bingokazooie Posted May 26, 2019 Share Posted May 26, 2019 oi oi, name's Bingo here's a dump of stuff i've done and actually liked, don't exactly recall dates but ranges from the end of 2018 to now. constructive criticism encouraged and can't wait to see everyone's amazing work on this forum. 7 Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/106741-mr-bonkos-dump/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
ResettePlayer Posted May 26, 2019 Share Posted May 26, 2019 31 minutes ago, bingokazooie said: constructive criticism encouraged and can't wait to see everyone's amazing work on this forum. Welcome to the forums! We're always glad to see new talent here. Your colouring is very good, with nice light and texture. It suits your rough, spontaneous linework well. That said, it looks like your vigilance for anatomy slid a bit with that last Wes drawing. The Warly one and the three-character drawing demonstrate that your skills are decent, so maybe that last one was a fluke. Wes' left leg (the one closest to the viewer) is poorly proportioned. The part of the leg above the knee should be the same length as the lower part--you probably know this already, as the right leg looks fine. Were you trying to do foreshortening or was this just one of those times you weren't worried about getting it right? If you were foreshortening, it could be made more convincing by drawing the pants pattern in your favour. Having the lines wrap around Wes' leg in a more circular manner would make it look more like it was coming towards you, like this: Spoiler Hope that helps! 1 1 Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/106741-mr-bonkos-dump/#findComment-1200818 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bingokazooie Posted May 26, 2019 Author Share Posted May 26, 2019 not sure how to respond in these forums but hopefully this works, thanks a lot! been strugglin with foreshortening and ill definitely try redrawin it. the last one was the oldest one, i shoulda put em in order from when i recalled doing it. sorry about that thank you again, i really appreciate it! probably gonna post another attempt on foreshortening, see how that goes. 1 Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/106741-mr-bonkos-dump/#findComment-1200831 Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 27, 2019 Share Posted May 27, 2019 7 hours ago, bingokazooie said: Did Willow paint that? I hope you have a Wheeler piece ready, the klei art stream thread is currently asking for them before Tuesday arrives. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/106741-mr-bonkos-dump/#findComment-1200993 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bingokazooie Posted June 4, 2019 Author Share Posted June 4, 2019 1 On 5/26/2019 at 10:46 PM, minespatch said: Did Willow paint that? I hope you have a Wheeler piece ready, the klei art stream thread is currently asking for them before Tuesday arrives. aw man, was too late. haven't been checking up on forums or the stream due to personal issues but i'll try next time! wes halloween skin concept, based loosely off bloodborne n' my friend's obsession with vampires. might do a full drawing for it, was really fun doing. 5 Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/106741-mr-bonkos-dump/#findComment-1204722 Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted June 6, 2019 Share Posted June 6, 2019 Wes already had a Halloween skin which was the pagliacci skin. Though if there was a entire skin collection of the entire cast as vampires, that'd be hilarious. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/106741-mr-bonkos-dump/#findComment-1205353 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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