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Hi, new here, but I have some thoughts regarding some of Wormwood's beta quotes.

Some of his quotes use "me" replacing "I", which his quotes have never really used before. It feels too similar to Wurt's speech pattern, which has the potential to be confusing.

Wormwood's speech pattern, looking at other quotes, tends to be structured grammatically correct, but dropping some words, especially pronouns (he, she, they, I, me, etc) and in-between words (like is, the, etc). 

Many of the quotes can rather easily be rewritten to better fit his existing dialogue and avoid any potential confusion.

My examples:

Spoiler

Lunar seed's quote ("Small Night Ball! Me here, me here") would fit his existing pattern more as something like "Small Night Ball! There there" if one wants to keep the reassurance.

The lever quote ("Safe? No afraid, me pull") might work better as "Safe? No fear, pull", which would fit the pronoun drop part of his speech pattern and hold the same message.

I do find it nice that the more accurate to his pattern quotes have some more personality! Him referring to these lunar entities and robots as friends is rather interesting, in a new way. I like Wormwood a lot (though I do like someone more, heheh) so I like seeing more from him. 

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