minespatch Posted October 19, 2016 Share Posted October 19, 2016 Y'know... You could try challenging yourself with haikus? Might be a interesting writing exercise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PiturcaClaudiuStef Posted October 19, 2016 Share Posted October 19, 2016 https://www.google.ro/amp/m.wikihow.com/Get-Inspiration-for-Poetry%3famp=1?client=safari (you don't need depression to write poems you need just a little inspiration,if you want to be depressed just look in the mirror if it breaks it means you are ugly and you'll be sad because of that he joking.but really don't give up keep trying dude) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paxtonnnn Posted November 2, 2016 Author Share Posted November 2, 2016 This next isn't about depression. Or suicide. Or even self-hatred. This next one's about... my old friend. Spoiler your words as sharp as needles you held my happiness, thin as string you could've used your words and my happiness to keep my heart together instead your took your words and stabbed me in the heart It's over-dramatic, edgy, and doesn't rhyme, I know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PiturcaClaudiuStef Posted November 3, 2016 Share Posted November 3, 2016 13 hours ago, Paxtonnnn said: This next isn't about depression. Or suicide. Or even self-hatred. This next one's about... my old friend. Hide contents your words as sharp as needles you held my happiness, thin as string you could've used your words and my happiness to keep my heart together instead your took your words and stabbed me in the heart It's over-dramatic, edgy, and doesn't rhyme, I know. i had no idea that words can stab you.or you mean that they cut the hearth in half? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted November 3, 2016 Share Posted November 3, 2016 Cutting ones heart in half and eating it like an apple, I had a "friend" like that too. Oh wait, we were talking figuratively? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arlesienne Posted November 3, 2016 Share Posted November 3, 2016 22 hours ago, Paxtonnnn said: This next isn't about depression. Or suicide. Or even self-hatred. This next one's about... my old friend. Hide contents your words as sharp as needles you held my happiness, thin as string you could've used your words and my happiness to keep my heart together instead your took your words and stabbed me in the heart It's over-dramatic, edgy, and doesn't rhyme, I know. It's just blank verse. Not bad blank verse. The finish vould be subtler, maybe some onomatopoeia? Perhaps different verification. But it's not a bad thing. In fact it shows promise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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