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Marcy knew something was wrong. She couldfeel it.

"WILSON!"

She screams with watery eyes, unable to do anything.

Lewis dashes forward and grabs Wilson before he hits the ground, resulting on both of them smashing on a rock.

The boy leaves a cry of pain.

(....those last two posts are never going to seem right in my head.)

 

Wilson stifled a yell of agony. He managed to get back up, dealing with a bruise on his back from falling on Lewis and the rocks.

 

"What are you doing?! Stop that this instant!.."

Edited by Silentdarkness1

Vilsig drops back to the ground, landing on all legs before standing up again.  "Awww, what's wrong, ghost?  You afraid of getting some friends who are in the same boat as you?"  He laughs, pacing around the edge of the group's light.

 

"Don't tell me you didn't see this coming, Wilson."

(This is how I intended that scene to be: Lewis helps Wilson by grabbing him before he hit the ground, but physics make him hit a rock in front of them because of Lewis's dash. Lewis hits the rock but prevents Wilson from getting damaged other then by a bump. Lewis tried to help.)

Alma, who was watching the scene with a look of curiosity, finally speaks:

"You sure are not handsome in that form, Vilsig."

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