Nyla Smokeyface 60 Report post Posted April 26, 2019 (edited) This is my first attempt at drawing Wilson. I've also decided to experiment with hand and clothing folds. I'm actually really proud of this! If you guys have any constructive criticism, I'd love to hear it! Edited July 23, 2019 by Nyla Smokeyface 9 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
minespatch 96130 Report post Posted April 27, 2019 I feel that the sleeves should drape with the arm direction. If you look at the dupes in Oxygen Not included, their sleeves have that draping.. I like the organic curve of his body but could use more of a curved motion. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nyla Smokeyface 60 Report post Posted April 27, 2019 2 minutes ago, minespatch said: I feel that the sleeves should drape with the arm direction. If you look at the dupes in Oxygen Not included, their sleeves have that draping. Oh, okay! Thanks! 2 minutes ago, minespatch said: I like the organic curve of his body but could use more of a curved motion. What do you mean? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
minespatch 96130 Report post Posted April 27, 2019 1 hour ago, Nyla Smokeyface said: What do you mean? Also, let me link you to sherm cohen's tutorials on organic anatomy: https://www.deviantart.com/shermcohen/art/SpongeBob-Tutorial-4-Action-142989628 https://www.deviantart.com/art/SpongeBob-Tute2-Line-of-Action-142661763 Hope these help. 3 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ResettePlayer 6262 Report post Posted April 27, 2019 Hey there! This drawing is actually pretty good, Wilson's face especially. Thank you for sharing. Critique: it really looks like you isolated all the separate parts too much while drawing. Head, neck, body, arms--all of these look like they were stuck together with no planning (admittedly, I still do this sometimes too). I would recommend roughly sketching out extremely simplified shapes for the pose before committing to darker lines and shading, kind of like Minespatch's demonstration there. This way you can erase and adjust things as you please without losing anything you like. Additionally, if his body is turned to the left, the arm holing the torch would be closer to the viewer and should be larger than the arm on the far side. This was also most likely caused by isolating the parts too much, and could also be fixed with the same rough construction technique described above. I'd like to stress again that this is actually a very good start! Good luck next time! Also, don't feel badly if you find you still suffer from bad drawing habits in the future--these things can be VERY difficult to change at all, let alone change immediately. Thanks again for sharing! 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nonentity 41 Report post Posted April 27, 2019 This looks awesome! I really love how you did his hair especially, it's really on point. 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nyla Smokeyface 60 Report post Posted May 9, 2019 On 4/26/2019 at 10:02 PM, minespatch said: Also, let me link you to sherm cohen's tutorials on organic anatomy: https://www.deviantart.com/shermcohen/art/SpongeBob-Tutorial-4-Action-142989628 https://www.deviantart.com/art/SpongeBob-Tute2-Line-of-Action-142661763 Hope these help. Oh my gosh thank you so much!! On 4/27/2019 at 8:46 AM, ResettePlayer said: Hey there! This drawing is actually pretty good, Wilson's face especially. Thank you for sharing. Critique: it really looks like you isolated all the separate parts too much while drawing. Head, neck, body, arms--all of these look like they were stuck together with no planning (admittedly, I still do this sometimes too). I would recommend roughly sketching out extremely simplified shapes for the pose before committing to darker lines and shading, kind of like Minespatch's demonstration there. This way you can erase and adjust things as you please without losing anything you like. Additionally, if his body is turned to the left, the arm holing the torch would be closer to the viewer and should be larger than the arm on the far side. This was also most likely caused by isolating the parts too much, and could also be fixed with the same rough construction technique described above. I'd like to stress again that this is actually a very good start! Good luck next time! Also, don't feel badly if you find you still suffer from bad drawing habits in the future--these things can be VERY difficult to change at all, let alone change immediately. Thanks again for sharing! Actually, you're right. I did draw each part separately. Right, because of perspective and stuff! I didn't notice that, thank you! Thank you so much for the kind words On 4/27/2019 at 6:17 PM, Nonentity said: This looks awesome! I really love how you did his hair especially, it's really on point. Aw, thank you! 2 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nyla Smokeyface 60 Report post Posted May 10, 2019 (edited) So I decided to do a few sketches of Wilson and Willow: Both of their hair makes me want to throw myself off a bridge. I never thought Willow's hair would be hard to draw BUT HERE WE FRICKIN ARE I also drew both Willow and Wilson! Thanks a million @minespatch for giving me advice on drawing my favorite dork! good lord my sketches are messsy Edited May 11, 2019 by Nyla Smokeyface 5 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
minespatch 96130 Report post Posted May 11, 2019 On 5/9/2019 at 9:49 PM, Nyla Smokeyface said: Is this the same image or another image? Your new sketches are organic now. Keep up the good work. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nyla Smokeyface 60 Report post Posted May 11, 2019 16 hours ago, minespatch said: Is this the same image or another image? Your new sketches are organic now. Keep up the good work. Another image, my bad sorry: 4 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DragonMage156 27716 Report post Posted May 12, 2019 I think you did really well with these ones. I like the cute art style you used for them. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
minespatch 96130 Report post Posted May 15, 2019 I notice the pupils are softer in comparison to the Wilson one. Was that on purpose or just a thing from the camera? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nyla Smokeyface 60 Report post Posted May 17, 2019 (edited) On 5/11/2019 at 10:14 PM, DragonMage156 said: I think you did really well with these ones. I like the cute art style you used for them. Aw, thanks buddy! On 5/15/2019 at 1:26 AM, minespatch said: I notice the pupils are softer in comparison to the Wilson one. Was that on purpose or just a thing from the camera? That was done on purpose because Willow has white, pupiless eyes in game and I kind of wanted to translate the same sort of look. Edited May 17, 2019 by Nyla Smokeyface 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nyla Smokeyface 60 Report post Posted July 23, 2019 (edited) So I thought it would be cool if Wortox's survivor skin had a crooked jaw, and I decided to draw it! Alternate version: I'm really proud of this! I haven't drawn with a tablet in months prior to this, so I'm still a bit rusty. Edited July 23, 2019 by Nyla Smokeyface 3 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
minespatch 96130 Report post Posted July 23, 2019 Nice work with the coloring. It really pops out with the shading. I think the tongue is a nice touch, makes him derpier. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nyla Smokeyface 60 Report post Posted July 24, 2019 On 7/23/2019 at 2:12 AM, minespatch said: Nice work with the coloring. It really pops out with the shading. I think the tongue is a nice touch, makes him derpier. Thank you Yeah, I thought it would be interesting if the broken jaw caused his tongue to sort of loll out 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nyla Smokeyface 60 Report post Posted July 28, 2019 *Curb Your Enthusiasm blasts* This hits too close to home for Webber. This is actually a line in the game and I was like, "....UM." (If anyone is wondering what the font is, it's "Belisa Plumilla Manual") 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
minespatch 96130 Report post Posted July 31, 2019 That's the spider in his head talking. Webber's mouth is the spider's butt. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
