DwerBomb Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 (Mmm... There is something I could do, but I'm not sure. Anyway it may happen only after she meets Lewis.)Alma moves her eyes from left to right examining the tunnel. Then she sighs.<I'm underground, in an unstable tunnel, following a big shadow worm who swallowed me and then vomited me. And I'm being followed by a weird satyr who seems to know a lot more then he says. And where am I going? Will the people Vilsig told me about be really there?>She adjustes the hat, that fell on her eyes, and then turns back at the satyr."You still haven't told us your name. Mine is Alma." Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-478895 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 (Time skip, then?) Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-478980 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DwerBomb Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 (Time skip, then?)(We need to wait for Gaber and Hugos) Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-478985 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted May 12, 2014 Author Share Posted May 12, 2014 (Or, how about some character development instead of sticking around with thumbs up our rears?)Â Wilson headed back to camp to join the others, with plenty of fresh meat in his pack. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-478992 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 (Character development is fine, but too much at once can get too overwhelming and confusing. Maybe a bit of plot development would be better, no?) Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479010 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DwerBomb Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 (I am doing character development here.)Lewis finally arrives back at the camp. Because the heat stone lost all it's heat, Lewis shivers.<It's getting cold...if only I had my winter hat with me...>He starts a little fire using some twigs and drops the egg near him on the ground. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479018 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted May 12, 2014 Author Share Posted May 12, 2014 Wilson walked back over to Lewis, lit a torch, and handed it to him to help with keeping the fire going. "There. That'll keep us for a little bit..so....how did you get here, exactly?" Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479024 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DwerBomb Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 Lewis scratches his head."I was lost and I found a strange door in an abandoned house in the woods. The door looked like a normal one, but it was standing in the middle of a room. When I opened it, I could see darkness beyond the door, and from that darkness a shadow hand caught me. Then I woke up here."Lewis sighs."I'm worried for what my friends... Do you think I'll be able to see them again?" He asks to Wilson. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479058 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted May 12, 2014 Author Share Posted May 12, 2014 "......bastard.........yeah.....I think you will...." Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479060 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Percival Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 (I sense references.) Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479068 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DwerBomb Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 (I sense references.)(If you got it you are awesome)Lewis smiles and extends his hands to the fire to warm up. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479071 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blewcheese Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 Entropy hesitated. Escape was borderline impossible, let alone surviving for a good amount of years. But perhaps it was best not to destroy their sense of optimism. "Don't pin this on that Carter fellow. How about you, Mister Higgsbury?" Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479080 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted May 12, 2014 Author Share Posted May 12, 2014 "Carter?....who's that?......Maxwell.....tricked me.....I don't even remember how long ago......trapped me here, after I made a machine....of some sort....using knowledge he had given me." Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479084 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blewcheese Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 "Maxwell, huh? I wondered if he would keep his stage name. That man is no less of a puppet than either of you are." Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479087 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 Vilgis burrows along because Battal doesn't really have much else to say. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479093 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted May 12, 2014 Author Share Posted May 12, 2014 (Here's an idea, Battal. You don't have to throw a reply every few posts or so.)Â "I don't care. I hate him. If I ever get a chance at him, I swear....*sigh*...."Â Wilson got up, and started up the fire pit. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479097 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blewcheese Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 The Terrorbeak placed the egg on the ground softly as Entropy returned to the cover of a tree. Soon, the Terrorbeak retrieved the umbrella from Entropy and sat it next to Wilson. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479100 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted May 12, 2014 Author Share Posted May 12, 2014 "Entropy, I don't lecture you about your kind's immorality. Don't talk to me about Maxwell's problems. That's not going to make me respect him more." Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479106 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blewcheese Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 Entropy sighs. "I know that. I've helped enough of you to understand that their hate towards that man is unquenchable, albeit misdirected. I won't try to stop you if you get a chance at him." Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479111 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted May 12, 2014 Author Share Posted May 12, 2014 "Good....i'm glad we understand each other on that." Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479113 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blewcheese Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 "Agreed."Â Entopy stares at the tree thoughtfully, wondering if he truly would allow Wilson to attack Maxwell. Although, in the end, the two probably wouldn't meet again. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479122 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted May 12, 2014 Author Share Posted May 12, 2014 Wilson started cooking the eggs over the fire. Once they had started, Wilson took the tallbird meat out of his pack, and added it in as well. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479125 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blewcheese Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 The Terrorbeak phased out of existence, leaving only a few specks of darkness lingering in the air, which dissipated shortly after. "How long was it that you've been here?" Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479126 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted May 12, 2014 Author Share Posted May 12, 2014 "According to...Rustlung......three torturous years." Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479129 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blewcheese Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 "And two more days until he appears again...?" Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/34647-carnatis-inviktusreserved/page/31/#findComment-479131 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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