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(I think you messed up on your bold text.)

The beam dies out, warded off by Sundrop's heat. Satoshi falls to his knees, crying. His arms quickly defrost, and he slams them onto the ground.

"God damn it... I couldn't even avenge her..."

Before Satoshi could say another word, he found a sword in his chest. He looked up to see Will. The sword was quickly pulled out, and Will kicked Satoshi onto his side.

Edited by Will

Joseph begins sweating, and not from the heat. He looks at Will.

"You finally made it! That's good. But... Uhh... You kind of hurt our friend Satoshi. Also, do you know how to cure heat infections?"

Joseph smiles as he sees Will run closer.

"Oh, good. Thanks for conning to help!"

Edited by Blewcheese

(Sorry, was gone for a bit.  Also, the group is already dead, so the next step is destruction of the soul.  No returning from that, so watch yourself.)

 

(Also - not a requirement - but just a request; have your characters treat injuries like humans.  It's unrealistic when they just shake off fatal blows like shards through the heart and stuff.)

 

Jakob tackles Will in midair, sending him off-course.

 

"Miss me?"

(No pressure.)

"This isn't the time or place for a nap!"

Joseph picks Snowfall up and unceremoniously hoists her over his shoulder, and proceeds to try and exit the ring of fire in order to get to Pops.

"Uh, Sundrop, if you could lower this wall, that would be great."

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