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Not enough silk for a beekeeper hat.*Yao ming face*Later...Not the bees!NOT THE BEES!

My post pathetic death was today.I jumped in a wormhole, and the character died even before I saw the screen again.(the wormhole leaded in front of a walrus igloo)

Ok. Sure! I'd love to see your progress!I may sound like an arsehole, I'm sorry.Criticism:

Overall, the picture is very pleasing to look at, the simplistic shading keeps the whole thing from shattering. The problem I see is with the things on the screen. Everything is jumbled up, the spear is barely visible, the shadowy hands are nearly camouflaged from the background. Maxwell is a nice touch, but he seems forced. There's so much going on the picture that it's hard to describe what's going on. There's not enough space for everything to spread and feel natural, so the whole thing looks messy. The coloring needs some work, some colors need to contrast from others in order to make it looks neat. The shadowy figures should "invade" the outer frames of the picture, making Wilson look as helpless as he can be. Wilson's face, and his actual shading is very clean and clear, he makes the scene a little bit more delightful.Here's a suggestion, make the shadow hands, etc have a source. For example, make the darkness come from Maxwell's shadow, reaching Wilson and causing a commotion. Overall, it's great, but there's a lot. Also, make the entire picture wide as the screen, to give enough space for the sassiness you will embrace. I would love to have this improved version as a desktop wallpaper!

Were you a moderator before or you became one?Thanks so much for the critic : )I should draw something much better now, but I don't know what.

Were you a moderator before or you became one?Thanks so much for the critic : )I should draw something much better now, but I don't know what.

Oh, you've noticed. I've become a mod for some reason; apparently I went through some kind of requirements or something like that. It's really hard to explain, but I'm trying to act a little bit more appropriate.You should draw.. Umm... Wilson?! Dunno

Oh, you've noticed. I've become a mod for some reason; apparently I went through some kind of requirements or something like that. It's really hard to explain, but I'm trying to act a little bit more appropriate.You should draw.. Umm... Wilson?! Dunno

That's really cool. : D One of my friend said once " I would beat Maxwell in a fight to be able to play him next time" so I might draw the starting scene with Maxwell switching place with Wilson. (total troll face to Wilson)

That's really cool. : D One of my friend said once " I would beat Maxwell in a fight to be able to play him next time" so I might draw the starting scene with Maxwell switching place with Wilson. (total troll face to Wilson)

That sounds very good

Art will wait for a while. I have an illness that affects my hands badly and they sometimes just get useless, so I'm taking a little break from drawing. : CIf any of you want to see my other pictures check my deviantart gallery: http://ainashadox.deviantart.com/Music!I believe I can share this on my thread, if not just let me know and I will delete it.I know a nice album I'm listening to time to time and the music's style is really similar to Don't Starve. So if anyone likes the game's music should listen this.It's called The Dolls Of New Albion.

http://mochalab.bandcamp.com/album/the-dolls-of-new-albion-a-steampunk-opera

Art will wait for a while. I have an illness that affects my hands badly and they sometimes just get useless, so I'm taking a little break from drawing. : CIf any of you want to see my other pictures check my deviantart gallery: http://ainashadox.deviantart.com/Music!I believe I can share this on my thread, if not just let me know and I will delete it.I know a nice album I'm listening to time to time and the music's style is really similar to Don't Starve. So if anyone likes the game's music should listen this.It's called The Dolls Of New Albion.

http://mochalab.bandcamp.com/album/the-dolls-of-new-albion-a-steampunk-opera
So ok.I'm now so naughty and post my favourite music here:nah, rather not

Wow,fellow Maxwellian,what a talented individual you are :) That is some amazing colouring you got going on,it's just...wow *combination of jealousness on your art skills and amazed by the art* (I haven't seen your thread before,forgive mee :( )

Wow,fellow Maxwellian,what a talented individual you are :) That is some amazing colouring you got going on,it's just...wow *combination of jealousness on your art skills and amazed by the art* (I haven't seen your thread before,forgive mee :( )

Thank you fellow Maxwellian. Wish I could do some more. In time, maybe.

Thank you fellow Maxwellian. Wish I could do some more. In time, maybe.

Well,you have a good reason for a drawing break,I hope the illness goes away though(I do not know if it's a reoccuring thing or not,if so that it becomes less of a problem for you),and that you'll be fine,too.Regardless of how long it'll take for you to make Art(capital a) again,it'll be awesome ,I'm sure about that :)

Well,you have a good reason for a drawing break,I hope the illness goes away though(I do not know if it's a reoccuring thing or not,if so that it becomes less of a problem for you),and that you'll be fine,too.Regardless of how long it'll take for you to make Art(capital a) again,it'll be awesome ,I'm sure about that :)

Sadly, it will be just worse over time, I have arthritis. I overused my hands this is why I need that break. But today will be my last break day because I need to work on my commissions : ) Time is my worse enemy.

Sadly, it will be just worse over time, I have arthritis. I overused my hands this is why I need that break. But today will be my last break day because I need to work on my commissions : ) Time is my worse enemy.

I'm just sayin', but you should really rest. Get massages, take a nap, or watch something!Of all your body parts, you need to keep your hands in good shape. ;)

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