geni0529 Posted May 16, 2017 Author Share Posted May 16, 2017 (edited) On 5/14/2017 at 9:44 PM, DragonMage156 said: I take it these two are divorced? They don't seem to agree with each other. No, they are not divorced, just fighting for reasons you will soon find out ( it took me a day to think of how to respond to this :-:) Edited May 16, 2017 by geni0529 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted May 16, 2017 Author Share Posted May 16, 2017 These two look a little wonky because I was trying some new angles, but there are certainly good parts to it too, I love how the shadows came out on this one Dark blue: Seth (Brown hair) Yellow: Emma ( Blonde hair) Red: Spidena (Black hair) 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ootay Posted May 16, 2017 Share Posted May 16, 2017 Looking back at your first post in this thread, you really improved alot! Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted May 17, 2017 Author Share Posted May 17, 2017 16 hours ago, Ootay said: Looking back at your first post in this thread, you really improved alot! Good job. Why Thank you! Anyway, Here's Part 12! Also, I'm quite busy the rest of this week with a choir recital tomorrow, then a play I am in on Thursday, and on Friday an overnight fieldtrip, so if there are no new pages its probably because i'm too busy ^u^; Dark blue: Seth (brown hair) Red: Spidena (Black hair) Yellow/gold: Emma ( Blonde hair) If you are having trouble reading that last one its Spidena going "Why are you here all of a sudden Seth? 5 MONTHS with no letters, no communication, then you just walk in here in the middle of the night?!?" 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 17, 2017 Share Posted May 17, 2017 Posting the pencils really makes one appreciate the final product. Thanks for posting both versions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katherinethecraz Posted May 18, 2017 Share Posted May 18, 2017 eyy that's pretty good 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted May 23, 2017 Author Share Posted May 23, 2017 (edited) Hey guys! So this next part ain't the best because im running on like two hours of sleep but I really hope you guys enjoy it! Seth- Dark blue Spidena- Red Emma- Yellow Also, due to remarks that have been made to me in the past I feel I must explain a certain characters name. There is a character named Geni in this, now I know that sounds narcissistic or childish to name a character after myself but these characters (Geni in particular) are characters I created years ago when I was seven or six. As I grew up they became more three dimensional and not so cringe characters, but because some of these characters are so old certain things I just cannot change. I have tried for the longest time to come up a different name for her but NOTHING felt right, so despite past mockery of having a character with my name I have decided that there is no other name I woukd feel satisfied calling her by. So I introduce the first mention of one of our main character in the comic, Geni. if you are having trouble reading it, it says: Seth: The battlefield gets worse every day, casualties on our side are worse then ever, and the council is considering surrender. Spidena: What!?! Seth: It gets worse. About a week ago an attempt was made on my life. I survived but our other daughter, Geni, was blinded on one side. Spidena: Oh my god! Edited May 23, 2017 by geni0529 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted May 23, 2017 Share Posted May 23, 2017 12 minutes ago, geni0529 said: Also, due to remarks that have been made to me in the past I feel I must explain a certain characters name. There is a character named Geni in this, now I know that sounds narcissistic or childish to name a character after myself but these characters (Geni in particular) are characters I created years ago when I was seven or six. As I grew up they became more three dimensional and not so cringe characters, but because some of these characters are so old certain things I just cannot change. I have tried for the longest time to come up a different name for her but NOTHING felt right, so despite past mockery of having a character with my name I have decided that there is no other name I would feel satisfied calling her by. That's totally fine imo. My persona existed without a proper name until just recently but even now I use her a lot in RPs and such. Her name is actually a Japanese (well the Google version of it) translation of my real name. Perhaps you can try that. However, I agree that naming a character is the hardest part... well that and developing backstory and a personality ^^; 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 23, 2017 Share Posted May 23, 2017 Kind of interesting how your storyboard dialogue is compared to finalized version. Again, the digitalized version is a huge improvement. Though I like how the penciled version had pupils on Seth. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted May 23, 2017 Author Share Posted May 23, 2017 8 hours ago, DragonMage156 said: That's totally fine imo. My persona existed without a proper name until just recently but even now I use her a lot in RPs and such. Her name is actually a Japanese (well the Google version of it) translation of my real name. Perhaps you can try that. However, I agree that naming a character is the hardest part... well that and developing backstory and a personality ^^; Names are terrible honestly, I feel you. Personalitys have always been easy for me though because most of theses characters have real life inspirations :3 7 hours ago, minespatch said: Kind of interesting how your storyboard dialogue is compared to finalized version. Again, the digitalized version is a huge improvement. Though I like how the penciled version had pupils on Seth. I really like the pupils too, it's kinda something I'm on the edge on putting in the finalized version but I'm not sure about it yet. There is sorta a reason the dialogue is slightly different. The storyboard is just me either summing it up because I don't feel like writing or writing how I would say it, however when I write the dialogue for the finalized version it's how the characters would say it not me. Does that make sense? I feel like that doesn't make sense. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted May 24, 2017 Author Share Posted May 24, 2017 (edited) Hey guys here part 14! Are you enjoying the comic so far? We kind of started off at a very dramatic point so I wanted there just be some nice exposition and fluff, after all it can't all be angst (yet ;3) Anyhow I noticed the way I drew Spidena standing, it kind of looks like she's doing 'BOI' and as a memer I felt I must mention this. Spidena: Red Emma; Yellow Seth; Dark Blue Anyhow, here is what the comic says if you are having trouble reading it! Spidena: How could you let that happen to our daughter!?! You- You- You blithering idiot, You- Emma: Mooooom! Edited May 24, 2017 by geni0529 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 24, 2017 Share Posted May 24, 2017 14 hours ago, geni0529 said: I really like the pupils too, it's kinda something I'm on the edge on putting in the finalized version but I'm not sure about it yet. Well, to make the pupils work, maybe you should do them in lighter colors so they show terror more obviously? 