ArcticFox789 Posted March 30, 2013 Share Posted March 30, 2013 (edited) Ouch. My head hurts. My hand is a constant reminder of the terrible choice I made, the scar still runs deep. I begin to stir, only to see a figure stood over me. Cigar smoke blows into my face. I recognise the voice when he speaks. I know not what he said, my mind was too clouded. It was him. He tricked me. I am standing now. Unsure of where I am, my balance beginning to fail. A sharp pain stabs in my stomach. I am hungry, probably. The scar stings. Not sure why, it doesn't normally...didn't normally. But then again; this isn't ordinary. I look to my left and right. There is a Carrot in the ground. I knew I was needing food, the searing pain in my stomach was a constant reminder of that fact. I wrenched it out of the ground, and devoured it hungrily. That need filled, I turned my attention to the environment around me. The heat was pretty dreadful. I needed some shade, and saw something in the distance, I don't know, a Tree or something. Hard to tell from this distance. Anyhow it was too hot to stay out, so I cowered under it, in the hope of some respite. I tried to sleep, but found it impossible without some sort of mattress. I crept out from my leafy refuge, and into a place where the ground was orange and dusty. It had clumps of something, the only plant able to grow there it appeared, but I was still unsure of what it was, sticking out of it. I slowly walked over to them and yanked them up. It was a kind of Grass. Nothing special. When I thought I had enough, I crawled back under the tree, and tried to fix them together. It was hopeless. I worked all day, but to no avail. I barely even noticed that my stomach was screaming at me, wailing about it's lack of food.It was a desperate situation. My brain had stored the words of the man "before night comes". Obviously the night held dangers. I staggered around looking for food. Clinging onto life by a thread. I found a bush, containing red berries. Back home, red berries meant poison, but this was hardly back home. No other alternative, I crawled to the Berry Bush. I was about to snatch the Berries, when bursting from the Bush came a Turkey-like beast, grabbing the Berries for itself, before hastily fleeing. It was all over. I was too exhausted to keep going. I collapsed in a heap. I felt sure that my world was going black. A noise, next to me. I summoned all my strength, and turned over. Sitting there, a Rabbit. I reached over and made a grab, a lunge, desperation overcame me. The poor being, bewildered, had wandered too close to me. I reached with my other hand, and clunked it over the head with a nearby sharp rock. I'm not sure what. Flint probably. Rejuvenated by holding Meat in my hand, I pulled some bark off a tree, and used some Flint to spark the Camp Fire I created. It was by no means perfect, and the Meat was uncooked in places, burnt in others. But you know something?Nothing ever tasted so good.Night passed soon after. I was still alive! It was a close run thing, no doubt. But alive I was.At dawn I went to retrieve the mattress I had begun making. I finished it, (much easier with a settled mind) and brought it back, towards the end of the day I guessed. It was more like a Sleeping Bag. I christened it a 'Straw Roll', and as the Sun went down, not so long later, I rolled it out. The dusk gave way to night, and as my eyes slid shut, I said to no-one in particular: "Maybe this won't be so bad after all"My eyes flew open. A dull pain echoed throughout my body. I was no longer in my cosy Straw Roll. This wasn't where I fell asleep. Something held me down. It was cold and slightly sticky.A horrible choking sort of a sound rung through the air. It was swiftly responded by a roar. A roar that appeared to be getting closer. This was not good news... Edited March 30, 2013 by ArcticFox789 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
F3RR1S Posted March 30, 2013 Share Posted March 30, 2013 niiiiice :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ArcticFox789 Posted March 30, 2013 Author Share Posted March 30, 2013 niiiiice :3Yay! Someone noticed :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
F3RR1S Posted March 30, 2013 Share Posted March 30, 2013 Yay! Someone noticed :3continue it, it's interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ArcticFox789 Posted March 30, 2013 Author Share Posted March 30, 2013 continue it, it's interesting.[ATTACH=CONFIG]5430[/ATTACH]I was planning to.Nice Merm head :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ArcticFox789 Posted March 30, 2013 Author Share Posted March 30, 2013 (edited) The roar grew ever louder, more hideous. This world. This goddamn world. Edited March 30, 2013 by ArcticFox789 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ArcticFox789 Posted March 30, 2013 Author Share Posted March 30, 2013 I was going to post more but I was too tired. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symage Posted March 31, 2013 Share Posted March 31, 2013 Looks nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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