brainchill Posted November 10, 2013 Share Posted November 10, 2013 So...where do I start?I'll begin with the originality. I think on the DantART's site We can seen many art what looks like This then, I give you four star for the initial story and of course the appearance of the picture. Now, I carry on my critique with the analysis of...view. As soon as told You, D.Mikaz ,I think this art is really cool! Why? Bacause I love the winter & cold,freezing things and themes, than also revealed my nick too ^^ ! That's why of the four and a half star what I gived your image.And the technikque yes! That's my favourite because I ever loved the anime-fanart like thingies. [スマイリー口ひげ] Yeah and I continue with the final element , the impact! Hm,I havne't got comment anymore As I said:"It's just so...cool!" "Subjectivity 4эвер!" "Say pal!" Hey guys! I sent my first critique for the first guy who given me the "Lama Badge" >.< xD He or She,I don't know actually -.^" but that doesn't matter. So...what do you think of my critique?! It's fair or unfair? Good or bad? Creative or just crap? I need Your answers and I want them, because I haven't enough self-confidence to ask people on the deviantART where I registered just today to share my sis's pics ( or yesterday? ) If you can't too see all of the pics (here) the RAR's pasworld is:slendergirl666 So,let's criticize a critique ^^ "Thanks DS guys/girls!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brainchill Posted November 10, 2013 Author Share Posted November 10, 2013 Pls guys! Hurry a bit because I haven't got much time at the morning bacause I've many thing щдт need to do! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 10, 2013 Share Posted November 10, 2013 no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brainchill Posted November 11, 2013 Author Share Posted November 11, 2013 no.Aha! kk . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted November 11, 2013 Share Posted November 11, 2013 Wut? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brainchill Posted November 11, 2013 Author Share Posted November 11, 2013 Wut?What do you think about "wut?" i don't understand just I posted randomly for twice times >.<" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brainchill Posted November 11, 2013 Author Share Posted November 11, 2013 What do you think about "wut?" i don't understand just I posted randomly for twice times >.<"If you don't posted that , your thread is rather troll ^.-" because I writed down EVERY...THING in the beginning of my topic -.O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARamblingSpider Posted November 11, 2013 Share Posted November 11, 2013 You're a very confusing person, Hm guess it's time to add another person to my ignore list. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brainchill Posted November 11, 2013 Author Share Posted November 11, 2013 If you don't posted that , your thread is rather troll ^.-" because I writed down EVERY...THING in the beginning of my topic -.OOr maybe I just don't understand >.<" the WUT? Why do U talky? Or I really don't know =I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARamblingSpider Posted November 11, 2013 Share Posted November 11, 2013 Or maybe I just don't understand >.<" the WUT? Why do U talky? Or I really don't know =IIt's one one thing to accidently quote yourself but then doing it again.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted November 11, 2013 Share Posted November 11, 2013 I'm confused. What do you want us to do? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 11, 2013 Share Posted November 11, 2013 Guys, I think it's trying to communicate... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brainchill Posted November 11, 2013 Author Share Posted November 11, 2013 I'm confused. What do you want us to do?What? Excuse me. Why are you so goof my Lord? I writed down every,thing in the description and You doin' like what I had written would be incomprehensible! Are you fuckin' kidding me! ? >: ( Why are you so uncomprehending with me? I just want from you guys to rate my critique! What uncomprehending! You're the only member who could bring my temper up! >:[ I really don't like you Lord_Battal. Leave me with Your ****s or I'll ignore you. I don't think that, you've been immersed in your thoughts to can't understand my default thread! So sorry for the word but **** off pls!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battal Posted November 11, 2013 Share Posted November 11, 2013 What? Excuse me. Why are you so goof my Lord? I writed down every,thing in the description and You doin' like what I had written would be incomprehensible! Are you fuckin' kidding me! ? >: ( Why are you so uncomprehending with me? I just want from you guys to rate my critique! What uncomprehending! You're the only member who could bring my temper up! >:[ I really don't like you Lord_Battal. Leave me with Your ****s or I'll ignore you. I don't think that, you've been immersed in your thoughts to can't understand my default thread! So sorry for the word but **** off pls!!!O.oDid I say something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brainchill Posted November 11, 2013 Author Share Posted November 11, 2013 Guys, I think it's trying to communicate...Doesn't Matter Daver ^^ I can't expected something better from a 13 years old kid. So it's okay.And tell me pls.: "Why do you following this topic if you din't wanna to communicate with/to me?