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(So, no mandrake soup today?)

 

"..huh. I thought that kind of physics only happened in fiction."

 

Meredith tugged the tomahawk imbedded in her arm, and threw it at Wulfric, the blade landing short of the creatures shoulder. The wound that resulted from the tomahawk was deep, but she didn't pay any attention to the blood flowing along her arm in droplets. Instead, she was looking at the intruder with a mix of curiosity and anger. It was a mandrake that had tripped off the traps. Not just a wandering one, though, not like the several she has found roaming the plains at night. The best word she could think of for the intruder is "domesticated".

 

She took the other scissor blade and held it tightly, the light of the campfire causing a glare on the metal.

 

"Tell me. What did you hope to gain by coming in here?"

(Awesome.

Then, I'll get in as Xavier, my Off OC.

Here is how he (?) looks like:

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Full image (Because why not)

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Name: Xavier

Race: fantôme

Age: ???

Competence:

  • Mange le chair (Bites the flesh out of the body)
  • Mange l'âme (Makes the body sick by weakening the soul)
  • Mange le courage (Demolishes the enemy's courage, making him weak and scared)
  • Grince des dents (Produces an horrible sound by grinding his teeth)
  • Hémorragie cérébrale (Moans, then spawns three small weak hostile ghosts from his head)
Weakness:

Light weakness to metal

Scared of fire

Backstory: When he died, murdered by three classmates bullies, his soul got stuck on the way out. Full of wrath against humanity, the soul has grown bigger and bigger. The body as puppet, the ghost as the puppeteer, he found a way to make the three regret not only their action, but every mean action in the world. But that wasn't enought. He had to eradicate evil. First their families, then their acquaintances, then even who didn't know them. Every mean person had to die.

Everyone.)

Edited by DwerBomb
(Awesome.

Then, I'll get in as Xavier, my Off OC.

Here is how he (?) looks like:

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Full image (Because why not)

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Name: Xavier

Race: fantôme

Age: ???

 

Competence:

  • Mange le chair (Bites the flesh out of the body)
  • Mange l'âme (Makes the body sick by weakening the soul)
  • Mange le courage (Demolishes the enemy's courage, making him weak and scared)
  • Grince des dents (Produces an horrible sound by grinding his teeth) 

Backstory: When he died, murdered by three classmates bullies, his soul got stuck on the way out. Full of wrath against humanity, the soul has grown bigger and bigger. The body as puppet, the ghost as the puppeteer, he found a way to make the three regret not only their action, but every mean action in the world. But that wasn't enought. He had to eradicate evil. First their families, then their acquaintances, then even who didn't know them. Every mean person had to die.

Everyone.)

(I like this character, but he needs a weakness of some kind. All I see is perks.)

Is he basically a rotting corpse being puppeted by a vengeful ghoast?)

(Basically.)

 

(Sounds too familiar.)

 

"But what would I gain? I certainly can't let you out if someone did send you."

 

Meredith was trying to appear grim and macabre, but really, on the inside, she was feeling sorry for the creature; that was her empathic side speaking out, and she was way to emotional for this tough act.

(I don't know how to answer to that.)

(Anyway, new competence added.)

(I think he was referring to himself. 

I don't know if I'm the only one with this problem, but he seems a little OP to me. I know he is supposed to be a villain and all that but he has five pretty good abilities and only two weaknesses. Maybe if his fear of fire was crippling or something it would be better.

Or maybe I'm wrong. What do you guys think?)

(I don't know if I'm the only one with this problem, but he seems a little OP to me. I know he is supposed to be a villain and all that but he has five pretty good abilities and only two weaknesses. Maybe if his fear of fire was crippling or something it would be better.

Or maybe I'm wrong. What do you guys think?)

(He is not OP: the body is weak and the competences are basically his only way to attack. He is slow too. Also his fear of fire is pretty strong.) Edited by DwerBomb

Wy lifts his head.

A sky full of stars was covering the dark void of space, the moon standing above it as a queen.

With the crackling fire's sound and other usual night sounds playing as a soundtrack in the backround, Wy whispers:

"I had never appreciated the sky before now..."

He turns to Cypress, then smiles.

(I just wanted to post something, no need to reply on that, Dara.)

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(I just realized that Meredith and Wakana have the same color voice. Ah well.)

 

Mild surprise filled Meredith's face, quickly replaced by questioning, with an angry undertone?

 

"Then why are you here?"

 

She tugged on the mandrake's leaves, ripping it along the blade, and held the mandrake up, the root dangling from the leaves.

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