wrong. The sun was crimson, and the entire land was tinted the same color as well. Every tree rapidly grew, died, and grew again, as did the grass. The buzzing of the insects feeding on the food was increasing in volume and pitch, causing Battal to cover his ears in pain. The sun began to melt, blood running out of it to stain the sky red. His sleeping companions aged rapidly just like the food, the skin peeling off their bones and leaving nothing but skeletons. And even those began to crack and fall apart. The insects finished ripping apart the bag and its contents, then descended on the dry chunks of flesh that once were part of his compatriot's bodies. The trees and landscape crumbled into dust, the ground becoming hard as stone. Once the insects were done with Battal's friends, they descended upon the Debul himself, burrowing into his skin and ripping off hunks of meat. The bites burned, ironically, like fire, and Battal fell to the ground, the devouring swarm covering him like a blanket. They tore apart his vocal cords, chewed through his spine, ate off his fingers, but he would not die. Where everything else died, he lived. In agony, in pain eternal, but alive. Through the red haze, Battal saw a tall, thin man standing above him, wearing a familiar head of hair. His face was shaded, but he certainly had a mouth, for he spoke. "Say, pal. You don't look so good..." He said, but then the insects started with Battal's eyes and everything went black. (First attempt at creepypasta-ish stuff.) Edited April 19, 2014 by Lord_Battal 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TRENTOMINOUS Posted April 19, 2014 Share Posted April 19, 2014 You've died 2 times already I assume that you have a meat effigy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted April 19, 2014 Author Share Posted April 19, 2014 You've died 2 times already I assume that you have a meat effigy? I didn't die. It said expressly that I didn't die. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KidneyBeanBoy Posted April 19, 2014 Share Posted April 19, 2014 That sounds unpleasant. Insects are the top worst thing to be eaten alive by. The best is a shark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TRENTOMINOUS Posted April 19, 2014 Share Posted April 19, 2014 I didn't die. It said expressly that I didn't die."But he would not die" Didn't see that part in the mass violence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will Posted April 19, 2014 Share Posted April 19, 2014 Nightmares are fun stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strangerdanger101 Posted April 19, 2014 Share Posted April 19, 2014 That sounds unpleasant. Insects are the top worst thing to be eaten alive by. The best is a shark.Hey, cave spiders (and all spiders) are nice!Unless you hate them, then you deserve it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KidneyBeanBoy Posted April 19, 2014 Share Posted April 19, 2014 Hey, cave spiders (and all spiders) are nice!Unless you hate them, then you deserve it.I'm not saying spiders are bad, it's just that since they have smaller mouths and teeth, they have to take more bites, causing more agony. It's actually a good thing in some cases. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DwerBomb Posted April 19, 2014 Share Posted April 19, 2014 Maybe I should make my own writing thread.NOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPE.There wes a group of happy people.They were kidnapped by a sentient vodoo who tortured them using *insert torture instrument here*. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spinorex Posted April 20, 2014 Share Posted April 20, 2014 (edited) There wes a group of happy people.They were kidnapped by a sentient vodoo who tortured them using *insert torture instrument here*.I'm just expecting Percival to show up with a necklace of human eyeballs and a top hat fashioned out of skin. I'm honestly not sure what else you could expect. Edited April 20, 2014 by Spinorex Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hugos10 Posted April 20, 2014 Share Posted April 20, 2014 (edited) Can I be in it? :3I assume this is still going, since the chapter is titled "Nightmare" Edited April 20, 2014 by Hugos10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted April 20, 2014 Author Share Posted April 20, 2014 CREEPYPASTA ATTEMPT FAILED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hugos10 Posted April 20, 2014 Share Posted April 20, 2014 failiure.png CREEPYPASTA ATTEMPT FAILED Indeed! Now get writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KidneyBeanBoy Posted April 20, 2014 Share Posted April 20, 2014 (edited) failiure.pngCREEPYPASTA ATTEMPT FAILEDYou 'ave failed, now I will take ohf your fence. You do not desairve eet.What is it about me and fences? I'm like a French-Canadian Soup Nazi, but for fences. Fence Nazi? Edited April 20, 2014 by KidneyBeanBoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spinorex Posted April 20, 2014 Share Posted April 20, 2014 failiure.pngCREEPYPASTA ATTEMPT FAILEDIt's because you clearly did not put enough me in it. If you put me in the story you will get thousands, if not millions, of likes. I am absolutely sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted April 20, 2014 Author Share Posted April 20, 2014 (edited) Segment 18/12"Like Magnet" @Spinorex , @KidneyBeanBoy , @Hugos10 , @TRENTOMINOUS, @Strangerdanger101 , @Flare2V , @Gangstamonkey214 , @TLLBRDWRNGLR , @Parrotoss , @Crapplejacks , and everyone else who has ever posted on this thread is now in the story. Just kidding. You'll have to be patient. Edited April 20, 2014 by Lord_Battal 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KidneyBeanBoy Posted April 20, 2014 Share Posted April 20, 2014 (edited) Segment 18/12"Like Magnet" @Spinorex , @KidneyBeanBoy , @Hugos10 , @TRENTOMINOUS, @Strangerdanger101 , @Flare2V , @Gangstamonkey214 , @TLLBRDWRNGLR , @Parrotoss , @Crapplejacks , and everyone else who has ever posted on this thread is now in the story.Just kidding. You'll have to be patient.You 'ave failed again! Vis the second time! Now I vill take off all ov your vences.(Stop... Me....)Ignore that. That vas not me. Edited April 20, 2014 by KidneyBeanBoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strangerdanger101 Posted April 20, 2014 Share Posted April 20, 2014 Segment 18/12"Like Magnet" @Spinorex , @KidneyBeanBoy , @Hugos10 , @TRENTOMINOUS, @Strangerdanger101 , @Flare2V , @Gangstamonkey214 , @TLLBRDWRNGLR , @Parrotoss , @Crapplejacks , and everyone else who has ever posted on this thread is now in the story. Just kidding. You'll have to be patient. How long did it take you to remember all those names/check to see what their names were? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spinorex Posted April 20, 2014 Share Posted April 20, 2014 Segment 18/12"Like Magnet" @Spinorex , @KidneyBeanBoy , @Hugos10 , @TRENTOMINOUS, @Strangerdanger101 , @Flare2V , @Gangstamonkey214 , @TLLBRDWRNGLR , @Parrotoss , @Crapplejacks , and everyone else who has ever posted on this thread is now in the story.Just kidding. You'll have to be patient.Oh ok. You just raised and crushed my hopes and dreams within the span of 10 seconds. I hope you're proud. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted April 20, 2014 Author Share Posted April 20, 2014 Oh ok. You just raised and crushed my hopes and dreams within the span of 10 seconds. I hope you're proud. That's my job, mate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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