minespatch Posted May 25, 2017 Share Posted May 25, 2017 Having a tad bit of trouble reading page 3. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-924887 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mewthemew Posted May 25, 2017 Author Share Posted May 25, 2017 5 hours ago, minespatch said: Having a tad bit of trouble reading page 3. :< Butch: Termination sequence ready to be activated, captain. again....*sigh* Captain Stephan: Ok, I'll be in my office. Redward: No! Wait! Don't push the button! Butch: PLEASE don't touch me. Redward: S-sorry! Sorry. Butch: Redward, It'll be fine. This- Redward: -Is completely bonkers, Butch! They're living people! Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-924953 Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 25, 2017 Share Posted May 25, 2017 Thanks bud. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-924954 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mewthemew Posted May 25, 2017 Author Share Posted May 25, 2017 Page 4. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-924965 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mewthemew Posted May 25, 2017 Author Share Posted May 25, 2017 pff, screw it, i'm gonna post the rest. last 4 pages in a bit... Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-924983 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mewthemew Posted May 25, 2017 Author Share Posted May 25, 2017 last 4 pages! Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-925007 Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 26, 2017 Share Posted May 26, 2017 Man that was intense. Though with the aesthetic and writing it makes me think of a Lego movie(any of them). Impressive work. Looking forward to the next story. I feel bad for the captain and Redward. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-925227 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted May 26, 2017 Share Posted May 26, 2017 I feel like there could be more to the story but as you said, short comic and they're hard to make. Good story though Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-925246 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mewthemew Posted May 26, 2017 Author Share Posted May 26, 2017 3 hours ago, DragonMage156 said: I feel like there could be more to the story but as you said, short comic and they're hard to make. Good story though Don't worry, there will be more. I've got 3 different directions it could take, and I'm trying to think of what would be better. 5 hours ago, minespatch said: Man that was intense. Though with the aesthetic and writing it makes me think of a Lego movie(any of them). Impressive work. Looking forward to the next story. I feel bad for the captain and Redward. lego movie!! Er- anyway, I do, too. I'm thinking the next part will have Redward showing up the next day to find Butch gone (either quit, turned himself n out of guilt, or just "decided not to be here today") and replaced with a lady with a bubbly personality named Luna. not sure how that will play out. would focus more on the actual game perhaps. EDIT: OH! OH! OOORRRRRR it could be several unrelated 'short' (averaging from 8-15 pages) ONI comics about different dupes and people either working down on earth or in a base!! Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-925304 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mewthemew Posted May 26, 2017 Author Share Posted May 26, 2017 fun fact: Captain Stephan very early on was going to be the antagonist with a slightly different personality. His emotionally repressed self was less that and more "meh, don't care." and actually advocated destroying the base, and was all around incompetent as a captain. he's much too adorable for that. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-925310 Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 26, 2017 Share Posted May 26, 2017 Well both characters , Butch and stephen, are both understandable. I feel bad for Butch but I can see the comedy of horrible terrors how they happened as you laid down the plot. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-925312 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mewthemew Posted June 2, 2017 Author Share Posted June 2, 2017 Nothing's happier than an extatic Baldo. Or more unsettling. WHAT DID YOU DO THIS TIME?! Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-927752 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted June 2, 2017 Share Posted June 2, 2017 I saw what bald dupes look like on the stream. They need to make that a thing Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-927776 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mewthemew Posted June 2, 2017 Author Share Posted June 2, 2017 Just now, DragonMage156 said: I saw what bald dupes look like on the stream. They need to make that a thing so did i. they're quite...rectangular. it's actually kind of off-putting. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-927777 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted June 2, 2017 Share Posted June 2, 2017 2 minutes ago, mewthemew said: so did i. they're quite...rectangular. it's actually kind of off-putting. Well I knew their head were already kinda square-ish. I still think dupes are adorable ^_^ (lil chibis lost in space ) Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-927778 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mewthemew Posted June 2, 2017 Author Share Posted June 2, 2017 5 minutes ago, DragonMage156 said: Well I knew their head were already kinda square-ish. I still think dupes are adorable ^_^ (lil chibis lost in space ) "We're not lost! we know exacty where we are!" (*whisper*) "Where are we?" Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-927779 Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted June 2, 2017 Share Posted June 2, 2017 1 hour ago, mewthemew said: WHAT DID YOU DO THIS TIME?! Probably unearthed a lot of veggies...? Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-927780 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mewthemew Posted June 2, 2017 Author Share Posted June 2, 2017 Just now, minespatch said: Probably unearthed a lot of veggies...? I mean, last time he was so proud of himself, he put a hidden camera in the rations box to TOTALLY NOT SPY ON PEOPLE TO MAKE SURE MEAT DOESN'T TOUCH HIS PRECIOUS AND TOTALLY 100% SUPERIOR VEGGIES AND FRUITS. (which was foiled shortly after when one of the binge eating dupes ended up, well, accedentally eating it because they weren't checking what was where. neither party will ever make that mistake ever again.) Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-927782 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mewthemew Posted June 10, 2017 Author Share Posted June 10, 2017 First 3 pages of the oni comic i'd assemble more, but my wrist hurts. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-930312 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted June 10, 2017 Share Posted June 10, 2017 Luna seems way too happy 0_0 XD Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-930313 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mewthemew Posted June 10, 2017 Author Share Posted June 10, 2017 2 minutes ago, DragonMage156 said: Luna seems way too happy 0_0 XD She's quite a naturally bubbly gal Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-930314 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mewthemew Posted June 10, 2017 Author Share Posted June 10, 2017 page 4-7 Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-930318 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mewthemew Posted June 10, 2017 Author Share Posted June 10, 2017 ....and the rest. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-930327 Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted June 10, 2017 Share Posted June 10, 2017 Ohhh, so that's where the coffee/barista thing you mentioned earlier. Interesting workplace dynamics you've written. This kind of genre fits oNI. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-930332 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mewthemew Posted June 10, 2017 Author Share Posted June 10, 2017 5 minutes ago, minespatch said: Ohhh, so that's where the coffee/barista thing you mentioned earlier. Interesting workplace dynamics you've written. This kind of genre fits oNI. Aww, thank you :3 Now I can shift focus to a pig/bunny family playing cowboys in the old west comic for a while. Because right now i have no idea what to do next. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/75155-trying-my-hand-at-fan-art-oni-edition/page/4/#findComment-930333 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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