What happen after 365 day...... they are coming......

[xyznewbie]

wilson diaryDAY......DAY 365: everything is gone, my pig farm, my bee box, my bird. all going that monster's mouths, black body, like werepig. monkey head with evil spider tooths. one arm with huge black claw killing every living things in 1 hit. it riding on dark red colour beefole and 5~10 hound with it. killing and eating never stop. I call it Starve rider...DAY 366: I have to run, it no hope against it with weapon i have. i need better weapon and help. I found one mandrake, this small mobmake sound when starve rider close to me. so i can run away before rider charge on me. but there is too many of them, once i saw more then 10 starve rider attack one pig's village, they mad beefole knock down pig house in 2 second, like hundred hound chase the pig, no even a pig's skin found on the ground after. the pig king is killed by group starve rider , pig king's huge body make into meat ball, one starve even eat king's gold bag. WTF they eating gold for... oh wait they size grow up, the claw is more sharp. one starve rider can even order other rider to follow. lucky they didnt see me. i have to go, but i really feeling bad of what i saw they change...maybe they no just a feral monster...but more...danger...DAY 367: one gobbler is keeping follow me, maybe because i have a mandraker, they holy favorite food. oh i am starving,since starve ridercoming the meat is hard to get. because they even dig out rabbit hole for a morsel. if that big chicken wasnt run fast than me, i will make gobbler into KFC...oh wait... rider...why i cant rider on it...my mine light on. i use grass made a set of rope. put few berry on ground, the gobbler come slowly than i put rope on it's head, yes i got riding too.haha eat my ash your hound...DAY 368: I found one injure warrior, not the pig warrior i usually hire before. it rabbit! big one. i wonder if can drop more morsel...oh sorry...starving again... the warrior tell me to deliver a letter to bunny city name roby hole at brokeback mountain to the norths. In return he give me a new magic book. i look inside lot new magic e.g a fire ball can even melting a rock. just cost me 35 hunger. a ice trap frozen living things 2.5 second cost 25 hunger...good thing those bunny magic only cost hunger.if cost MP...i am blind! warrior dead after give me a map to the city, I pick up his body put in my backpack for...for...forrrr...errr...non your buinese.DAY 369: I saved a pig warrior today, use my new magic, he surround by 20 hound, I use new magic fire ball with my science item bee mine, it become new item i name it magic grenade. throw to the mob it spilt a mass fire bee attack any hostile monster only within 20m range. haha this is new science...new age of....oh sorry... so i saved this pink pig, i found out he smart than those i hire before. he give me a new item it call magic contract made by 4 paper 4 wood 4 berry....whateverafter i use on he, he become my loyal follower.LOL I imaging i order million amry run over a starve rider 1time 2time 3time 4time 5time...oh..sorry. OK, i put my finger on his head. i can name he now. so i call he sunday 369. and than i point he again new commomd show up on his head. attack; cutwood; eat; piss; guard; and dance...WTF the dance for...and 3 number between commond one is hp one is hunger and one exp...i wonder if he can lvlup to pig general and more commond will show.....oh wait...he need eat too!!!is mean i got family to feed now...million amry...fall...errrr..i am starvingDAY 370: Loading...map...Finally i come to bunny city roby hole. stand at out side look the huge wall, i feel ashamed myself, i can make tool i can cut stone, i can make bloody pig house why i cant make wall to protect myself when hound chase my ass in early day...i want make fence make wall make house...Wowowowowow...to be continue.

[sirmentlegen]

Sorry but the grammar was so bad i could hardly understand it.

[moistedparanoia]

Sorry but the grammar was so bad i could hardly understand it.

I might've enjoyed it, but I couldn't get pass the first few sentences.Try editing, all of it. Also, there is this thing called proof reading. Just a thought.

