Mobbstar Posted October 22, 2015 Share Posted October 22, 2015 OI. SPIDER IS NOT A BUG!IT's either an Araneae or an Arthopods. It's actually a Humaraneae. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derpime Posted October 22, 2015 Share Posted October 22, 2015 It's actually a Humaraneae. hmm.Flawless logic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LucasShiroi Posted October 22, 2015 Author Share Posted October 22, 2015 I idly clicked into the latest page of this thread to see what was in it and then I got sucked into the story and had to go back and read the whole thing. Well done. One thing, though. Do you use a program that would allow you to darken the lineart? It can be hard to read because it's so pale, especially the speech bubbles.Glad you like it, and i'll try to atleast make the dialogue more clear. Witch Willow looks AWESOME DUDE!!!I appreciate it OI. SPIDER IS NOT A BUG!IT's either an Araneae or an Arthopods.Wolfgang usually just says 'bug' for some of his spider related quotes is all. but yea aside from that you're pretty much right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LucasShiroi Posted October 25, 2015 Author Share Posted October 25, 2015 Everyone has problems...some worse than others...Also how's the dialogue now? any clearer to read? 9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derpime Posted October 25, 2015 Share Posted October 25, 2015 (edited) Roses are redViolets are blueWhat will Woodie eatWhen his logs are gone? Just in a poem mood today.And yes, the dialogues are easier to read now.See what i did there? Hehe Edited October 25, 2015 by Derpime 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted October 25, 2015 Share Posted October 25, 2015 Those faces in the first panel... priceless. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CameoAppearance Posted October 25, 2015 Share Posted October 25, 2015 Much more legible! Thank you! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acemurdock Posted October 29, 2015 Share Posted October 29, 2015 Aw they're both oddballs, but they can take care of themselves! Also chester!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Developer ImDaMisterL Posted October 29, 2015 Developer Share Posted October 29, 2015 Chester doesn't know when NOT to play catch. Tsk, tsk, tsk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LucasShiroi Posted November 2, 2015 Author Share Posted November 2, 2015 finally got some more done, here comes the firestartersome of these panels got a little messy with the lack of border. Shouldn't be too hard to see what's going on though i hope 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MacineofScience Posted November 15, 2015 Share Posted November 15, 2015 I really enjoyed reading your comic. I love the different perspectives you are taking and the art style works really well for the story, very expressive. You should work to put in more backgrounds as some panels are pretty bare. Work in some dynamic backgrounds to give more intensity, to help express emotion or put emphasis on certain objects like when Willow was raising her torch. I like what i'm seeing and looking forward to reading more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LucasShiroi Posted November 16, 2015 Author Share Posted November 16, 2015 I really enjoyed reading your comic. I love the different perspectives you are taking and the art style works really well for the story, very expressive. You should work to put in more backgrounds as some panels are pretty bare. Work in some dynamic backgrounds to give more intensity, to help express emotion or put emphasis on certain objects like when Willow was raising her torch. I like what i'm seeing and looking forward to reading more!Thanks i appreciate it, the feedback helps. Backgrounds have always been harder than they should be for me, i might try adding in more effects to scenes though to make them less bare, find some suitable screentone designs to use or something. This whole thing has been practice for me after all, no harm in trying things out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MacineofScience Posted November 16, 2015 Share Posted November 16, 2015 No problem and thanks for taking my thoughts into consideration. It seems this practice is really paying off from when you first started. I remember when I first started and my drawings didn't look half as good as yours. Keep it up, you have some real talent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LucasShiroi Posted November 19, 2015 Author Share Posted November 19, 2015 Magnificent as it may be this mans hair is a pain to draw..I'm going to butcher Wickerbottoms vocabulary so badly in this comic 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted November 19, 2015 Share Posted November 19, 2015 *slowly rising inner chuckle* The final panel looks like something from the apple store. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted November 20, 2015 Share Posted November 20, 2015 Pfft, I can't wait to see how Wilson will react once he's no longer off his rocker. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LucasShiroi Posted November 20, 2015 Author Share Posted November 20, 2015 *slowly rising inner chuckle* The final panel looks like something from the apple store.heh, yea it does actuallyalthough it'd be cool if you could craft that little record player of maxwells for some extra background music. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted November 21, 2015 Share Posted November 21, 2015 heh, yea it does actuallyalthough it'd be cool if you could craft that little record player of maxwells for some extra background music. Klei actually planned this, the "broken phonograph piece" textures are still in the game files. Since they didn't make it happen, a mod allows for this. Not to mention the jukebox mod, taking things a step further and allowing others to make their own discs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LucasShiroi Posted November 21, 2015 Author Share Posted November 21, 2015 Klei actually planned this, the "broken phonograph piece" textures are still in the game files. Since they didn't make it happen, a mod allows for this. Not to mention the jukebox mod, taking things a step further and allowing others to make their own discs.Huh, well ain't that something?I would have loved to see what maxwells quote would have been for it though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted November 21, 2015 Share Posted November 21, 2015 I would have loved to see what maxwells quote would have been for it though.see what maxwells quote would have been thoughwhat maxwells quote been thoughmaxwells quote though You asked for it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LucasShiroi Posted November 21, 2015 Author Share Posted November 21, 2015 You asked for it.maxwellmusictaste.png Hah, yea that's pretty much what i thought it would have been like aswell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LucasShiroi Posted November 29, 2015 Author Share Posted November 29, 2015 I'm going to throw these up here cause why not? add some more colour to my thread. These were two requests I did for Glhmrzz, i like how they came out. 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LucasShiroi Posted December 1, 2015 Author Share Posted December 1, 2015 An ink sketch based on this other picture i seen from 'over the garden wall' it seemed like it really had that don't starve feel to me. although extending charlie's hair for the effect makes her look more like willow...oh well And a classy willowwish i got better item drops i keep getting pants and mediocre shirts... I don't even own the rabbit bag... 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted December 1, 2015 Share Posted December 1, 2015 Willow looks so cute, I love the way you draw her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LucasShiroi Posted December 1, 2015 Author Share Posted December 1, 2015 Willow looks so cute, I love the way you draw her. Thanks, i actually really like how she turned out aswell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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