DragonMage156 Posted May 2, 2018 Author Share Posted May 2, 2018 Why doesn't this look right? (Ok first off, I know artists are their own worst critiques but something doesn't seems right here. It could be because I was never good at drawing folds... I haven't drawn my OCs in a while ( ._.) 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 2, 2018 Share Posted May 2, 2018 Probably the contours on the left don't follow the anatomy of your rabbit character. Contours on the right seem a little more natural. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted May 6, 2018 Author Share Posted May 6, 2018 So my brother pointed out something that I'm surprised I didn't see myself and that was them actually being wrapped in a scarf: I tried to bulge out Fluffy's side more but... Idk, it still looks like something's missing/off. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 6, 2018 Share Posted May 6, 2018 There's way more balance now in the bundle. Good work. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted May 9, 2018 Author Share Posted May 9, 2018 Brain: Wait we have to draw this? But I just thought of another cool thing! Me: I don't think we should delay these any lo- Brain: DO ET!! And so I bring redraws of my first (official) OC drawings. Starting with Red obviously: I kinda wanna bring back the roundness of his nose a little. Fluffy: I'm quite proud of this, especially the flute one. Ted: Cluelessness, remastered in HD. Otto: 2015 vs 2018. And before you say it, it's extremely apparent how much more expressive my form of drawings has become. Now to slink off to finish my dragon OCs as Spyro characters drawings... and then hopefully finishing my actual drawings from last year. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 9, 2018 Share Posted May 9, 2018 Congrats bud! It's great you've explored your talent. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted May 10, 2018 Author Share Posted May 10, 2018 Thanks! ^_^ As for the other thing I mentioned: You know these two dragons right? Spoiler Some pics if not. Well surprise surprise, I drew them as OG Spyro characters ^_^ though unlike Spyra, they won't be too confusing to the original due to different colours and shapes. I used a ref of Flame (Spyro: A Hero's Tail) for Sunny and kinda went for a similar pose for Storm(y). The only think I'm not sure about is Stormy's head. I simplified it and even shrunk it but I still think it could be better. We'll have to see. After all these are just concepts. (Also should his name be Stormy or Storm? I'm not entirely sure...) Though I honestly think these guys could run their own game/adventure. I even have mechanics for them and how they could work. Sunny Fire breath Glide Charge Head bash Climb Swim Stormy: Electric breath (can kill large armored enemies) Glide (not as well) Climb Can't charge or headbash due to lack of horns (but will probably get a substitute physical attack. A close ranged head swing maybe?) Can't swim And I think Sunny may need Stormy to clear/unlock a certain area (much like in Piglet's Big Game with Tigger and Pooh). I may have more in the future (like Firescale or maybe even a sea dragon character) but we'll have to see. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 10, 2018 Share Posted May 10, 2018 I think you should take what you learned from your spyro drawings and apply them to your original dragons. The spyro art has better fundamentals of design. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted May 10, 2018 Author Share Posted May 10, 2018 5 hours ago, minespatch said: I think you should take what you learned from your spyro drawings and apply them to your original dragons. The spyro art has better fundamentals of design. Yeah I've learnt a lot from drawing Spyro themed stuff. Two of which being shorter/proper leg proportions and smoother body shape. I have dragon drawings I need to finish in the future anyway so it's good practice 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted May 17, 2018 Author Share Posted May 17, 2018 I already posted the Spyro draft so I'll leave that out (it's now up on DA though). Decided to do an early upload? I finished an older drawing while working on the newer ones and decided to do an upload with that. I think if I lessen the amount I do, I can get atleast 2 (maybe 3 if I'm lucky) art uploads a month. The more art I upload, the better. So without further ado... Scarf Fluff (or Fluffy Scarf ) All you need in Winter ^_^ I would have done one for Summer but I wasn't feeling it with the draft so I scrapped it. Fera and Otto Banter: An older drawing from last year I decided to finish! (Might do the other one at some point). I forgot where the idea came from but this probably happen sometime during their first encounter (she probably out smarted him some way >u< ) 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 17, 2018 Share Posted May 17, 2018 So Fera's a bully or...