Luggs Posted May 25, 2013 Share Posted May 25, 2013 You return to your camp after another difficult hound attack. You limp slightly. One of the blighters got in a nice chomp on your leg. As you reach the relative safety of your wood Walsh, you notice something unusual. The fire pit at the center of the camp is roaring and a tall figure is standing next to it. You grip your spear. So he's finally decided to show his face again. You creep closer to the fire, eager for some vengeance. But to your dismay, it's not Maxwell.This man is wearing a red coat and is carrying a large umbrella. The umbrella keeps his head out of view as you stand next to him. "So this is the new pawn..." He mutters, his voice barely a whisper, nearly lost in the wind. You glare at him. "What do you want?" You ask angrily. If he's here for food, he's getting chased out. You barely have enough food for yourself as it is. "I'm not here for food. I'm here to help you." Help you? A likely story. "Well, someone has to play the other side of the board after all." Other side of the board? What is he talking about? "Consider this a free sample."He vanishes in a puff of smoke, leaving a little umbrella. "An umbrella? He calls that helping?" You mutter. Suddenly, a crash of thunder cascades through the camp and a dense downpour ensures. You huddle under the umbrella, trying desperately to stay dry. Maybe this gift wasn't useless after all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyanBlue Posted May 27, 2013 Share Posted May 27, 2013 This will keep my hair dry,at least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Matt Posted May 27, 2013 Share Posted May 27, 2013 Nice writing. Great use of the shopkeeper's looks as a mystery-inducing factor. Congrats.YOU ARE LEAVING SPOILER-FREE ZONE, CONSIDER YOURSELF WARNED.YOU ARE LEAVING SPOILER-FREE ZONE, CONSIDER YOURSELF WARNED.YOU ARE LEAVING SPOILER-FREE ZONE, CONSIDER YOURSELF WARNED.YOU ARE LEAVING SPOILER-FREE ZONE, CONSIDER YOURSELF WARNED.This got me thinking: What if the Shopkeepers are re-used as "the ones" Maxwell talks about? If they wanted to replace Maxwell, wouldn't the best decision be helping Wilson in his way, just like this one does in your story? Questions, questions and more questions... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bryangameplaysbr Posted May 27, 2013 Share Posted May 27, 2013 Noooo friend the Shopkeeper is a guy that helped the survivors to escape giving itens to themThe ones are another story they may be grue-like creatures shadows or the insanity monsters as they dont existis just a large and complicaded story many theories can be maked alternate universe bla bla bla this game knows how to play whit science Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OVER9000NUKES Posted May 28, 2013 Share Posted May 28, 2013 awsome story, i had to read it twice , not cuz i didnt understand it, but cuz it was awsome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OVER9000NUKES Posted May 28, 2013 Share Posted May 28, 2013 Nice writing. Great use of the shopkeeper's looks as a mystery-inducing factor. Congrats.YOU ARE LEAVING SPOILER-FREE ZONE, CONSIDER YOURSELF WARNED.YOU ARE LEAVING SPOILER-FREE ZONE, CONSIDER YOURSELF WARNED.YOU ARE LEAVING SPOILER-FREE ZONE, CONSIDER YOURSELF WARNED.YOU ARE LEAVING SPOILER-FREE ZONE, CONSIDER YOURSELF WARNED.This got me thinking: What if the Shopkeepers are re-used as "the ones" Maxwell talks about? If they wanted to replace Maxwell, wouldn't the best decision be helping Wilson in his way, just like this one does in your story? Questions, questions and more questions...you just made this story way cooler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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