WalrusMan Posted July 17, 2013 Share Posted July 17, 2013 Ok before I begin I will address all the characters and agesWilson age = 30Willow age = 16Wolfgang age = 45Wendy age = 13Wes age = 27Woodie age = 38Maxwell age = 56Wickerbottom age = 65WX-78 age = no ageAnd Me!Bilfy age = 13Let's begin!Chapter 1 :Purgatory"Say Pal, You Don't Look So Good.""You Better Find Something To Eat Before Night Comes!"I wake up in a forest in a daze."Where am I"?I stand up."Hm"I could have sworn that plane crash killed me.And it Did Notcrash in a forest.Suddenly, I hear a loud screech."RAAWWWK!"Then I see a giant one-eyed bird coming towards me.I am staring at it in disbelief, then it pecks my arm."Agh!!!!!"I think "So it appears I am not dreaming."It pecks the same arm again and leaves a huge bloody gash in it."Oh my god!"I start to run from the beast,Screaming"Help!Somebody help me!!!".Then I run into a grave, trip over it, flip in the air, and bang my head on another grave and faint.In my head I hear a man's evil laughter "Muahahahaha! Fool. It appears you have already died.Meh, I am feeling kind of generous today. I will give you a second chance".I try to speak but I open my mouth and all that comes out is a hiss.Then I wake up.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Tell me what you think.If enough people like it i will make another one.Here's a hint on what the 2nd one is about.Chapter 2: The Girl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 17, 2013 Author Share Posted July 17, 2013 I don't care anymore I am making Chapter 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 17, 2013 Author Share Posted July 17, 2013 I wake up to the sound of crying.I am lying down by the headstone and on the grave."huh"?I feel a tear drop and land on my face from above.I get up to see a girl about my age sitting on the headstone I tripped over, plucking petals off a flower."Hello, who are you?""-sniff- Oh, hello I'm Wendy", In a depressed voice."I'm Bilfy. Why are you sad""My sister is dead.""Oh....How did she die?""I can't tell you.""W-... Okay""Did you get chased here by a cyclops bird?""Huh? Don't you mean a Tallbird?""I guess... It was pretty tall.""Night is coming soon. We must prepare.""We?""Yes'We'. Now get that dumb look of your face and help me with these logs."She starts to pick up a log."We can't just sleep at night?Why do we need a fire?""Do you want to die?""No" I look confused."That's why.""Okay?"We make a fire and sit together in the sunset.It turns dark and I hear a "Woosh"Wendy says, "Abigail?""Who's Abigai-Oh, the ghost?""That's my twin sister""Oh, Does she always visit you at night? It's kinda weird.""No, only some nights.""Well I'm bored.Here, have some berries Wendy.""Thanks"-sst- The fire went out"Oh no.""Oh no? Why are you scared of the dark Wendy?""No just what's in it"[HISSSSSS]"Who's There!"I pull out a torch after being bit by the darkness."Back Off Beast!"Nothing is there."Huh?"I look at Wendy."Don't look at me like that. I don't know what it was. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zomnat Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 nice. can i join? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 Um this is fan-stories not whatever you think it is.But here is the next chapter's hint.Chapter 4 : The GodCan you guess what that one is about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 Does anyone like my stories?- - - Updated - - -Does anyone like my stories? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dannyrulx Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 keep on truckin Bilfy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blewcheese Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 I like them! The god...? Interesting title. Probably something about Maxwell... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 (edited) Chapter 3: The God"Muahahahahaha! Everything is coming along perfectly.""Wait what is this?This Doesn't seem right.There is a new person!?"Maxwell opens a giant book with everyone's description in it."Let me see....Ah! Bilfy....I have never heard of him....He has skills that even he doesn't know of!?These next few months should be.... exciting."Maxwell sits back in his throne."My time will come soon enough."The everlasting tune starts to play again"....kill me" Edited July 18, 2013 by Bilfy I accidentally wrote chapter 4 on chapter 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 i like them! The god...? Interesting title. Probably something about maxwell...ring ding ding!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 What do you think about chapter 4? