geni0529 Posted February 20, 2018 Author Share Posted February 20, 2018 22 minutes ago, DragonMage156 said: And chapter 2? We've already finished chapter two ^u^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted February 21, 2018 Share Posted February 21, 2018 Are you going to post the chapter soon? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted February 21, 2018 Author Share Posted February 21, 2018 (edited) 8 hours ago, minespatch said: Are you going to post the chapter soon? It depends, I want to get the comic up on tumblr before I do that, but the laptop that has the original image files Is broken. But I will start posting parts for chapter three before April I know that much. Edited February 21, 2018 by geni0529 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted February 21, 2018 Author Share Posted February 21, 2018 (edited) Doodles of the day! Been practicing facial expressions and stuff, also I’m covering up the girls other eye in the last drawing because it’s kinda major spoilers lol. Edited February 21, 2018 by geni0529 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starthefox Posted February 21, 2018 Share Posted February 21, 2018 Would you mind some constructive criticism? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted February 21, 2018 Author Share Posted February 21, 2018 (edited) 43 minutes ago, Starthefox said: Would you mind some constructive criticism? Not at all! Go ahead! Edited February 21, 2018 by geni0529 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted February 21, 2018 Share Posted February 21, 2018 What secrets does your universe hold, I wonder... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starthefox Posted February 21, 2018 Share Posted February 21, 2018 (edited) I'm seeing a lot of sameface syndrome here; Although there are some different chin shapes, all of the faces are rather long. And just a side note, Emma is supposed to be pre-pubescent right? So she should have a bit of a rounder, and more compact face. A baby doesn't look like a grown man right? Edited February 21, 2018 by Starthefox not trying to uh, offend or anything. just something I noticed 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted February 21, 2018 Author Share Posted February 21, 2018 1 hour ago, Starthefox said: I'm seeing a lot of sameface syndrome here; Although there are some different chin shapes, all of the faces are rather long. And just a side note, Emma is supposed to be pre-pubescent right? So she should have a bit of a rounder, and more compact face. A baby doesn't look like a grown man right? Don't worry I don't take offense to that at all! I've been trying to work on that, I just can't always get it quite right. Thanks so much for the criticism, I'll try to work on that even more. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted February 23, 2018 Share Posted February 23, 2018 Try making a expression sketchbook. Look up wacky faces and redraw them without tracing. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted February 25, 2018 Author Share Posted February 25, 2018 On February 23, 2018 at 1:23 AM, minespatch said: Try making a expression sketchbook. Look up wacky faces and redraw them without tracing. That's a great idea actually, thanks I'll try that 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted February 26, 2018 Author Share Posted February 26, 2018 Hey guys! I got some art for you! I also did a messy animation of Emma waving but it’s not saving properly so you’ll get it later. Enjoy! I was actually hoping for your opinions and tips for this one, it’s a wip of Ember riding a motorcycle. If any of you have any idea how I could improve it that would be awesome! 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starthefox Posted February 26, 2018 Share Posted February 26, 2018 For the motorcycle picture, get tons of references!!! Refernces are like super important. Also, I'm liking the more child like Emma! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted February 26, 2018 Share Posted February 26, 2018 I'm with Star. Find some refs and find other angles to make your drawing more dynamic. Is that a prince and king? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted February 26, 2018 Share Posted February 26, 2018 (edited) Aw I love rounder Emma. And yeh, some refs always help (even though I fail to look at some myself ^^; ) I like the last image of the king/prince. Really cute drawing ^_^ Edited February 26, 2018 by DragonMage156 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted February 26, 2018 Author Share Posted February 26, 2018 6 hours ago, Starthefox said: For the motorcycle picture, get tons of references!!! Refernces are like super important. Also, I'm liking the more child like Emma! Thanks! It took a bit of fiddling around to find a shape I could get consistent, but I think I’ve found something that works. 6 hours ago, minespatch said: I'm with Star. Find some refs and find other angles to make your drawing more dynamic. Is that a prince and king? Yup. 2 hours ago, DragonMage156 said: Aw I love rounder Emma. And yeh, some refs always help (even though I fail to look at some myself ^^; ) I like the last image of the king/prince. Really cute drawing ^_^ Thanks for the tips guys, I almost always look at a bunch of references so I think I’m good in that department. Also, I think I’ve said thanks too much this post, but thanks. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted February 26, 2018 Author Share Posted February 26, 2018 Hey guys! You know how I said I did a lil animation? Well here it is. It's certainly not the best by any means but I'm pretty proud of it! If you want to know I used flipbook lite. 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted February 27, 2018 Share Posted February 27, 2018 12 hours ago, geni0529 said: I think I’ve said thanks too much this post, but thanks. You could always use the thanks react Also nice animation ^_^ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starthefox Posted February 27, 2018 Share Posted February 27, 2018 You know, if you really wanted to do animations, I'd suggest unity. They have great tools for skeleton animating, no need to draw each frame. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted February 27, 2018 Author Share Posted February 27, 2018 32 minutes ago, Starthefox said: You know, if you really wanted to do animations, I'd suggest unity. They have great tools for skeleton animating, no need to draw each frame. I'll check it out when I have some free time, but the teacher wants us to only use flip book or maya so the animations I show you guys will probably be drawn frame by frame. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted February 27, 2018 Share Posted February 27, 2018 Nice arm animation. It flows a lot. You should try learning what you used for other body parts. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted February 28, 2018 Author Share Posted February 28, 2018 Doodles! If your wondering what’s up with the fingers I was making little notes about stuff that relates to the comic, you guys can’t see it tough cause spoilers. Also I’ve been getting into Danganronpa so don’t be surprised if you see some fanart of that soon. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted February 28, 2018 Share Posted February 28, 2018 58 minutes ago, geni0529 said: My favorite of the group. I love how the lighting affected your drawing. She looks emotionally traumatized. What happened? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted February 28, 2018 Author Share Posted February 28, 2018 6 hours ago, minespatch said: My favorite of the group. I love how the lighting affected your drawing. She looks emotionally traumatized. What happened? 1: Thank you! I was really proud of that drawing too, as I don’t do dynamic shadows like that much. 2: This is technically spoilers but I’m tired of just saying spoilers over and over again so, she gets emotionally and physically tortured by someone and for a little while she’s in that tramatized state. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted February 28, 2018 Share Posted February 28, 2018 17 hours ago, geni0529 said: Jash...? 0u0 I like the way Emma's hair looks in these ones. Maybe you should use it in your comic more ^_^ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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