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This week was terrible. I was very busy with irl stuff and for 2 days I was sick. Literally no medicine worked plus simply lying in bed was painful (I even thought there would be only 1 page this week). Luckly it's gone now. Also, enjoy new pages

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A lil note

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For any pervert out here, Mothy is NOT doing anything dirty (on the second page). She literlly sits on his stomach and you can see a blue light. Plus, a real spoiler now, she doesn't suck anything, she eats something. She can't even suck tbh

 

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On 8/15/2023 at 12:22 AM, Cookieneko55c said:

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I'm going to another city for 10 days but I want to finish this chapter before i go, so today is one page and tomorrow there will be 2 pages. The new chapter will show up on 26th of August 

Can I critique your work a bit? Thanks. That ability of “sending two people to the normal world. Or sending one person twice” feels WAAAYY too specific. Like, Wilton just... has it? It feels like one of those “shitty superpowers day 413” ability. It's too handy for the plot and looks very lazy from your side

You could make it so, let's say, the Queen of The Constant Charlie gives him that power to, idk, challenge him one more time. It's my first thought about it though, you have much more time and you care about the whole comic much more than I do. I'm the reader, who found that comic accidentally and read it in one day, and you are the author, that comic is a part of your life for 3 years already. You care about it much more than I do

I don't want to be mean or anything, I just really like that whole your thingy. You can see that this is the work of a beginner, it's really interesting to see how you are getting better and better in it. I hope that whole comment will be helpful for you

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On 12/12/2021 at 1:55 PM, Cookieneko55c said:

I wasn't feeling good lately so I couldn't post earlier. Here's a drawing of Wilotn, Cathy and Henry doing homework with a help of the new friend. By those drawings I want to show that they became a little closer to each other. In alpha version of the story there was a chapter about it but then I realised it doesn't make sense in the lore I made so had to delete it. From now I'm going back to panels :grin:

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I love how there is a chair just hanging on a rope from the sealing

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11 hours ago, Mark L. said:

Can I critique your work a bit? Thanks. That ability of “sending two people to the normal world. Or sending one person twice” feels WAAAYY too specific. Like, Wilton just... has it? It feels like one of those “shitty superpowers day 413” ability. It's too handy for the plot and looks very lazy from your side

You could make it so, let's say, the Queen of The Constant Charlie gives him that power to, idk, challenge him one more time. It's my first thought about it though, you have much more time and you care about the whole comic much more than I do. I'm the reader, who found that comic accidentally and read it in one day, and you are the author, that comic is a part of your life for 3 years already. You care about it much more than I do

I don't want to be mean or anything, I just really like that whole your thingy. You can see that this is the work of a beginner, it's really interesting to see how you are getting better and better in it. I hope that whole comment will be helpful for you

Criticism is always welcome and thank you for sharing your thoughts. I made the story 4 years ago and now I notice some bad sides of it I overlooked when I was younger. Now I make better stories that one day I'd love to share with the world.

Some parts of this story aren't out yet for the reader and they explain more about Wilton's power.

Lastly about the 2 people thing. I notice that I sometimes put very specific info that isn't explained later because while creating it I don't think they are specific, even now (in my new stories I make). It just happens so I need someone to notice them for me and point them out. Who knows? Maybe I'll turn it into a big brain theory.

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