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Lewis lays down the bodies into the graves.

He looks into the holes where his dead friends' corpses will rest forever, and with a lot of sadness in his voice he says: "My greatest friend once told me that everyone can live after death through his loved ones' memories. I didn't have that much time to know you better, but I will never forget you." He beats his fist on his chest and tears drop from his full of wrath eyes. "I will KILL the demons that did this! I will avenge you and Envy and Julie and Ophelia, I promise!"

He then falls on his knees.

Edited by DwerBomb

(Not saying i'm upset about it. Frankly, I......well.....no, this isn't a good place to start critiquing OCs, so i'll leave it at that. Not upset, persay, just saying I always find killing off your own OCs a curious experience.)

(I've already killed off a few OCs. It's not a new experience...incoming convo feed)

 

"I must say, wanting your sister dead...this would mean losing my best pupil."

 

Audia pats Lewis upon the back. "It's alright, Lewis. We all lose people who are close. We will avenge them yet...yet will you have the time to avenge yet a soon-to-be loss, I am not sure."

Audia looks upon Nathan with a tiny bit of a glare, then turns over to Avery and WX-78. "That's enough, both of you. Don't make me come over there." Avery jabs a thumb towards WX-78. "Well, 'e started it."

 

"As soon as possible, if you please, Graves." "That's all I needed to hear...we attack once it's darkened on the island."

(Uhh.....I`m going to take a wild guess at what I need to say....)

 

Wilson still looked very forlorn and hopeless.

"I guess there is no way to bring her back.. I am now a lonely man who is living a wasted life....." He hung his head low

 

(I like a sad story, how about you?)

 

 

 

(EDIT: There happy?)

Edited by Ephyb7

(The thing is...all my plans regarding Rustlung and the Machine require Wilson to be alive.

 

I can't really work well with this. If we're going to do that, then realize that the end is likely to be all mortal characters dying, and eternal punishment for all immortal characters.)

Edited by Silentdarkness1
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