I really like the characters. You're developing them as you continue through the story, showing us how they think, how they feel, and how they act. You have made the plot interesting, and gripping, with good plot twists. You have also managed to show how life is like in the wilderness. A lot of the plot is dialogue, which is a good thing and very critical for a story to have, but I feel like you should add a bit more action; show the evil side of the Don't Starve world. Make spiders attack, or a nearby pig town go crazy under the influence of the full moon. Maybe they should even meet another survivor - if there are any left alive. Your story is great: realistic characters, nice setting, interesting plot. All that I would recommend adding is a bit more fighting, exploration, or other things like that. You don't have to remove or lessen the dialogue - just add a bit more action. This is just my opinion. You don't have to use it to change your story. I'm just telling you what I think about it.