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So...where do I start?

I'll begin with the originality. I think on the DantART's site We can seen many art what looks like This then, I give you four star for the initial story and of course the appearance of the picture. Now, I carry on my critique with the

analysis of...view. As soon as told You, D.Mikaz ,I think this art is really cool! Why? Bacause I love the winter & cold,freezing things and themes, than also revealed my nick too ^^ ! That's why of the four and a half star what I gived your image.

And the technikque yes! That's my favourite because I ever loved the anime-fanart like thingies. [スマイリー口ひげ] Yeah and I continue with the final element , the impact! Hm,I havne't got comment anymore  As I said:"It's just so...cool!"

                                                                                                          

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Hey guys!

 

I sent my first critique for the first guy who given me the "Lama  Badge" >.< xD He or She,I don't know actually -.^" but that doesn't matter. So...what do you think of my critique?! It's fair or unfair? Good or bad? Creative or just crap? I need Your answers and I want them, because I haven't enough self-confidence to ask people on the deviantART where I registered just today to share my sis's pics ( or yesterday? If you can't too see all of the pics (here) the RAR's pasworld is:
slendergirl666

 

So,let's criticize a critique ^^

 

"Thanks DS guys/girls!"

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I'm confused.  What do you want us to do?

What? Excuse me. Why are you so goof my Lord? I writed down every,thing in the description and You doin' like what I had written would be incomprehensible! Are you fuckin' kidding me! ? >: (  Why are you so uncomprehending with me? I just want from you guys to rate my critique! What uncomprehending! You're the only member who could bring my temper up! >:[ I really don't like you Lord_Battal. Leave me with Your ****s or I'll ignore you. I don't think that, you've been immersed in your thoughts to can't understand my default thread! So sorry for the word but **** off pls!!!

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What? Excuse me. Why are you so goof my Lord? I writed down every,thing in the description and You doin' like what I had written would be incomprehensible! Are you fuckin' kidding me! ? >: (  Why are you so uncomprehending with me? I just want from you guys to rate my critique! What uncomprehending! You're the only member who could bring my temper up! >:[ I really don't like you Lord_Battal. Leave me with Your ****s or I'll ignore you. I don't think that, you've been immersed in your thoughts to can't understand my default thread! So sorry for the word but **** off pls!!!

O.o

Did I say something?

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What? Excuse me. Why are you so goof my Lord? I writed down every,thing in the description and You doin' like what I had written would be incomprehensible! Are you fuckin' kidding me! ? >: (  Why are you so uncomprehending with me? I just want from you guys to rate my critique! What uncomprehending! You're the only member who could bring my temper up! >:[ I really don't like you Lord_Battal. Leave me with Your ****s or I'll ignore you. I don't think that, you've been immersed in your thoughts to can't understand my default thread! So sorry for the word but **** off pls!!!

no swearing. Mate, honestly. These forums are meant to be kid-friendly. Also, Battal is Battal. You can't change that

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What? Excuse me. Why are you so goof my Lord? I writed down every,thing in the description and You doin' like what I had written would be incomprehensible! Are you fuckin' kidding me! ? >: (  Why are you so uncomprehending with me? I just want from you guys to rate my critique! What uncomprehending! You're the only member who could bring my temper up! >:[ I really don't like you Lord_Battal. Leave me with Your ****s or I'll ignore you. I don't think that, you've been immersed in your thoughts to can't understand my default thread! So sorry for the word but **** off pls!!!

Okay so your critique is....good...I guess? Really.....good...choice of words?

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O.o

Did I say something?

You don't that ,as if I were stupid! "What do you want us to do?" I WRITED DOWN EVERY WORD IN THE THREAD! pls. I can't to restrain myself to say really bad things >= (

Okay so your critique is....good...I guess? Really.....good...choice of words?

You know ,Blue. I don't really think for this...thing. It's just a unexpected...thingy.

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Good, but slightly unfair. You did well judging the thechnique even thought I'd say a bit of backgroung would be interesting. The vision was ok. Now about the originality, I really don't think think it was that original, I can't count the many,many times I've seen a storie like that (boy/man/kid/woman finds a dog and then he saves it and blablabla). I'd give about 3 and a half stars, but opinions are just opinions.

 

And just as an advice: Don't use so many emoticons (AKA things like this D : <) its quite annoying to read something with so many of them.

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Doesn't Matter Daver ^^ I can't expected something better from a 13 years old kid. So it's okay.

Are you kidding me?

 

You're on my ignore list from now on.

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Good, but slightly unfair. You did well judging the thechnique even thought I'd say a bit of backgroung would be interesting. The vision was ok. Now about the originality, I really don't think think it was that original, I can't count the many,many times I've seen a storie like that (boy/man/kid/woman finds a dog and then he saves it and blablabla). I'd give about 3 and a half stars, but opinions are just opinions.

 

And just as an advice: Don't use so many emoticons (AKA things like this D : <) its quite annoying to read something with so many of them.

That YOU! Thank YOU! Do You see that people ?! THIS,is,what I want from people! HE/You was the only Guy,who could write down a real critique! So TY again my friend! Oh,yeah. Here's the background of the critique.

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