greenglacier Posted January 2, 2016 Share Posted January 2, 2016 Plot so deep, I almost lost in it. Like the art stile and the story too.Keep going. Can't wait what happens next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted January 3, 2016 Author Share Posted January 3, 2016 (edited) Changed Pages: 26-28: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/58647-dont-starve-resumptus/page-12 I'm sorry about this sudden editing guys. Edited January 3, 2016 by Quoth143 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted January 3, 2016 Share Posted January 3, 2016 (edited) Changed Pages: 26 - 28 I'm sorry about this sudden editing guys. And by that you mean you added "after restoring him" to page 28? EDIT: Still don't get it. What did you change? Edited January 3, 2016 by Mobbstar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted January 3, 2016 Author Share Posted January 3, 2016 And by that you mean you added "after restoring him" to page 28? ???That line was already there. I kind of wanted to redo parts of the section of the comic because I've realized that I honestly don't know what to do with Imber, Camila, and Alister. They're kind of just there, taking up space and I wanted to smooth it out a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CameoAppearance Posted January 3, 2016 Share Posted January 3, 2016 Sounds fair to me. Since Albert loses sanity in daylight, he'd need something to counteract the loss, what would be a good idea? I can't think of any items that he should have that make sense for sanity regeneration. Instead, you should make him regenerate sanity by doing an activity of some sort (like how Wigfrid gets sanity from killing mobs, or DST-Woodie gets sanity from planting trees, and of course Willow gets sanity from watching things burn), or increase his sanity gains from something that already exists, or make him lose sanity more slowly in certain situations (like Wendy, but maybe only the sanity drain of dusk/night instead of from everything). A lot of the canon characters have a major perk, a minor perk, and a drawback. The major perk is a showy special ability, like Wendy having Abigail or Wickerbottom's books. (Even Wes has one, with his balloons.) The minor perk is something helpful but more subtle, like Wendy's sanity conservation or Wickerbottom's free science level. I'm curious what Albert's strange power will be. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted January 3, 2016 Author Share Posted January 3, 2016 I can't think of any items that he should have that make sense for sanity regeneration. Instead, you should make him regenerate sanity by doing an activity of some sort (like how Wigfrid gets sanity from killing mobs, or DST-Woodie gets sanity from planting trees, and of course Willow gets sanity from watching things burn), or increase his sanity gains from something that already exists, or make him lose sanity more slowly in certain situations (like Wendy, but maybe only the sanity drain of dusk/night instead of from everything). A lot of the canon characters have a major perk, a minor perk, and a drawback. The major perk is a showy special ability, like Wendy having Abigail or Wickerbottom's books. (Even Wes has one, with his balloons.) The minor perk is something helpful but more subtle, like Wendy's sanity conservation or Wickerbottom's free science level. I'm curious what Albert's strange power will be.That's a much better idea. I can't really see him having an item, but doing something that could help him regenerate the sanity makes more sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted January 3, 2016 Author Share Posted January 3, 2016 (edited) Page 29 is the most edited so far. I decided to get rid of Alister, Imber, and Camila because I didn't know what to do with them. I apologize for the editing but I wanted to smooth this section out a bit. Edited January 14, 2016 by Quoth143 8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted January 3, 2016 Share Posted January 3, 2016 PEPPERKAKER!!!! <3<3<3 :3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AvengerofSquids Posted January 4, 2016 Share Posted January 4, 2016 Jokul is SO CUTE! 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teras47 Posted January 4, 2016 Share Posted January 4, 2016 I like the edited pages! Webcomics are unique in that previous publications can be retconned, so I honestly think it's pretty cool that you decided to take advantage of that to improve your story. Use every tool at your disposal! Huzzah! Also Jokul is the cutest thing... just after an angry Wilson in a Breezy Vest. I find his angry little face weirdly adorable. <3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted January 4, 2016 Author Share Posted January 4, 2016 (edited) Final retcon of this section of the comic. Mostly page 30 in terms of dialogue. Edited January 14, 2016 by Quoth143 9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theinsanefruitloop Posted January 5, 2016 Share Posted January 5, 2016 yey! for updates! 8D 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted January 5, 2016 Author Share Posted January 5, 2016 (edited) Edited January 6, 2016 by Quoth143 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LucasShiroi Posted January 5, 2016 Share Posted January 5, 2016 Well, Albert certainly has it rough, seems he's rather stuck there 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted January 5, 2016 Share Posted January 5, 2016 How will Wilson science his way out of this one, I wonder? Btw This reminds me of Undertale, just a little bit. Just saying. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted January 6, 2016 Author Share Posted January 6, 2016 How will Wilson science his way out of this one, I wonder? Btw This reminds me of Undertale, just a little bit. Just saying.Don't freak, but I haven't played Undertale. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted January 6, 2016 Share Posted January 6, 2016 Don't freak, but I haven't played Undertale. BURN THE HERETIC Yeesh, Albert just does not get a break, does he. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted January 6, 2016 Share Posted January 6, 2016 *your brother*these turns This reminds me of Undertale, just a little bit. Just saying. How? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted January 6, 2016 Author Share Posted January 6, 2016 *your brother*these turns How?Thank you. Revised and reposted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted January 6, 2016 Share Posted January 6, 2016 inb4 Albert literally becomes Asriel. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted January 6, 2016 Share Posted January 6, 2016 Don't freak, but I haven't played Undertale. Me neither. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted January 6, 2016 Author Share Posted January 6, 2016 Back to Woodie, Lucy, and Albert. 9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acemurdock Posted January 8, 2016 Share Posted January 8, 2016 Aw Al's sick, should have got his Grue Shot!(like flu shot...heh...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted January 8, 2016 Author Share Posted January 8, 2016 Since greencaps are good for sanity but not health, I figured they would cause nausea when consumed. 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted January 9, 2016 Share Posted January 9, 2016 Aw look at Woodie, trying to help Albert out. I wonder what will happen next. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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