YouKnowWho Posted January 23, 2016 Share Posted January 23, 2016 Thomas poked his head inside the portal and saw a forest roaring with fire. He immediately pulled his head out. He then realized what the rock must of meant. The only exit is death. He looked at the rock with fear in his eyes. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-713058 Share on other sites More sharing options...
wxps350 Posted January 23, 2016 Share Posted January 23, 2016 "This, child of man, is where your journey home truly begins. Through this portal lies many deadly trials. Yet with many virtues, you will succeed. Proceed when you are ready." Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-713148 Share on other sites More sharing options...
YouKnowWho Posted January 24, 2016 Share Posted January 24, 2016 (edited) "YOU FIRST" screamed Thomas, as he pushed the rock through the portal. Thomas took a deep breath, picked up his rock pal, and slowly walked through the portal. The walk eventually turned into a semi-sprint, as he was running through a burning forest carrying a heavy rock. He held his breath for as long as he could, hoping he would eventually see an exit. Edited January 24, 2016 by Youknowwho Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-713161 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MenaAthena Posted January 25, 2016 Share Posted January 25, 2016 Mina started to stir. It looked like she was going to wake up soon. ~~~~~~~~~~~ Kate had he eyes squeezed shut and her hands clamped over her ears as the man carried her over his shoulder. She was trembling rather violently. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-713658 Share on other sites More sharing options...
YouKnowWho Posted January 25, 2016 Share Posted January 25, 2016 (edited) Of course Thomas caught on fire shortly after exiting the portal and he started screaming rather loudly. But the he saw something amazing. A small pond. Panicked, he set the rock down and immediately jumped into the pond. He started sinking. Eventually he sunk down to what felt like one hundred fish. He was severely disgusted and immediately swam back up. He got out of the pond, grabbed his rock friend, and began semi-sprinting again. Edited January 25, 2016 by Youknowwho 1 Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-713661 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted January 26, 2016 Share Posted January 26, 2016 (Irony is brutal, isn't it.) 1 Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-713904 Share on other sites More sharing options...
wxps350 Posted January 26, 2016 Share Posted January 26, 2016 "Quick, Child! Almost there!" The rock did it's best to encourage Thomas, who was almost out of the woods. He could just barely see the outline of a small village just ahead. "Be prepared to fight!" "We can't just sit around anymore." Judas stood up. "Every passing moment our way home gets further and further. How much longer will she be asleep?" Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-713938 Share on other sites More sharing options...
YouKnowWho Posted January 26, 2016 Share Posted January 26, 2016 Thomas would of stopped at the mention of fighting if he wasn't currently in a burning forest, so instead he just screamed it out loud. "WAIT WHAT?!? FIGHTING?!?" He certainly didn't want to fight, and even if he had to, he wasn't good at fighting at all. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-713939 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GuyNamedChris Posted January 26, 2016 Share Posted January 26, 2016 "I'm sure our way out of here isn't going anywhere. Relax in the meantime." Famen said to Judas. 1 Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-713941 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted January 26, 2016 Share Posted January 26, 2016 (No! Don't go in that clearing! You'll be frozen in time forever!) Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-713962 Share on other sites More sharing options...
YouKnowWho Posted January 26, 2016 Share Posted January 26, 2016 7 hours ago, Lord_Battal said: (No! Don't go in that clearing! You'll be frozen in time forever!) (Never! You can't stop me! You can't stop m-) Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-714035 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blewcheese Posted January 26, 2016 Author Share Posted January 26, 2016 (I already tire(sas) of this fight scene.) The villagers groaned as the goo was either dissolved or destroyed. The beings who were still human-esque let out some ungodly hiss and began to retreat. The Illustrator looked at Mina. "I can speed this up, if you'd like..." Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-714065 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted January 26, 2016 Share Posted January 26, 2016 (Fight scene are great, as long as you don't have week-long breaks in them.) "Welp, that was easy." Vilsig says, his voice turning back to normal. "Thanks, Sirus." Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-714067 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blewcheese Posted January 26, 2016 Author Share Posted January 26, 2016 (Pretty sure the issue here is that these goop villagers are completely unthreatening. Even if they morph into big ass goop creature there's a shadowy superbug thing and a robomage and an all knowing old guy. It's the unbeatable trio.) Tiresias nodded in agreement. "Yes. Well done." The forest was beginning to turn to ash as the flames continued purging the thicket. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-714077 Share on other sites More sharing options...
