PortalCake's Lets Play, looking for feedback

[Portalcake]

Hello! I have recently made a YouTube account and have started recording and uploading videos and am currently looking for some feedback on my videos. I'm kinda new in commentating so its not perfect but anyway i'm trying my best!. I have just uploaded the first part of my Don't Starve series and have done Slender: The Arrival not too long ago, so if anyone has some time would you mind taking a look at my video and giving me some feedback. If you like me then feel free to like, favorite and maybe even sub me! it would really encourage me to make more Don't Starve videos. If you feel anything is wrong do let me know so i can fix them up for next time, i also take requests for games so that works too!thanks, here is the Don't Starve video here, let me know what you think, if you have time feel free to check out my other videos too.