[stormfront]

wilson diaryDAY......DAY 365: everything is gone, my pig farm, my bee box, my bird. all going into that monster's mouth. It had a black body like a were-pig's, a monkey-like head with evil spider teeth, one arm with huge black claw. killing every living thing in 1 hit. it's riding on dark red colour beefalo, 5~10 hound following it. the killing and eating never stops . I shall call it Starve rider...DAY 366: I have to run, it no hope against it with the weapons I have. I need better weapons and help. I found one mandrake, it makes sounds when starve rider is close to me. that way I can run away before the rider charges on me. But there are too many of them. once I saw more then 10 starve riders attack a pig village, their beefalo can knock down pig house in 2 seconds, what seemed like a hundred hounds chased the pigs, not even a scrap of pig skin was left after. Even the pig king was killed by the starve riders. They made the pig king's huge body into meat balls. One even ate the king's gold bag. WTF was he eating gold for?... oh wait.. He grew in size, his claw became more sharp. and can even order other rider to follow. I was lucky they didn't see me. I have to go, but I have a really feeling bad of what I saw, they can change...maybe they are not just a feral monster...but more...dangerous...DAY 367: A lone gobbler is following me, maybe because I have a mandrake, their favorite food. Oh I am starving, ever since the starve rider appeared meat is hard to get. they even dig out rabbit holes for morsels. If only that big turkey wasn't faster than me, ...oh wait... rider...why can't I ride on it...Idea! I used grass to make a rope halter. put few berries on the ground, the gobbler came slowly then I put the halter on it's head..yes! I am riding now too.Haha eat my dust you hounds...DAY 368: I found a injured warrior, not the pig warrior I usually hire before...it's a rabbit! a big one too. I wonder if it drops more morsels...oh sorry...starving again... the warrior tolled me to deliver a letter to the bunny city name roby hole at brokeback mountain to the north. In return he gave me a magic book.I looked inside.. lots of new magic but it makes me hungry (e.g a fire ball that can even melting rock. just cost me 35% hunger. a ice trap frozen living things 2.5 second cost 25% hunger).. the warrior died after giving me a map to the city. I picked up his body and put in my backpack for...for...forrrr...errr...none of your business.. DAY 369:I saved a pig warrior today using my new magic. He was surround by 20 hound, but I combined my fire ball spell with a bee mine to create a new item,I call it a magic grenade. throw towards a mob and it spilts into a massive swarm of fire bees, they attack any hostile monster within 20m. Haha this is new science...new age of....oh sorry... So I saved this pig, He's smarter than those I hired before. he gave me a new item it's called a magic contract. it can made by combining 4 paper,4 wood, and 4 berry....whatever...After I used on him, he became my loyal follower. I imaged ordering a million strong army to run over a starve rider 1time 2times 3times 4times 5times...oh..sorry.OK, I touched him on his head. I can name him now. so I named him Sunday 369.when I pointed a new command showed up on his head. attack; cut wood; eat; piss; guard; and dance...WTF the dance for...and 3 number between command one is hp one is hunger and one exp...i wonder if he can level up to pig general and more pigs will show up.....oh wait...he needs eat too!!!this means I have family to feed now...army...fall...errrr..i am starvingDAY 370:Finally I arrived at the bunny city roby hole. I stand and look up at the huge wall protecting it, i feel ashamed of myself, I can make tools, I can cut stone, and I can make a bloody pig house! why can't I make a wall to protect myself when hound chase my ass...I want to make fences, make walls, make a house...Wowowowowow...to be continued.

edited it for you I get the feeling English might not be your first language also took out stuff that didnt fit KFC did not exist back when the game takes place nor would the term MP/mana points

[xyznewbie]

haha thank you very much stormfront english is no my first language, i am chinese, and my english at HSC is 35 but i wish dont starve can have more fun. can have riding on monster can have trading with evil for rare item. or add tower defance in the game. like warcraft 3 tower defance is simple, but lot player like. wilson can build wall build tower, and more and more monster coming to attack. but untill this ver. there are no much things you can do after 80 day. i think need aleast 1 long turn mission. like wilson need catch 10000 rabbit to unlock new map....something like that. wish there is lot more fun can be show in game later.