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MrFurphie    207

It's good, but I find there to be a bit too much emphasis on her kneeling down. Maybe have her hands closer to the tracks and have her pupils look at the tracks?

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minespatch    75848

Keep this as your main art thread and keep posting your progress pieces.

 

I like the pose, trees, and perspective but it does need some polishing. If you made the ground on the background darker compared to the foreground, it would help.

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Newax    221

Thanks guys, i'm not really an artist, so i don't know if there really will be other stuff to post any time soon, but if i will have something new, i'll be sure to post it here

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Newax    221

Hello, after a long period of time i've decided to try and draw something again, but this time, i'll actively post progress here and see if anyone got any tips

 

Trying not to spoil too much, for now i'll show how's the character lineart going along:

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minespatch    75848

Good work with the ponytails! Some people tend to just draw her with a bushel of a ponytail. IT's a good detail you noticed. The hatching on te hambat is good touch too.

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Newax    221

Okay, so uhm, remember the last update i posted? Yeah, i kinda scrapped that idea, realized it's far too complicated for me to finish off (I wanted to draw a fight between Wendy and Klaus) and instead went for something simpler

Not too long ago i've discovered an interesting clothing combination for Wendy that i really like and decided to draw her wearing it

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Please do me a favor and don't question her bust size it just fit more her costume like that okay i'm not perverted i'm not a bad person

 

I've also tried hard to shade it, but after a few (hundred) failed attempts i gave up on the idea, even with the help of my artist friend, who tried her best showing me how to do it. I hope one day i'll learn how to shade but for now it remains as unachievable as learning quantum physics as a toddler

She also shaded it on her own, and it honestly looked so cool i want to leave it here as well

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minespatch    75848

The finished version is really polished. I'll just shrug and figure that this is a older version of Wendy.

You should still try doodling the original and work from simple doodles. Don't doubt yourself.:wilson_smile:

Could still be a cool idea.

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