ONI Writer - Thermal Upgrade - Minor String/Tooltip errors


FoxyMonty
  • Fixed

Round 2 of potential string errors in the new Thermal Upgrade Patch.

 

1. effects vs affects. The construction materials are impacting the temperature ranges a building can withstand.

Different construction materials have different effects on the temperature ranges a building can withstand

Suggestion:

Different construction materials have different affects on the temperature ranges a building can withstand

 

2. "a" super computer rather than "an".

<style="research">Intermediate Research</style> is required to unlock improved technologies.
It can be conducted at an <style="research">Super Computer</style>.

Suggestion:

<style="research">Intermediate Research</style> is required to unlock improved technologies.
It can be conducted at a <style="research">Super Computer</style>.

 

3. "is" not needed.

Make this colony is a meltdown-free zone!

Suggestion:

Make this colony a meltdown-free zone!

 

4."at" zero percent.

Freshness
----------
<style="food">Food</style> items will become stale at fifty percent freshness, and will rot zero percent

Suggestion:

Freshness
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<style="food">Food</style> items will become stale at fifty percent freshness, and will rot at zero percent

 

5. "on" research stations

Work research stations to unlock new technologies.

Suggestion:

Work on research stations to unlock new technologies.

 

6."Unsupported" misspelling

Unspported Save File:
{0}

Save file version is v{1}.{2} but this build requires at least v{3}.{4}

Suggestion:

Unsupported Save File:
{0}

Save file version is v{1}.{2} but this build requires at least v{3}.{4}

 

7. Inconsistency - keep with Polluted water instead of "Dirty water"

<style="liquid">Polluted Water</style> is a yucky substance that emits <style="gas">Polluted Oxygen</style> and can cause <style="disease">Disease</style> in your Duplicants.

Small accidents can be cleaned up by clicking and dragging with the <color=#833A5FFF>MOP TOOL</color> <color=#F44A47>[M]</color>, while larger bodies may be worth filtering. Dirty water also <style="stress">Stresses</style> out any Duplicants that come into contact with it, so it is best removed quickly for your colony's safety.

Suggestion:

<style="liquid">Polluted Water</style> is a yucky substance that emits <style="gas">Polluted Oxygen</style> and can cause <style="disease">Disease</style> in your Duplicants.

Small accidents can be cleaned up by clicking and dragging with the <color=#833A5FFF>MOP TOOL</color> <color=#F44A47>[M]</color>, while larger bodies may be worth filtering. Polluted water also <style="stress">Stresses</style> out any Duplicants that come into contact with it, so it is best removed quickly for your colony's safety.

 

8. Plants - porous leaves maybe rather than skin.

A fleshy, <style="heat">Cold</style>-dwelling plant.

It removes ambient <style="heat">Heat</style> from the air by respiring through its porous skin.

Suggestion:

A fleshy, <style="heat">Cold</style>-dwelling plant.

It removes ambient <style="heat">Heat</style> from the air by respiring through its porous leaves.

 

9.

A fleshy plant that thrives in <style="heat">Cold</style> environments.

It removes ambient <style="heat">Heat</style> from the air by respiring through its porous skin.

Suggestion:

A fleshy plant that thrives in <style="heat">Cold</style> environments.

It removes ambient <style="heat">Heat</style> from the air by respiring through its porous leaves.

 

10. Very minor suggestion if this is a movie reference quote.

Some people just want to see the world burn.

Suggestion:

Some people just want to watch the world burn.

 

11. Submerge vs Submerse, various strings use one or the other. They seem to be completely interchangeable as far as I can tell. Might be worth sticking to one for consistency.

Examples:

Grows a single <style="plant">Plant</style> when sown with a <style="seed">Seed</style>.

Must be submerged in <style="liquid">Liquid</style>.

Can be used as floor tile.
This plant must be fully submersed to grow

 


Steps to Reproduce
Looking through strings_template.pot file


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