Silentdarkness1 Posted December 30, 2015 Share Posted December 30, 2015 That is a bit overpowered. Reduced sanity drain is fine tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted December 30, 2015 Author Share Posted December 30, 2015 That is a bit overpowered. Reduced sanity drain is fine tho.Ok. What about a loss of sanity in daylight? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 Doesn't Albert already lose sanity in daylight? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted December 31, 2015 Author Share Posted December 31, 2015 Doesn't Albert already lose sanity in daylight?Yeah...dumb question...I'm just trying to balance things out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 Sure. I think that Albert should still lose sanity from the nightmare equipment. Just much slower than normal. That way, he can't use it forever, but he can still get much more use of it safely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted December 31, 2015 Author Share Posted December 31, 2015 I'm sorry I made you sad Wilson. 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 Not sure if this is a one-off or a canon comic page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted December 31, 2015 Author Share Posted December 31, 2015 Not sure if this is a one-off or a canon comic page.Canon comic page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 I can now cut the plot with a knife, it's so thick and deep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted December 31, 2015 Author Share Posted December 31, 2015 (edited) I can now cut the plot with a knife, it's so thick and deep.I didn't think this was a plot-bomb. I thought I had already established that Wilson was on the throne. What am I doing wrong? Edited December 31, 2015 by Quoth143 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 Ah, my apologies. It was actually kind of hard for me to figure out that was Wilson. maybe because his hair doesn't look so fabulously spike-tastic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted December 31, 2015 Author Share Posted December 31, 2015 Ah, my apologies. It was actually kind of hard for me to figure out that was Wilson. maybe because his hair doesn't look so fabulously spike-tastic I should apologize, that was a very poor reaction on my part. I let my frustration get the better of me (not that, that is an excuse.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 (edited) It was actually kind of hard for me to figure out that was Wilson. Wait what... Ever since when does Wilson wear a tuxedo and tie and no iconic wig of vim and vigor? EDIT: page 30There has probably been more than one night monster. Late for the party, but it's "acquainted". Edited December 31, 2015 by Mobbstar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted December 31, 2015 Author Share Posted December 31, 2015 Wait what... Ever since when does Wilson wear a tuxedo and tie and no iconic wig of vim and vigor? EDIT: page 30There has probably been more than one night monster. Late for the party, but it's "acquainted".Oops. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AvengerofSquids Posted January 1, 2016 Share Posted January 1, 2016 Aw, Wilson, don't look so sad! Your brother's just trapped in a world filled with horrible monsters - how bad can it be? 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teras47 Posted January 1, 2016 Share Posted January 1, 2016 I recognized it as Wilson! Do I get a prize? ;D Side note, Wilson's legs-pose look great in this page, but his cloak looks a little too flat to be hanging off a chair. It kinda makes it look like he's awkwardly crouching. Some kind of line, wrinkle, plane change there might help?The jump to this image was also just a wee bit abrupt; I kind of expected another page with Wilson talking/arguing about "curing" Albert after the last page, and I think this page would've been better introduced if the new King had said something about Albert being a monster once and how it was still part of him. Just some friendly critiques! <3 Finally, amazing job on the foreshadowing for this. From Albert's weird deja-vu, to his partial transformation, to his aversion to light, there were lots of little hints. Looking back, that is. I didn't see this coming either, lol. But it shows how intentional this development was, how carefully planned, and I think that's really awesome. Looking forward to more! 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted January 1, 2016 Author Share Posted January 1, 2016 I recognized it as Wilson! Do I get a prize? ;D Side note, Wilson's legs-pose look great in this page, but his cloak looks a little too flat to be hanging off a chair. It kinda makes it look like he's awkwardly crouching. Some kind of line, wrinkle, plane change there might help?The jump to this image was also just a wee bit abrupt; I kind of expected another page with Wilson talking/arguing about "curing" Albert after the last page, and I think this page would've been better introduced if the new King had said something about Albert being a monster once and how it was still part of him. Just some friendly critiques! <3 Finally, amazing job on the foreshadowing for this. From Albert's weird deja-vu, to his partial transformation, to his aversion to light, there were lots of little hints. Looking back, that is. I didn't see this coming either, lol. But it shows how intentional this development was, how carefully planned, and I think that's really awesome. Looking forward to more! Your critique is much appreciated. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CameoAppearance Posted January 1, 2016 Share Posted January 1, 2016 Sure. I think that Albert should still lose sanity from the nightmare equipment. Just much slower than normal. That way, he can't use it forever, but he can still get much more use of it safely. Yeah, even Maxwell still has a sanity drain if he uses both the sword and the armour at the same time, just a much smaller one than anyone else because it's working against his sanity regen. (It works out to a third of the sanity loss any other character experiences.) Being able to use the nightmare equipment at the same reduced cost as Maxwell but being just as vulnerable to all other sanity losses seems like a fair perk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted January 1, 2016 Author Share Posted January 1, 2016 (edited) Yeah, even Maxwell still has a sanity drain if he uses both the sword and the armour at the same time, just a much smaller one than anyone else because it's working against his sanity regen. (It works out to a third of the sanity loss any other character experiences.) Being able to use the nightmare equipment at the same reduced cost as Maxwell but being just as vulnerable to all other sanity losses seems like a fair perk.Sounds fair to me. Since Albert loses sanity in daylight, he'd need something to counteract the loss, what would be a good idea? Edited January 1, 2016 by Quoth143 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted January 1, 2016 Share Posted January 1, 2016 Uh....only thing I can think of is him having a special umbrella. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted January 1, 2016 Author Share Posted January 1, 2016 Uh....only thing I can think of is him having a special umbrella.Maybe his badge? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silentdarkness1 Posted January 1, 2016 Share Posted January 1, 2016 Well, let's see.... The general theme of items that provide a sanity boost is either something that's reassuring, no matter what, or that is dapper. For the officer himself, I don't see how the badge would do anything to reassure him of anything. And the badge isn't dapper. I think you might want to ex-machina in something extra. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted January 2, 2016 Author Share Posted January 2, 2016 An alternate meeting between Albert, Willow, and Webber. 8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted January 2, 2016 Share Posted January 2, 2016 You could literally slap my avatar on Evil_Albert's face and have the design for my OC. They have the giant fancy broadsword and everything. But of course, it's still a badass design, so who am I to complain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quoth143 Posted January 2, 2016 Author Share Posted January 2, 2016 Today's update is a bit small. I think I'm going to rewrite and redraw parts of this section of the comic. I've come to realize that I don't know what to do with Imber, Alister, and Camila, and they've pretty much disappeared as this goes on. I hope you guys are ok with that. I definitely want to make this a smoother chapter. 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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