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted May 19, 2018 Author Share Posted May 19, 2018 On 5/18/2018 at 6:44 AM, minespatch said: So Fera's a bully or...? Nah Fera's just teasing him. She's no bully but she's also not an idiot 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted May 21, 2018 Author Share Posted May 21, 2018 Made a poll for all Fallen Down readers Not gonna post the same one here cos then it'll split the scores and I'd like to have just one poll for everyone's results. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted May 28, 2018 Author Share Posted May 28, 2018 I know I probably posted him here before but now he's up on DA and I can't remember if I have or not so look at him again! Also another drawing from other a year ago I decided to finish: Probably a prequel to that earlier Otto one. I remember this was somewhat background practice (I think) but there's not a lot of background or detail at all. Well gotta start somewhere. In hindsight, I probably could have added more to the building. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 28, 2018 Share Posted May 28, 2018 What probably needs work is the shadow underneath Otto. OTherwise you could try drawing some brick texture on the wall? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted May 29, 2018 Author Share Posted May 29, 2018 22 hours ago, minespatch said: What probably needs work is the shadow underneath Otto. OTherwise you could try drawing some brick texture on the wall? Thanks for the info. Also adding a corner to the wall might also help with dimensions and wall placement (I think that's right) but chances are I won't be revisiting this drawing ( ._.) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted June 3, 2018 Author Share Posted June 3, 2018 Oh no, a dead meme! I'll be honest, I drew this back when it was still alive... This one however came later. Still Otto is such a memelord. You expected different? Chibi Tea: Drew this for @EgotisticalRaven a few months ago while he had the flu. Quite proud of this one ^_^ Draft version: Spoiler  3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted June 3, 2018 Share Posted June 3, 2018 I like the newer artstyle. Reminds me Star vs. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted June 3, 2018 Author Share Posted June 3, 2018 8 minutes ago, minespatch said: I like the newer artstyle. Reminds me Star vs. Uganda of chibi cos I can't guarantee a consistency with either ^^; 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EgotisticalRaven Posted June 3, 2018 Share Posted June 3, 2018 I still think that drawing of sick me is so adorable! No matter how many times I see it, I will always think it's adorable! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted June 4, 2018 Author Share Posted June 4, 2018 Guess what, I drew more chibis. I'll call this one... Chibi Sleep @EgotisticalRaven has a tendency to stay up late and never sleep at the right time (coming from the artist that was up till 2am drawing this XD ) Also added spikes to the tail to make it look more draconic. Some peeps on Boof said it looked more demonic before so I decided to try some things. Don't expect scale definitions though ^^; This is just a messy draft and will be edited in the future but till then, I have other stuff to do. 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted June 4, 2018 Share Posted June 4, 2018 6 hours ago, DragonMage156 said: has a tendency to stay up late You call this messy but this is way cleaner. I'm impressed with how far you've gotten. Keep up with this aesthetic. 1 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EgotisticalRaven Posted June 4, 2018 Share Posted June 4, 2018 My sleeping habits do tend to go all over the place! Sometimes you could swear we aren't in a similar time zone, because of how bad it is! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted June 10, 2018 Author Share Posted June 10, 2018 Seaside Ria: Wanted to draw her looking out at the sunset from a ledge and a city background. I did good on the background but I didn't want to colour it incase I messed up but I might revisit it in the future ^_^ Whiskers has a (mostly) human OC: Animu eyes again. I think Ria's eyes are a little too low, otherwise it's a pretty good piece I like the little detail I did with Whiskers' dog tags(?). I forgot his actual whiskers ^^; Oh I was about to post my Dragom here but just remembered that's technically DS >u<;; --- Oh I almost forgot, I made this Sig sona (persona for a Sigmund Corp/TtM) for this AU on Discord Quite proud of it ^_^ 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted June 10, 2018 Share Posted June 10, 2018 Nice work on the background! The colored touch adds something that a monocolor background wouldn't have added. Whiskers used to be in the military? Great work on the digital stuff! You could slap that on a stock image of a forest if you wanted. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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