geni0529 Posted July 12, 2017 Author Share Posted July 12, 2017 1 hour ago, minespatch said: It's pretty tame right now. Excessive violence calls for spoilering but otherwise you're okay. I'll keep that in mind, though I probably will have to ask some opinions from friends what they think is too excessive. 27 minutes ago, DragonMage156 said: I don't think hell is a bad word (cause the forums haven't censored it yet ) but if there's more extreme words or violence later on, best to use a spoiler ^^; I shall! Thanks for the advice. Funny how I've been on these forums for almost 4 years yet don't know too much about the guidelines. Heck, I needed someone to tell me how to spoiler things. ( they have changed that like 17 times though, it's a little hard to keep up lol) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted July 12, 2017 Share Posted July 12, 2017 If you look at the bar at the top of your edit post, you can see a little eyeball at the end. That's spoiler. I'd post a pic but my laptop doesn't have printscreen ^^; 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted July 12, 2017 Author Share Posted July 12, 2017 12 minutes ago, DragonMage156 said: If you look at the bar at the top of your edit post, you can see a little eyeball at the end. That's spoiler. I'd post a pic but my laptop doesn't have printscreen ^^; Oh I know, someone showed me a little while back when I posted that magnificent (not ) Animatic 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted July 12, 2017 Share Posted July 12, 2017 This one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted July 12, 2017 Author Share Posted July 12, 2017 (edited) 20 minutes ago, minespatch said: <img class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" data-extension="core_Attachment" data-fileid="103996" src="//forums.kleicdn.com/monthly_2017_03/spoiler.png.a94d9c575652edfb3fcecf7df8f82ae5.png" alt="spoiler.png"/> This one? Yup! Edit: uh? Klei go home ur drunk What the? Why is that there? I deleted it but it just took both of them away. dang it. Edited July 12, 2017 by geni0529 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted July 12, 2017 Share Posted July 12, 2017 I'm unsure what it even is :/ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted July 12, 2017 Author Share Posted July 12, 2017 (edited) 1 hour ago, DragonMage156 said: I'm unsure what it even is :/ It is this photo 2 hours ago, geni0529 said: Yup! Edit: uh? Klei go home ur drunk What the? Why is that there? And the post looked like this before I deleted 'it' and there was also the strange string of text in the quote. Edited July 12, 2017 by geni0529 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted July 14, 2017 Author Share Posted July 14, 2017 (edited) Hey guys! I don't really have much to say this time, just have a nice day and hope you enjoy. Spidena: Red Emma; Yellow/Gold Seth: Dark blue Edited July 14, 2017 by geni0529 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted July 14, 2017 Share Posted July 14, 2017 The cycle continues. Poor Seth. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted July 16, 2017 Author Share Posted July 16, 2017 HEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GUYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. So if you cant tell from that I am REALLY excited to give you guys this part(s?) I don't know if I'm going to count this as more then one yet. Probably not. Anyhow, I worked really hard on these and I personally think they are some on my best art so far. I hope you guys have as much fun reading this as I had drawing it. Enjoy! ( Warning! Cartoon Blood, Implied Death, and Violence.) 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted July 16, 2017 Share Posted July 16, 2017 You really doubled your efforts on this one. Nice work using this story as a experimentation on art styles. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted July 16, 2017 Share Posted July 16, 2017 Oh wow. I see that this isn't your usual modern world, implied by the mages and such. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted July 16, 2017 Author Share Posted July 16, 2017 8 hours ago, minespatch said: You really doubled your efforts on this one. Nice work using this story as a experimentation on art styles. Thanks! While I do think I tried harder on these I wouldn't say my effort doubled. The problem with modern day name settings it's really hard for me to figure how to do shading for the backround, and they normally just end up being a flat color. 3 hours ago, DragonMage156 said: Oh wow. I see that this isn't your usual modern world, implied by the mages and such. Indeed it isn't! In this world we have magical mages, accurate archers, and superb swordsmen! (Oh I love alliteration) 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted July 17, 2017 Share Posted July 17, 2017 9 hours ago, geni0529 said: Indeed it isn't! In this world we have magical mages, accurate archers, and superb swordsmen! (Oh I love alliteration) Sounds like the kinda world my persona lives in ^_^ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted July 17, 2017 Author Share Posted July 17, 2017 Hey guys! So I noticed that I have officially been on the forums for four years. Oh sorry did I say forums? I meant FOURums. I'm hilarious I know! Anyhow, in honor of this momentous occasion I have redrawn some of my old ds ocs from when the roleplay zone was still active. I just wanted to give some fun facts first! Spoiler - The FOURums are the reason Emma exists. Pepole wouldn't let me roleplay with a character that had the same name as me so I changed Geni's name to Emma for just the role