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blewcheese Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 Um, I think you skipped chapter three... But I love how maxwell says kill me at the end, in really small text. The chapter was a bit short for my liking though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 Um, I think you skipped chapter three... But I love how maxwell says kill me at the end, in really small text. The chapter was a bit short for my liking though.I edited it so it says Chapter 3.Here is the Hint for the next one.Chapter 4: My Creepy Girlfriend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 Ok everybody Chapter 4 will be here in about 15 minutes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 Chapter 4: My Creepy GirlfriendMe and Wendy wake up in the morning.She says " So... what's for breakfast?" I say"Uhh...." As I try to think a bunny walks up to me. I stomp on it's head and pick up it's corpse. "This I guess, But it'll only feed one of us...."My stomach growls. "Hehe. You can have it."Wendy says " What a gentleman! :D" And hugs me. In my head all I see is angels flying around holding hearts and hear a harp playing and my face turns red. "Uhhh. I'll cook this." I walk toward the campfire and trip over a rock and land on my face."Uhhh I found a rock." I think to myself " I am never good around girls":wilson_enraged:. I cook the meal. " Here." Wendy says " Thanks."And eats it. I say"So does this mean we're a couple?".Smack! Wendy punched me in the face and says"Nope!"With a cheerful look on her face."And if you ask again"The cheerful face goes away. " I'll murder you!"I think to myself " She digs me". :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 Chapter 4 was just a funny little joke around chapter to keep the funny in the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blewcheese Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 Ha! Wilson likes Wendy? I thought he would like willow more... Or maybe he needs attention after all those years alone in his lab Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 Ha! Wilson likes Wendy? I thought he would like willow more... Or maybe he needs attention after all those years alone in his lab No, It's Bilfy And Wendy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 Ok before I begin I will address all the characters and agesWilson age = 30Willow age = 16Wolfgang age = 45Wendy age = 13Wes age = 27Woodie age = 38Maxwell age = 56Wickerbottom age = 65WX-78 age = no ageAnd Me!Bilfy age = 13Let's begin!Chapter 1 :Purgatory"Say Pal, You Don't Look So Good.""You Better Find Something To Eat Before Night Comes!"I wake up in a forest in a daze."Where am I"?I stand up."Hm"I could have sworn that plane crash killed me.And it Did Notcrash in a forest.Suddenly, I hear a loud screech."RAAWWWK!"Then I see a giant one-eyed bird coming towards me.I am staring at it in disbelief, then it pecks my arm."Agh!!!!!"I think "So it appears I am not dreaming."It pecks the same arm again and leaves a huge bloody gash in it."Oh my god!"I start to run from the beast,Screaming"Help!Somebody help me!!!".Then I run into a grave, trip over it, flip in the air, and bang my head on another grave and faint.In my head I hear a man's evil laughter "Muahahahaha! Fool. It appears you have already died.Meh, I am feeling kind of generous today. I will give you a second chance".I try to speak but I open my mouth and all that comes out is a hiss.Then I wake up.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Tell me what you think.If enough people like it i will make another one.Here's a hint on what the 2nd one is about.Chapter 2: The GirlSee because me and Wendy are the same age Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blewcheese Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 No, It's Bilfy And Wendy.Ooooh! Why, you have something for people with dead siblings? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 Ooooh! Why, you have something for people with dead siblings?...Maybe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 Here is Next chapter's hintChapter 5 : Smarty PantsIt will be here in about 15 minutesGuess who is in this 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 I am listening to 2008 dubstep!Nothing can go wrong while listening to dubstep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shineingangel Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 oh ya well then \skip 1 minute in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabbitfist Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 oh ya well thenhttp-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=LXO-jKksQkM\skip 1 minute incan someone come with me, killing the gema? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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