XxTheGentleManScientistxX Posted June 13, 2014 Share Posted June 13, 2014 Im so sorry. Just read this and give me feedback. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10297326/1/To-rule-the-world I don't want to post 20 chapters of pure noobish writing. (So imma give a link) Comment, critique, or just say random inhuman words.I have no idea if any of you have a fanfiction account. (Oh my god I will regret posting this here in about 5 minutes.) Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/37430-fanfiction-to-rule-the-world/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted June 13, 2014 Share Posted June 13, 2014 Firgnshil migcuffiin. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/37430-fanfiction-to-rule-the-world/#findComment-499469 Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxTheGentleManScientistxX Posted June 13, 2014 Author Share Posted June 13, 2014 (edited) Firgnshil migcuffiin.*Pats your head* Edited June 13, 2014 by XxTheGentleManScientistxX Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/37430-fanfiction-to-rule-the-world/#findComment-499474 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrotoss Posted June 15, 2014 Share Posted June 15, 2014 Im so sorry. Just read this and give me feedback. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10297326/1/To-rule-the-world I don't want to post 20 chapters of pure noobish writing. (So imma give a link) Comment, critique, or just say random inhuman words.I have no idea if any of you have a fanfiction account. (Oh my god I will regret posting this here in about 5 minutes.) It's pretty good and the plot present is engaging to avid fans, although, the chapter lengths really do bother me.Most notably in chapter one, I blink and it's over. I realize that writing while maintaining quality over quantity is hard, length should always be considered. When I write a chapter, I make the world count to be a minimum of 1,000 words, so it looks meaty at a glance and requires a page scroll, making the reader feel like something is being done....but that's just me, mkay? Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/37430-fanfiction-to-rule-the-world/#findComment-500344 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luczrio Posted June 16, 2014 Share Posted June 16, 2014 random inhumane words Pretty good! I like it! 1 Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/37430-fanfiction-to-rule-the-world/#findComment-500761 Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxTheGentleManScientistxX Posted June 20, 2014 Author Share Posted June 20, 2014 It's pretty good and the plot present is engaging to avid fans, although, the chapter lengths really do bother me.Most notably in chapter one, I blink and it's over. I realize that writing while maintaining quality over quantity is hard, length should always be considered. When I write a chapter, I make the world count to be a minimum of 1,000 words, so it looks meaty at a glance and requires a page scroll, making the reader feel like something is being done....but that's just me, mkay?I wrote the first chapter at school, so I was always hiding my paper from pesky students and teachers. I tried to make something quick to the point. I will try to make them more detailed and longer now though.random inhumane words Pretty good! I like it! Thank you! 1 Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/37430-fanfiction-to-rule-the-world/#findComment-502563 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MenaAthena Posted July 12, 2014 Share Posted July 12, 2014 sahfb uerksenk This is really good! Please don't stop making them! Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/37430-fanfiction-to-rule-the-world/#findComment-509460 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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