geni0529 Posted June 8, 2017 Author Share Posted June 8, 2017 Sorry there was no part yesterday, I had to go to an awards ceremony for school Anyways I'm trying out using actual text instead of handwriting it. I kinda like the look of it but don't at the same time. What do you guys think? Also, I did a new thing with Emma freckles in the last page but forgot to mention it, so tell me if you guys think that's an improvement too. ( because of the new text I don't think ill need to translate at the bottom but if anyone has trouble reading just say and ill provide it at the bottom) Red; Spidena Dark Blue: Seth Yellow/Gold: Emma 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted June 8, 2017 Share Posted June 8, 2017 The fonted text is better and cleaner. Thanks for adding that. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted June 8, 2017 Share Posted June 8, 2017 Ghost lines. It's much easier to read. Thanks and dw, I'm sure you'll get used to it I think the freckles are a nice touch though if it were me, I'd probably lessen it a bit. Then again, it's your OC so you don't have to change anything of you think it looks better like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted June 9, 2017 Author Share Posted June 9, 2017 On 6/8/2017 at 5:04 AM, DragonMage156 said: Ghost lines. It's much easier to read. Thanks and dw, I'm sure you'll get used to it I think the freckles are a nice touch though if it were me, I'd probably lessen it a bit. Then again, it's your OC so you don't have to change anything of you think it looks better like that. spooky I'm sure I will! I may try to change what font I use to see if I like that better, Might even give certain characters different fonts to match there personality. Ill probably just have to experiment with it though. It doesn't seem to be a whole lot to me but next time I draw her in a part ill try having a little less like you said and see if I like the look of it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted June 9, 2017 Share Posted June 9, 2017 6 hours ago, geni0529 said: I'm sure I will! I may try to change what font I use to see if I like that better, Might even give certain characters different fonts to match there personality. Ill probably just have to experiment with it though. That's what me and @Aundee-D-Cat do in our stories. Nothing wrong with you doing it too 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted June 10, 2017 Author Share Posted June 10, 2017 hey new part! Probably no part for Saturday or sunday sorry! Hopw you like it! Emma: Yellow Seth: Dark blue Spidena: Red 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted June 10, 2017 Share Posted June 10, 2017 Nice job with the lighting on the top left. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted June 10, 2017 Share Posted June 10, 2017 his arm looks like it should be longer. Other than that, good as always! I also noticed I never said anything because I had nothing to criticise. MAybe should'a dropped some encouragement. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted June 10, 2017 Share Posted June 10, 2017 Something seems off about the arm. You might want to look at a online art doll so you can see how a body contorts. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted June 11, 2017 Author Share Posted June 11, 2017 Luckily I was able to squeeze in an hour or two to do this page, hope you guys like it! I know I do Spidena: Red Seth: Dark blue Emma: Yellow/Gold 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted June 11, 2017 Share Posted June 11, 2017 His shirt changed colour and he has sharp teeth! RUN!! It's a DEMON!! 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted June 11, 2017 Share Posted June 11, 2017 cue "thump" sound 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted June 11, 2017 Share Posted June 11, 2017 OH! It's a blanket! That's why it seemed off. Interesting first impression. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted June 11, 2017 Author Share Posted June 11, 2017 8 hours ago, DragonMage156 said: His shirt changed colour and he has sharp teeth! RUN!! It's a DEMON!! 6 hours ago, minespatch said: OH! It's a blanket! That's why it seemed off. Interesting first impression. I guess it was hard to tell it was a blanket? Sorry I didn't notice that it was, any idea how I could fix that next time I have a scene like that? Because I have 0 idea lol 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted June 11, 2017 Share Posted June 11, 2017 10 hours ago, geni0529 said: I guess it was hard to tell it was a blanket? Sorry I didn't notice that it was, any idea how I could fix that next time I have a scene like that? Because I have 0 idea lol Ah. Didn't realize ^^; sorry but no, no idea. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted June 12, 2017 Author Share Posted June 12, 2017 Woooohooo! Part 22! Are you guys enjoying it so far? I know its a little slow but things will speed up soon trust me. You decide if that means good or bad for these characters Spidena: Red Seth: Dark Blue Emma: Yellow/Gold 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted June 12, 2017 Share Posted June 12, 2017 Nice work on the sofa. I like the thick lines you used there. You might want to try that on the characters too(except for the eyes). 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted June 13, 2017 Author Share Posted June 13, 2017 Hey guys! Not much to say this time just have a nice day! :3 Spidena: Red Emma: Yellow/gold Seth: Dark blue 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted June 14, 2017 Author Share Posted June 14, 2017 (edited) Hiddily Hey! There's a second part for today to make up for not having a part yesterday Anyhow enjoy Emma borderline insulting her dad??? Is it an insult??? Ehhhhh??? Kinda but kinda not... Emma: Yellow/Gold Spidena: Red Seth: Dark blue Gotta have some fluff before I start setting things on fire THE FRECKLES I FORGOT THE FRICKEN FRECKLES I KNEW I WAS MISSING SOMETHING GREAT WONDERFUL THATS THERE NOW BECAUSE ITS ANOTHER BLOODY HOUR FOR ME TO FIX IT AAAAAAAAAAAAA. Edited June 14, 2017 by geni0529 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted June 14, 2017 Share Posted June 14, 2017 Impressive how fast you're improving on your art. Keep it up. Love the shading you added to these new pages. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted June 14, 2017 Share Posted June 14, 2017 6 hours ago, geni0529 said: THE FRECKLES I FORGOT THE FRICKEN FRECKLES I was actually thinking that XD 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted June 16, 2017 Author Share Posted June 16, 2017 Hey guys! So we may have a bit of a delay soon because the bases of the parts have mostly been pre-drawn up to here but now ill draw them the day off, so there will probably be more days without a page. Ill see how fast I can get the base done along with the digital version and make a posting schedule off of that! If I can ill try to keep it everyday though! Emma: Yellow Seth: Dark blue Spidena: Red 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted June 16, 2017 Share Posted June 16, 2017 Exactly my thoughts "What." not even question mark 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted June 16, 2017 Share Posted June 16, 2017 Did a psychologist tell her that? Did you draw this? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted June 16, 2017 Author Share Posted June 16, 2017 (edited) 56 minutes ago, minespatch said: Did a psychologist tell her that? Did you draw this? Nah, just teachers and people being rude when they think nobody can hear them. and no I didn't my girlfriend did the other day and I thought it was a lovely snek so now it's my profile pic Edited June 16, 2017 by geni0529 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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