Tjally Posted December 25, 2013 Share Posted December 25, 2013 Hello everyone! I have been writing on a short Don't Starve story, and the first draft is now done. I've been working on it for a while now, and to be honest, when I work on something for a long time, I start to lose track of how good I've actually written... I would love to have someone to share my story with and hear if it is bad or if I'm delusional. It is already finished, but it needs to be re-read and polished. I would simply love to have someone who can read it and give me feedback on if what I want to achieve is achieved, and if I'm being clear enough or not. I only need one person, preferably with some writing experience of their own ^^ Let me know if you're up for it! ~Tjally Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/30565-looking-for-a-beta-reader/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
aredshroom Posted December 25, 2013 Share Posted December 25, 2013 I'd love to proofread! Will probably be occupied tomorrow, but I'd definitely love to help with stories. Send me a PM if you want me to. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/30565-looking-for-a-beta-reader/#findComment-393966 Share on other sites More sharing options...
the truthseeker Posted December 26, 2013 Share Posted December 26, 2013 I have experience both writing and proofreading. If you need help from me, I can assist as well. Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/30565-looking-for-a-beta-reader/#findComment-394149 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DareToStarve Posted January 10, 2014 Share Posted January 10, 2014 I have experience with (lots) writing and (some) proofreading. I'd love to help, as I have also wrote many DS short stories. (Many including the pigs in real life situations, like the Pig Depression, when no spiders would come near their town...and all the berry bushes would wilt. Every pig lost their job XD) I'd love to see you post it once your done! Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/30565-looking-for-a-beta-reader/#findComment-401944 Share on other sites More sharing options...
the truthseeker Posted January 10, 2014 Share Posted January 10, 2014 I believe it's been published in its final form, but I'm sure Tjally could use the help for future projects! Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/30565-looking-for-a-beta-reader/#findComment-401990 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neosaurus Posted January 10, 2014 Share Posted January 10, 2014 This really should be in Arts subforum... Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/30565-looking-for-a-beta-reader/#findComment-402108 Share on other sites More sharing options...
gnarlytreeman Posted January 13, 2014 Share Posted January 13, 2014 i have a tendency to devour novels at a quick rate, try submitting it to smashwords for free, you'll get a lot of review comments. There are a number of authors that do that for a time to get their stories early proof read, or a story line checked for logic errors. smashwords.com Link to comment https://forums.kleientertainment.com/forums/topic/30565-looking-for-a-beta-reader/#findComment-403220 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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