YouKnowWho Posted January 26, 2016 Share Posted January 26, 2016 (edited) Thomas emerged from the forest and tripped on what looked like mister rock's cousin, and he landed on his face into the land of meanwhile. Right in front of what looked like Some sort of horrible shadow monster. Oh yeah, his rock friend landed in a comfortable patch of grass. Edited January 26, 2016 by Youknowwho Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-714086 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted January 26, 2016 Share Posted January 26, 2016 (Vilsig doesn't look like the Grim Reaper and he isn't a bug. Use this for reference.) Vilsig stares down at Thomas curiously. "You dropped something." He says, picking up the rock. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-714120 Share on other sites More sharing options...
YouKnowWho Posted January 26, 2016 Share Posted January 26, 2016 (edited) (Sorry I confused Vislag with the face of death. It's fixed now) When Thomas looked up, he immediately thought that it was a great idea to run back into the burning forest. He couldn't move though, he was frozen in fear. He just kept staring at Vislag while saying "Uhhhhhhhh" Edited January 26, 2016 by Youknowwho Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-714139 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted January 26, 2016 Share Posted January 26, 2016 Vilsig hands Thomas the rock, then turns away without a response. He walks over to one of the wriggling half-dead corpses; it's the villager he originally met. "Ǹow,̧ wa͟s ̕all ̧t͠hat ͟r̶eally̷ ҉n͟e͢c͟e̸ssary?" He whispers softly. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-714161 Share on other sites More sharing options...
YouKnowWho Posted January 26, 2016 Share Posted January 26, 2016 (edited) Thomas felt almost greatful that Vislig didn't kill him and consume his soul. He sat up and just observed Vislig whisper something to a pile of goopy looking corpses. Edited January 26, 2016 by Youknowwho Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-714162 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted January 27, 2016 Share Posted January 27, 2016 "My pleasure." "N-no....thank you, i've got this....I just need a moment to-....!!!!!!!....NGH!...." As soon as Lefay had finished the amulet, a jot of pain struck her. She dropped the amulet, and put her hands up to her head. Memories started to flood back. Dark, malevolent hands. Strange whispers. Whispers of a dark destiny. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-714217 Share on other sites More sharing options...
wxps350 Posted January 27, 2016 Share Posted January 27, 2016 In an expertly swift motion, Judas dived under Lefay and narrowly caught the amulet moments before it would've hit the ground and probably been perfectly fine anyway. "Do not fear him. He may look ill-intented, and act ill-intented, yet he will not harm you. For now... But, speak to the old man. He is the one who knows of the way out of this accursed abyss." Strangely, Thomas was the only one who could hear the rock talking. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-714222 Share on other sites More sharing options...
YouKnowWho Posted January 27, 2016 Share Posted January 27, 2016 Thomas got up an approached an old looking gentleman. "Hello sir. I know it sounds crazy but my rock here says you know a way out of here. Could you please tell me?" Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-714226 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted January 27, 2016 Share Posted January 27, 2016 Tiresias throws Thomas in a rubber room and locks the door. 1 Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-714233 Share on other sites More sharing options...
YouKnowWho Posted January 27, 2016 Share Posted January 27, 2016 Thomas jumps around in the rubber room like it's a bounce house. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-714234 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blewcheese Posted January 27, 2016 Author Share Posted January 27, 2016 Tiresias glanced at Thomas, uninterested. "That's where we're headed now. Stick around, and you'll get to the way out." The villager looked up at Vilsig, still lacking in humanity. "You... Must... Die..." He hissed, reaching up in a pitiful attempt to grab at Vilsig. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/58394-unending/page/64/#findComment-714375 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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