18 minutes ago, geni0529 said: "I-'m sorry it red! to get to her there was just hundreds of men" IS that what he's saying? Conflicted. I like the additional furniture in the pencil version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted May 24, 2017 Author Share Posted May 24, 2017 2 minutes ago, minespatch said: Well, to make the pupils work, maybe you should do them in lighter colors so they show terror more obviously? "I-'m sorry it red! to get to her there was just hundreds of men" IS that what he's saying? Conflicted. I like the additional furniture in the pencil version. Possibly... And he's saying " I-I'm sorry I tried! There were just hundreds of men!" You were really close though! Im surprised you could read that :3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 24, 2017 Share Posted May 24, 2017 4 hours ago, geni0529 said: You were really close though! Im surprised you could read that :3 " I-I'm sorry I tried! There were just hundreds of men!" I wanted to read what it said. Felt like the missing comment from the digitalized version could fill in some hidden context. Wait... What did he do? I'm confused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted May 24, 2017 Author Share Posted May 24, 2017 11 hours ago, minespatch said: I wanted to read what it said. Felt like the missing comment from the digitalized version could fill in some hidden context. Wait... What did he do? I'm confused. Ah sorry that does seem confusing, probably why I cut it out. It says 'I tried' as in he tryed to protect Geni, but there were to many men. Does that help clear it up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 25, 2017 Share Posted May 25, 2017 Kind of. You might want to post that digitalized pages on your first post in a spoiler so people can catch up to the story. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted May 25, 2017 Author Share Posted May 25, 2017 45 minutes ago, minespatch said: Kind of. You might want to post that digitalized pages on your first post in a spoiler so people can catch up to the story. Pfft- you seriously read my mind, i'm creating a master list right now ;P 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted May 25, 2017 Author Share Posted May 25, 2017 (edited) Hey guys here's a master list for the comic! There will be a link to this list on the first post of this thread too! This list will be updated every time there is a new part, and there will be a link to this list in my signature so its on every comic post! Spoiler Chapter 1 Part 1: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=901149 Part 2: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=901886 Part 3: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=902021 Part 4: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=905096 Part 5; http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=909649 Part 6: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=910124 Chapter 2 Part 7: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=920585 Part 8: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=920698 Part 9: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=920881 Part 10: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=921185 Part 11: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=921455 Part 12: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=924050 Part 13: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=924429 Part 14: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=925499 Part 15: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=925626 Part 16: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=926274 Part 17: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=926640 Part 18: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=929010 Part 19: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=929694 Part 20: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=930326 Part 21: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=930664 Part 22: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=930931 Part 23: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=931574 Part 24: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=931606 Part 25: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=932238 Part 26: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=933325 Part 27: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=933630 Part 28: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=934290 Part 29: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=934897 Part 30: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=935360 Edited June 28, 2017 by geni0529 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 25, 2017 Share Posted May 25, 2017 Very organized. I'd put the images in the first post to save time but links work too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted May 26, 2017 Author Share Posted May 26, 2017 (edited) Here y'all go! Part 14!!!!! Wow 14 already? jeez, anyways expect another part later tonight ;;)) Have a lovely day! Seth; Dark blue Spidena: Red Emma: Yellow/Gold Emma: Are you still going to sing me a lullaby?!? Spidena: Yes Sunshine, I'm coming! Edited May 26, 2017 by geni0529 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted May 27, 2017 Author Share Posted May 27, 2017 I'm working on the next part as I'm typing but I just saw the newest Steven bomb and I cannot wait for the hour long episode ( it's airing on my birthday by the way so that's g8) anyhow in excitement I drew some lovely gems in my style. Su spoilers kinda??? Not rlly I love her she's such a little crab I live for her. I think garnet was the hardest out of this bunch to draw honestly. Bird mom is best mom 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted May 27, 2017 Author Share Posted May 27, 2017 Comic part!!!! YAY!! 15 Woahh what? Anyways I was a little torn because I don't really like this page, but its too late at night to fiddle with it some more so here ya go! Spidena: Red Seth: Dark blue Emma: Yellow Spidena: We will continue this later Seth. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted May 28, 2017 Share Posted May 28, 2017 I liked the background on Emma's bedroom. Little bit shocked you didn't add the coffee maker in the next panel. Topaz lost weight. Nice try on the gems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted May 29, 2017 Author Share Posted May 29, 2017 23 hours ago, minespatch said: I liked the background on Emma's bedroom. Little bit shocked you didn't add the coffee maker in the next panel. Topaz lost weight. Nice try on the gems. 1. The reason I didn't put the coffe maker is because it was quite late at night and I just kinda wanted to get it done as soon as possible /\~/\; 2. Yeah, I tried to make her broader and thicker but it just kinda looked strange ;-; 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geni0529 Posted May 29, 2017 Author Share Posted May 29, 2017 (edited) WOAH DOUBLE POSSSTTT Anyways here's part 16! Spidena: red emma; Yellow Seth: Dark blue Edited May 30, 2017 by geni0529 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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