DragonMage156 Posted October 4, 2016 Author Share Posted October 4, 2016 17 minutes ago, minespatch said: What's the context behind Dream bunny? So your persona's going to keep evolving to the games and fandoms your in? Dream Bunny is a random name I gave that winged rabbit thing. Yep! ^_^ 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted October 4, 2016 Share Posted October 4, 2016 11 hours ago, DragonMage156 said: I tried to draw Toriel's Sprite. I failed -_- atleast it's still plausible without the sprite to compare it to: I don't see any problem with it. Yeah that's about how much I cared about Toriel's looks. 11 hours ago, DragonMage156 said: Mirrored Timelines Now that's a great fan artwork! 11 hours ago, DragonMage156 said: Dream Bunny Reminds me of from Drawn to Life, probably because of the motion lines. It looks like it's spinning around itself. 11 hours ago, DragonMage156 said: I've been thinking of names for this guy as well. How about Raval... Ravel? Something like that? Raphael seems like a fitting name to me. Then again, I don't know his personality. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted October 4, 2016 Author Share Posted October 4, 2016 4 hours ago, Mobbstar said: Raphael seems like a fitting name to me. Then again, I don't know his personality. Well he plays in a jazz kinda band in Undertale. Don't really have a personality for him yet :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted October 10, 2016 Author Share Posted October 10, 2016 So if you guys didn't know, I posted a status update little over a week ago about a rewritten version of my Spyra story. Incase you guys don't normally look at status updates, I put up a link as well as include part of it in this post along with the "old" version. First I should probably tell you a little about Spyra. The Legend of Spyra (the full title of the story series) is a genderbent fanfic I started years ago that eventually became my version of TLo Spyro gen 2. It has a lot of different elements than Spyro, more dragons, more enemies and eventually the return of the dark master. I also have a bunch of side stories involving Spyra as well but that's a tale for another day (no pun intended). Anyway without further ado, here's the intro to the first installment: The Next Purple Dragon: Lets get the old version out of the way first (it's not long so don't worry) : Spoiler Lightning flashed down in an old foggy cemetery. An evil place of no return. No one ever came here anymore. All the gravestones were half sunken in the wet, muddy ground and the skies were always black. There was however one person that still lived there, it was an old cloaked witch dragon that worked with dark magic. She lived in a small hut and created many spells and potions. Now for the new version: Spoiler Lightning lit up the blackened clouds that blanketed the sky, trying to strike the unholy place that stood below. An old abandoned cemetery filled with nothing but overgrowth, sunken tombstones and bodies of the dead. Among the muddy unkempt terrain there stood a cabin. Inside lived a witch dragon, working her spells and magic. So yeah as you can see, it's a massive improvement. Even my own mother agreed it sounded good Basically I wanted the story to catch the readers attention in the first sentence or two. I tried too hard in the old version but the new version sounds a bit more... natural? Magical? It's definitely more descriptive and easier to read imo. Whether I'm able to rewrite this whole thing better or not is a different story (again, no pun intended ) I'll let you guys decide this one. 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paxtonnnn Posted October 10, 2016 Share Posted October 10, 2016 READING?! I DID NOT SIGN UP FOR THIS 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted October 10, 2016 Share Posted October 10, 2016 New version looks like you cleaned up somewhat. It doesn't feel as cluttered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted October 20, 2016 Author Share Posted October 20, 2016 More Art! I made a Funtime Draco: In hindsight, I probably should have use blue. The magenta makes Draco look like a girl :/ Otto-piller: Based off this post I saw on Tumblr Otto and Lizard's Halloween outfits (this one came out well imo): When Red isn't home: Finally did this meme. Although I was too lazy to look up a trombone reference Mad Scientist: Dino isn't that much into dressing up for Halloween so he just acts like a mad scientist in October. I was gonna add Wilson hair but... I decided not to in the end. This lab coat may or may not become part of Dino's character Franken-Bat: When I thought of Batsy in a Halloween costume, I instantly thought Frankenstein. Idk why Ori: King of the Jungle: After playing Ori and the Blind Forest a couple times, you start to feel like a boss as you dash through the levels without dying at all In the Dark: I am really proud of this one. Although the platform could have been better. Oh I made a short Halloween comic with Red and Fluffy (Fluffy may been like a wimp but just bare with me!) And now for some silly spoopi requests I requested (incase you guys didn't see the status update) @Youknowwho Here's some blanks incase you wanna insert your on caption/meme: Spoiler @Dudedude (when you're in bed but forgot to do something ) I'd tag Minespatch in this one but he usually sees everything anyway XD That's not all there is but I'll post the rest later. 11 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paxtonnnn Posted October 20, 2016 Share Posted October 20, 2016 1 hour ago, DragonMage156 said: I'd tag Minespatch in this one but he usually sees everything anyway XD Minespatch sees all. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted October 20, 2016 Share Posted October 20, 2016 2 hours ago, DragonMage156 said: I'd tag Minespatch in this one but he usually sees everything anyway XD 1 hour ago, Paxtonnnn said: Minespatch sees all. Â 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted October 20, 2016 Author Share Posted October 20, 2016 (edited) 1 hour ago, minespatch said: Anyway, more art (these are some comics I quickly drew up. I'll include the dialogue under the strips if you can't read it very well). Otto: Hey Red! How would a vampire stand against two highly skilled zombies? Red: Gee Otto, I don't know. Maybe I should start by taking away his allowance? Otto: NOOOOOOOO!!! Please! Red: By the way, weren't you guys gonna dress up as the "Skele-bros" for Halloween? Otto: HAH! Don't get your hopes up! it isn't Halloween just yet! And a draft of Fluffy: Wtf? Why do you look like a dude? XD Last but not least, some drawings I did based off @Paxtonnnn's UT sprite edits. Mezu-wey: Metta-Toast: Papy-Spatch: (Just looks like normal Minespatch saying "NYEH!") Dwer-Kid and Undyra: (This was before Dwer requested Pax to be Alphys) Dragon-Frisk and Pax-Sans: Lipton-Muffet and Waddle-Spider: (I spent way more time on this than I should have. Now it just looks like an uncoloured Muffet :/ ) Mena An-Chara and Nabsta-Chris: Ysulriel: Mobbie (or should it be Temster?) Zeklo-san: (Dat face... I can't XD) And as an extra, some Dragon-Frisk and Ysulriel: I will complete some of these but please don't get offended if yours isn't. Edited October 20, 2016 by DragonMage156 12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted October 20, 2016 Share Posted October 20, 2016 12 minutes ago, DragonMage156 said: Papy-Spatch: (Just looks like normal Minespatch saying "NYEH!") Eeeyyyyy Ottopede might be a interesting concept for the Don't Starve comic. Especially if the shadows manage to get Otto. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted October 20, 2016 Author Share Posted October 20, 2016 1 hour ago, minespatch said: Ottopede might be a interesting concept for the Don't Starve comic. Especially if the shadows manage to get Otto. Not sure about that, though it may work for a side comic cos who doesn't love to see Wilson get the life scared out of him XD Oh damn, I forgot to post my anthro tutorial here: 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ysulyan Posted October 20, 2016 Share Posted October 20, 2016 7 hours ago, DragonMage156 said: And as an extra, some Dragon-Frisk and Ysulriel: Hah, I don't want to let go.TAKE ME WITH YOU. 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted October 20, 2016 Share Posted October 20, 2016 (edited) I love the ottopillar design! ^_^ Dino looks like that Professor from Luigi's Mansion. Also, I no longer have an opinion on shadow mage, good job! Seriously though, I am surprised everybody thinks of Mezukie when thinking of Flowey. I mean, I did it too, but still. P.S.: Decent guide on drawing anthromorphised animals. Edited October 20, 2016 by Mobbstar 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paxtonnnn Posted October 20, 2016 Share Posted October 20, 2016 14 hours ago, DragonMage156 said: Did I f#@*~! stutter? This is getting intemse. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted October 20, 2016 Author Share Posted October 20, 2016 10 hours ago, Ysulyan said: TAKE ME WITH YOU. Spoiler   9 hours ago, Mobbstar said:  I no longer have an opinion on shadow mage, good job! Seriously though, I am surprised everybody thinks of Mezukie when thinking of Flowey. I mean, I did it too, but still. What do you mean by that? It was really Pax's idea, I just drew it 4 hours ago, Paxtonnnn said: This is getting intense. Fify. Yeah Temmie can get pretty scary sometimes 0_0 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted October 21, 2016 Share Posted October 21, 2016 5 hours ago, DragonMage156 said: What do you mean by that? I am not sure... I just don't know what to think of her anymore, after having seen those comic panels. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted October 21, 2016 Author Share Posted October 21, 2016 42 minutes ago, Mobbstar said: I am not sure... I just don't know what to think of her anymore, after having seen those comic panels. Oh don't worry about those. Those comics were just for Halloween spoops. She's still the overly possessive demon of my dreams, trying to take over the world. Oh and still trying to eat Mr.Skits too. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted October 21, 2016 Share Posted October 21, 2016 20 minutes ago, DragonMage156 said: Oh don't worry about those. Those comics were just for Halloween spoops. She's still the overly possessive demon of my dreams, trying to take over the world. Oh and still trying to eat Mr.Skits too. SM and Skits are like Tom and Jerry? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted October 21, 2016 Author Share Posted October 21, 2016 18 minutes ago, minespatch said: SM and Skits are like Tom and Jerry? Not really since SM doesn't chase Skits around with a giant mallet XD 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DwerBomb Posted October 21, 2016 Share Posted October 21, 2016 Help Spoiler  2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted October 21, 2016 Author Share Posted October 21, 2016 3 hours ago, DwerBomb said: Help  Hide contents  That's odd. It works for me. Well incase that's not the only blank picture, here's my DA where you can fine almost everything I post. http://dragonmage156.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PiturcaClaudiuStef Posted October 21, 2016 Share Posted October 21, 2016 On 10/20/2016 at 3:18 AM, DragonMage156 said:  I'd tag Minespatch in this one but he usually sees everything anyway XD  That's not all there is but I'll post the rest later.  you mean @minespatch is this: 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mezukie Posted October 21, 2016 Share Posted October 21, 2016 On October 20, 2016 at 9:03 AM, Mobbstar said: Seriously though, I am surprised everybody thinks of Mezukie when thinking of Flowey. I mean, I did it too, but still. It's hug or be hugged. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted October 21, 2016 Share Posted October 21, 2016 26 minutes ago, Mezukie said: It's hug or be hugged. But by hugging someone, aren't you usually also getting hugged? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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