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greenglacier

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(btw Greeny, if you've edited your previous character application you need to tell us. We don't get notified when you edit something, so we won't know if you did unless we happen to look at it or you tell us.)

(Well, I did and I told Blew. I though that was enough .-.

Still, I want to make up an another character. )

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ImDaMisterL

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Well, I did and I told Blew. I though that was enough .-.

Still, I want to make up an another character.

(Well, I guess as long as Blew knows and accepts it it's fine... but it's also good to warn us so we can read and check the changes you made ourselves. And you can make another one, just do the same thing you did for the first. Write his description here for everyone and wait for Blew's saying on the matter :p)
greenglacier

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(Well, I guess as long as Blew knows and accepts it it's fine... but it's also good to warn us so we can read and check the changes you made ourselves. And you can make another one, just do the same thing you did for the first. Write his description here for everyone and wait for Blew's saying on the matter )

(I see) 

Blewcheese

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(You want me to fetch all your bios, eh? I'll do it later. It'll get done.

 

I'm going to make my notes of Gabe here on the thread, rather than on pm. It's not because I want to publicly embarrass you or anything stupid like that, but I'm not entirely sure with balance myself. So if anyone disagrees with me, don't be afraid to speak up. Want to be as receptive as possible, and all that.

 

Holy water? Where are we gonna get that? How does one make it? How is it any different from regular water? You've added some good limitations on his abilities, which I appreciate, but his weakness isn't quite good enough. I highly doubt holy water is going to make an appearance in this rp. The same thing goes for blessed and unholy weapons. As for as I know, no one has earned a devil or angel room thus far. All of his weaknesses are practically inaccessible, unless you had some sort of God vs the Debul arc planned, and people supplying the characters with holy or unholy weapons. A little bit of an aside: I would assume these weapons could kill him. I would also assume normal weapons could kill him. If you're going to make them a weakness, you'll want to be more specific as to why it would be favorable to use that variety of weapon in the first place.

 

You're close. Got the right ideas, in my opinions. Just need them to be a little more reasonable. Hit me up with another bio, as well. Having two characters is a-okay.)

 

Alex shook his head. "We should at least wait for her to wake up..."

greenglacier

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(An another character)

Name: Vincent Willstorm

Race: Ghoul

History: After horrifying experiments done on a village and its population behind God's back, most of the subjects died due to the immense radiation they were exposed to. As the lone survivor of the experiments he escaped the place and seek for place he can live in peace. After years of searching it seemed he found one...
Personality: Kind, yet stubborn. When he's convinced about something no once can persuade him to believe something that goes against his views. He likes to be alone and not to be bothered by anyone because most are afraid of him thanks to his appearance.
Appearance: Lost all his body hair due the emissions. 174 cm tall, 35 kg. Green, glowing eyes. Rotten flesh. Some bones appear under his ragged clothes (ribs, leg, arm). Has a self-made walking cane and a tattered, black inc soaked straw hat that he got from his younger brother for his 23th birthday anno.

Strengths: Zombies, ghouls and any kind of un-dead does ignore him, thinking he's one of them. Immune to almost all type of radiation and poison. Does not have any needs like food or water. In fact he's immortal, well, as long as he isn't killed by something or someone, time won't harm him. He can walk quietly bare-footed because of he's lightweight. 
Weaknesses: He lost most of his body weight, including muscles. Rather weak compared to humans or bigger animals. He's feared for his appearance and hatred.
Etc: Likes watching plants grow and animals. He loves writing poems, always keeps a bottle of black ink, paper and a feather with himself in case he'd get inspiration.

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MenaAthena

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Kate scanned the area around them desperately, but her brother was nowhere to be seen. He must be wherever Vislig went. She started walking despite not having any clue as to where they went. She had to find him.

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Mina was still sleeping, as in universe she had only been asleep for a few moments.

Blewcheese

Blewcheese

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(Looks good. Vincent is accepted.)

 

Tiresias moved to follow the group, shaking his head. "Odds of us finding Vilsig are slim. This forest is very... twisty." He sighed, looking around at the trees and grass that, even now, seemed to always be shifting subtly. "It only brings us to where it wants us to be. And I certainly doubt it wants us to get to Vilsig. That being said, stay close together. If you spread too far apart, you'll get separated in here."

MenaAthena

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Kate still looked dazed and pale as she marched forward on her search. She had to get to Visig. Kade might be with him, or he could have gotten separated. Either way, she needed to keep looking. She had to find him. He was the only one she had left. She had to find him.

YouKnowWho

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(Oh hello! I've already been pre-accepted by Blew so I'm just going to...stick this here....

 

Name: Thomas Fisher

Race: Human (What? Did you expect a robot or something?)

Personality: Pretty friendly. Always a bit nervous it seems. Sure he can be happy, but still. Seems like he's always worried about something

History: Depends if this is or has been previously all ran by Maxwell BUT WHAT IF THAT'S A SPOILER THAN I WILL NEVER KNOW

Appearance: A tall messy brown haired teen. Blue eyes. Wears a red tattered sweater and jeans. Pretty much all it, there isn't really anything special about his appearance.

Strenghs: Can get a job done if you tell him to do it! Also can run pretty fast, which is good because he isn't the greatest fighter, or the bravest. He's extra careful due to being paranoid most of his life, this means he can pickpocket people and not get cause [Unless Blew says so], can avoid traps, and can build traps like Beemines without accidentally setting them off. He also knows quite a lot on animals, plants, electronics, and the human body.

Weaknesses: Pushover, not strong, not brave, anxious, slightly bad sight. and lonely. Didn't have many friends back home, so he's always felt a bit lonely. ALSO HE DOESN'T LIKE RABBIT KEBABS OH MY GOODNESS HOW CAN YOU LIVE WITH YOURSELF THOMAS

Etc: Has a hard time sleeping, and was supposed to get glasses before this happened so he doesn't have the best sight.)

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