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neosaurus Posted November 11, 2013 Share Posted November 11, 2013 What? Excuse me. Why are you so goof my Lord? I writed down every,thing in the description and You doin' like what I had written would be incomprehensible! Are you fuckin' kidding me! ? >: ( Why are you so uncomprehending with me? I just want from you guys to rate my critique! What uncomprehending! You're the only member who could bring my temper up! >:[ I really don't like you Lord_Battal. Leave me with Your ****s or I'll ignore you. I don't think that, you've been immersed in your thoughts to can't understand my default thread! So sorry for the word but **** off pls!!!no swearing. Mate, honestly. These forums are meant to be kid-friendly. Also, Battal is Battal. You can't change that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyanBlue Posted November 11, 2013 Share Posted November 11, 2013 What? Excuse me. Why are you so goof my Lord? I writed down every,thing in the description and You doin' like what I had written would be incomprehensible! Are you fuckin' kidding me! ? >: ( Why are you so uncomprehending with me? I just want from you guys to rate my critique! What uncomprehending! You're the only member who could bring my temper up! >:[ I really don't like you Lord_Battal. Leave me with Your ****s or I'll ignore you. I don't think that, you've been immersed in your thoughts to can't understand my default thread! So sorry for the word but **** off pls!!!Okay so your critique is....good...I guess? Really.....good...choice of words? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brainchill Posted November 11, 2013 Author Share Posted November 11, 2013 O.oDid I say something?You don't that ,as if I were stupid! "What do you want us to do?" I WRITED DOWN EVERY WORD IN THE THREAD! pls. I can't to restrain myself to say really bad things >= (Okay so your critique is....good...I guess? Really.....good...choice of words?You know ,Blue. I don't really think for this...thing. It's just a unexpected...thingy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyanBlue Posted November 11, 2013 Share Posted November 11, 2013 You don't that ,as if I were stupid! "What do you want us to do?" I WRITED DOWN EVERY WORD IN THE THREAD! pls. I can't to restrain myself to say really bad things >= (I guess he just didn't understand then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brainchill Posted November 11, 2013 Author Share Posted November 11, 2013 I guess he just didn't understand then?Nope! He's can be really intelligent, if He want so. I know him a bit.no swearing. Mate, honestly. These forums are meant to be kid-friendly. Also, Battal is Battal. You can't change thatNope. There aren't... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neosaurus Posted November 11, 2013 Share Posted November 11, 2013 Nope! He's can be really intelligent, if He want so. I know him a bit.Nope. There aren't...Did you just.. like a post I made critizing you? Honestly? Really? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brainchill Posted November 11, 2013 Author Share Posted November 11, 2013 Did you just.. like a post I made critizing you? Honestly? Really? Nope. I want critiques, not childish posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hugo M. Posted November 11, 2013 Share Posted November 11, 2013 Good, but slightly unfair. You did well judging the thechnique even thought I'd say a bit of backgroung would be interesting. The vision was ok. Now about the originality, I really don't think think it was that original, I can't count the many,many times I've seen a storie like that (boy/man/kid/woman finds a dog and then he saves it and blablabla). I'd give about 3 and a half stars, but opinions are just opinions. And just as an advice: Don't use so many emoticons (AKA things like this D : <) its quite annoying to read something with so many of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 11, 2013 Share Posted November 11, 2013 Doesn't Matter Daver ^^ I can't expected something better from a 13 years old kid. So it's okay.Are you kidding me? You're on my ignore list from now on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brainchill Posted November 11, 2013 Author Share Posted November 11, 2013 Good, but slightly unfair. You did well judging the thechnique even thought I'd say a bit of backgroung would be interesting. The vision was ok. Now about the originality, I really don't think think it was that original, I can't count the many,many times I've seen a storie like that (boy/man/kid/woman finds a dog and then he saves it and blablabla). I'd give about 3 and a half stars, but opinions are just opinions. And just as an advice: Don't use so many emoticons (AKA things like this D : <) its quite annoying to read something with so many of them.That YOU! Thank YOU! Do You see that people ?! THIS,is,what I want from people! HE/You was the only Guy,who could write down a real critique! So TY again my friend! Oh,yeah. Here's the background of the critique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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