plays. She ended up becoming a completely different character! - Due to the pepole pointing out the same name issue I tried to change her name and got severely upset when I couldn't find anything that fit. Now it just rubs me the wrong way whenever someone points it out. I try to keep in mind that people probably mean it jokingly. - I was twelve-ish when I joined the FOURms. Now for the art! I have the old drawings of them from early 2016 vs ones I did just today! Wow how I have improved dear lord. But have I improved in story telling and coming up with something that is original? lets see. Spoiler 2014 Scarlet: ( Ironically I never did get to use her in roleplay, I was denied) Sylvia age: 16 gender: female race: human backstory: she had always been teased because of her discolored eyes, one was violet and the other was red kids ignored her her family was ashamed of her , soon enough when she was ten she was given a small dagger and sent off to live in the woods, she lived there with a while hunting small bunny's and rabbits, she found her way back home in three year or so and lived alone in the ally stealing what she could, then one day a family stumbled across her they shot her a disgusted look , she cried as the man took out a pistol he shot and it speed towards her face , that one moment she thought I wish I could just have normal eyes. Then she was taken to the world of don't stave. appearance: has one violet eye and one red eye, he wear a hoodie, ripped jeans, she has scarlet hair with purple highlights, and black high-tops. drawbacks: since she did get shot in the head she has mental issues , like not remembering things and her mind going blank. ability: hypnotizing but she don't know she has the ability personality: shy, untrusting, loyal when you get her trust, a bit insane, and kind inventory: a small dagger, and some bread. So I'm going to dissect this lovely bab. First off Sylvia? That's a shocker for me, I always thought her name was Scarlet? Guess not. I like Scarlet better though because Sylvia is the name of my aunt in law and that's just weird. Second off she is not longer 16 she's 8ish now. I don't recall her ever being a teenager, huh. Third, her backstory is quite different now. Scarlet was about three when her family abandoned her at the side of a road in a large city whilst on a road trip. Her family was ashamed of her eyes and hated her for it. She lived homeless on the streets begging for food and money until she got mixed up with the wrong crowd. A group of robbers offered her food and shelter if she helped them with robberies as she was small, light, and fast. She accepted the offer and helped them with minor robberies until one day the group did a robbery that was on a much larger scale. It ended in a shootout with the police where she was shot. Fourth: I don't know about the whole hypno thing but she is semi physic. She will say things like 'I have a bad feeling about this' and it'll come true. Or it'll be something like 'We should really stop chopping so much wood guys' then next thing you know there's a tree guard and boy howdy was the wood worth it man? Her personality has changed a slight bit, she has social anxiety but is very outgoing if she can break through it, she is mischievous, and doesn't mind doing what's wrong to survive ( as long it doesn't involve killing someone). Now for Ember: Name: Ember Gender: Female Race: Human? Appearance: Jet black hair with orange tips, Black jacket, Ripped lue jeans, Rings under eyes, Golden eyes, And pale skin. Pro: Can summon fire, Knows how to bandage and clean wounds. con: Not very loyal, Afraid of water. backstory: ??? Now for this sucker, not much to work with sadly. She is indeed Human, and do I really need to elaborate on the appearance changes? I wouldn't say she's hydrophobic now though, just that if she can avoid getting wet she will. Ember is very loyal now, though it takes a lot to earn her loyalty. The reason she has no backstory is because she has amnesia and cannot remember anything before she got to the Don't starve world. However that is no longer the case. Ember was held in a basement for the first ten years of her life, being forced to take part in experiments conducted by her father who had just gotten out of jail for illegal genetic modifying. ( Genetic modifications are illegal in the world this takes place in). Her father was caught and put on death row. She and her mother escaped before they could jail or question them. They moved to Canada under fake names and there Ember lives as a typical vigilante. (She isn't a DS OC anymore just a cool superhero girl) Anyways I hope you read that but I put them in spoilers because I know most pepole probably don't really care. Have a nice day and the next comic part should be out today or tomorrow. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted July 17, 2017 Share Posted July 17, 2017 If you ever want to rp sometime, I'm open on discord. I hope you can figure out Ember's backstory, it would help round her character somewhat. Are you going to be recycling these characters into your comic? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starthefox Posted July 18, 2017 Share Posted July 18, 2017 You have improved! There are two things I noticed, the necks are a small bit long, but otherwise okay, and you "hide" hands on your drawings. An art book I read once said "Draw ten hands a day until you feel comfortable drawing them." now I feel ten is overkill, but say, five large or seven small ones should do, unless you know this already and don't need me to point out the flaws^^ But in all seriousness, I like the way you draw humans, and I think that you should be content with what you have now. Many adults cannot draw half as good as you, which is what I love about art. But that's for another day. TL;DR try drawing more hands, and be content, but don't stop practising! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted July 18, 2017 Share Posted July 18, 2017 (edited) TL;DR My persona used to be just DragonMage until I decided to use the same name (Ria) as this one RP (that died shortly after :/ ) I joined. Fun Fact: Ria is the Japanese translation of my real name according to Google Edit: Went back and read it. Ember seems kinda like me (can summons fire and is afraid of water). However, Ria's powers come from her dragon half rather than experimentation. Edited July 18, 2017 by DragonMage156 Stopped being a lazy sh*t 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted July 18, 2017 Author Share Posted July 18, 2017 (edited) 8 hours ago, minespatch said: If you ever want to rp sometime, I'm open on discord. I hope you can figure out Ember's backstory, it would help round her character somewhat. Are you going to be recycling these characters into your comic? I probably won't give them any significant roll but if I ever need to draw large crowds you can bet there getting a cameo or two. 2 hours ago, Starthefox said: You have improved! There are two things I noticed, the necks are a small bit long, but otherwise okay, and you "hide" hands on your drawings. An art book I read once said "Draw ten hands a day until you feel comfortable drawing them." now I feel ten is overkill, but say, five large or seven small ones should do, unless you know this already and don't need me to point out the flaws^^ But in all seriousness, I like the way you draw humans, and I think that you should be content with what you have now. Many adults cannot draw half as good as you, which is what I love about art. But that's for another day. TL;DR try drawing more hands, and be content, but don't stop practising! What's this! Someone other than Mobb, Mine, or Dragonmage?!?!? Thanks for the advice! but my problem mostly lies is connecting the arm to the hand, it always just looks wonky whenever I try. I do practice them when I can though. Also thanks for the compliment on my style, at school I get quite a bit of criticism for it being to cartoony. I take pride in the uniqueness of my style though and other pepole liking it brings me joy! :3 2 hours ago, DragonMage156 said: TL;DR My persona used to be just DragonMage until I decided to use the same name (Ria) as this one RP (that died shortly after :/ ) I joined. Fun Fact: Ria is the Japanese translation of my real name according to Google Edit: Went back and read it. Ember seems kinda like me (can summons fire and is afraid of water). However, Ria's powers come from her dragon half rather than experimentation. Actually I had a character who was half dragon, I changed it though because I thought she just felt too powerful in the context of the story. Can I just mention I love your reason for editing that post? Edited July 18, 2017 by geni0529 I ACCIDENTALLY GAVE SPOILERS FOR THE COMIC GOD POOPY POOP 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted July 18, 2017 Share Posted July 18, 2017 1 hour ago, geni0529 said: Actually I had a character who was half dragon, I changed it though because I thought she just felt too powerful in the context of the story. Can I just mention I love your reason for editing that post? Well my persona is just me but more interesting (and an altered backstory as well). Me being afraid of water and heights is very real Also, thanks XD 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted July 18, 2017 Share Posted July 18, 2017 6 hours ago, Starthefox said: TL;DR try drawing more hands, and be content, but don't stop practising! 3 hours ago, geni0529 said: Thanks for the advice! but my problem mostly lies is connecting the arm to the hand, it always just looks wonky whenever I try. I do practice them when I can though. Here's the way I start drawing hands. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starthefox Posted July 18, 2017 Share Posted July 18, 2017 6 hours ago, geni0529 said: What's this! Someone other than Mobb, Mine, or DragonMage?!?!? Thanks for the advice! but my problem mostly lies is connecting the arm to the hand, it always just looks wonky whenever I try. I do practice them when I can though. Also thanks for the compliment on my style, at school I get quite a bit of criticism for it being to cartoony. I take pride in the uniqueness of my style though and other pepole liking it brings me joy! Heh, yeh! I am here now. But for problems with connecting, try drawing an oval on the arm, and then drawing the wrist/base of the hand from there. I'd give a tutorial, but I'm leaving to go somewhere soon. Good luck on drawing though! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted July 19, 2017 Author Share Posted July 19, 2017 hey guys! I'm really ticked at myself today because I woke up at 4pm, there was going to be more to this part but due to my terrible sleep schedule there isn't. Anyways enjoy and have a nice day! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted July 19, 2017 Share Posted July 19, 2017 I like the shading you did behind his bangs. Poor guy, I like how well adjusted you made him despite his faults. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted July 20, 2017 Author Share Posted July 20, 2017 Hey guys! Once again not much to say just enjoy and have a nice day! Emma; Yellow Seth: Dark blue Spidena: red 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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