WalrusMan Posted July 26, 2013 Share Posted July 26, 2013 Wendy and Abigail lived only with their mother. They lived in a rather small house.Their mother loved them both very much, Or so they thought. One day Wendy came home from school later then usual. She walked into the house very quietly because she heard talking. She takes a peek into her and Abigail's room and sees Abigail and her mom. The mom hugs Abigail and says " I can only say this now because your sister isn't here... You are my favorite." After hearing that Wendy felt like her heart just got torn into shreds. She walks into the room with tears rolling down her face and says " Is that true!?" Her mom jumps up and quickly says "Uhm.. You're crazy! I don't know what you're talking about!" Wendy yelled " Forget it!" and stormed out of the room....~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Later That Night:It was almost midnight. Wendy was still awake and upset about what her mother said. Then she looks at the pillow on her bed and then looks at Abigail. Then she smiles. She picks up the pillow and starts to walk toward Abigail. She accidentally trips over something and wakes Abigail. She says" "Wendy, why did you wake me up?" Wendy jumps on Abigail and suffocates her. The last word Abigail yelled was " Help!" Their mother walks in to see Abigail's corpse and Wendy holding up Abigail's flower , laughing hysterically. Then she faints and hears a man's voice saying "Say Pal, You Don't Look So Good." "You Better Find Something To Eat Before Night Comes."_________________________________________________________________________________________________What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luggs Posted July 26, 2013 Share Posted July 26, 2013 The idea is nice but I find it too quick. Still. Good read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WalrusMan Posted July 26, 2013 Author Share Posted July 26, 2013 Thanks. I kind of ran out of things to write. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxyThePirateFox Posted June 16, 2015 Share Posted June 16, 2015 Nice job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted July 3, 2015 Share Posted July 3, 2015 .................Ech. I don't particularly care for this. This is a pure "she was always insane and murderous." storyline. Maybe it fits for Willow, but not Wendy. I believe that Wendy used to be perfectly normal, and had a healthy relationship with her mother and her sister, but then something happened. It was an accident, but it left Abigail dead. The experience horrified Wendy to the point where she became brain damaged and emotionally cold, keeping the flower Abigail always liked to wear in her hair as a souveneir. Gimme some time and i'll write up my own draft. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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