DragonMage156 Posted August 29, 2016 Share Posted August 29, 2016 41 minutes ago, rubidiumsart said: i would but i am not sure about writig the lyrics on the drawing because my handwriting is t e r r i b l e Just do what I do with my comic: draw the pic then add the words/lyrics with Paint afterwards 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted August 30, 2016 Share Posted August 30, 2016 15 hours ago, rubidiumsart said: i would but i am not sure about writig the lyrics on the drawing because my handwriting is t e r r i b l e Or you could slap some digital fonts on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rubiidiums Posted August 30, 2016 Share Posted August 30, 2016 4 hours ago, minespatch said: Or you could slap some digital fonts on it. it'll be less aesthetic. maybe i will draw the text instead 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donke60 Posted September 4, 2016 Author Share Posted September 4, 2016 Just now, rubidiumsart said: request from @Donke60 (put it in spoiler bc it's long) Hide contents @rubidiumsart finished my request I recommend you check out his art thread #notsponsor 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donke60 Posted September 4, 2016 Author Share Posted September 4, 2016 Here is today's song inspired by darkness and edge-lords everywhere Spoiler Sanity my dear old friend darkness claws from within Can I make sense of the sense of the world or will I be fodder for what is to unfurl. Will I find the light Will I have the will to fight Or be the dead man Sleep is my deprevation I can feel their sensations Fight against their intentions Hello world my new friend Life with you is so grand i will bring more of man Hello darkness my old friend I am under your command What you wish is my desire I sit on the shadow throne all of this are my desire hello shadows my only friends Also criticism is welcome because I do enjoy these and would love to make them better. 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted September 4, 2016 Share Posted September 4, 2016 Warly and Wilson being the ones singing this just because they look the closest to Simon and Garfunkel to me. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted September 4, 2016 Share Posted September 4, 2016 Words shouldn't be rhymed with themselves (desire), but in this case it is acceptable, since it puts emphasis on the word. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donke60 Posted September 7, 2016 Author Share Posted September 7, 2016 (edited) This is a contination of the last song I sang this one and it sounded pretty good though the way it sung changes a lot get it down below Spoiler They the ruler They the mind They the controller I just the blind (CHANT) This is not me this not what I wanted someone take my place this is not what I wanted to be (DA-DA-DADA-DADAD-DA They played me for a fool and pulled all the strings The shadows are the kings and I just the tool (SLOW) The shadows have me now All I can do is watch I'm helplessly bound Someone let me out (SLOW) They the ruler They the mind They the controller I just the blind (CHANT) Here they come to rescue me take sweet pity I'm so sorry (DA-DUH DA-DUH) I've been waiting for so long my desperation claimed me the cycle most go on Us forever the pawns (SLOW) They the ruler They the mind They the controller we just the blind (CHANT) Edited September 7, 2016 by Donke60 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donke60 Posted September 11, 2016 Author Share Posted September 11, 2016 Ok here something i found interesting digging around old files in drive (which I don't use anymore) it's a little poem I'd thought it would be neat to share. Spoiler The Art The art is of a Novice The art is sloppy to bend to my hand. The art is to show feeling The art is mine and mine alone The art I feel is not my true talent. The art will not be thy mark upon the world. The art is satisfactory for it serves the purpose of the Novice. 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donke60 Posted September 18, 2016 Author Share Posted September 18, 2016 I don't know what this is typed it when I was tired I say elegy I don't know I'm taking a nap now Spoiler See the sign of insomina fear the drop of phycosis Let there be no more peace run from your own enemies As you run around a single thread ruined by the things in your head let there by no repose be as it is savory There be no saving grace For only if you are stout They shall not harm you Slay the blinding stress Hold fast one more time Then fall at the door This be your last stand Let it be your greatest Mourn for you they will Be the hero So others may follow Furfill your holy duty Let the sing of your death be remeber as god's man Save the sicken souls With your last stand Mind is shot body won't move Saved them all fated hero 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted September 18, 2016 Share Posted September 18, 2016 I'm not sure what inspired you but it is a nice piece. Thank you for sharing the poem. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donke60 Posted September 18, 2016 Author Share Posted September 18, 2016 3 hours ago, minespatch said: I'm not sure what inspired you but it is a nice piece. Thank you for sharing the poem. Darkest dungeon 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMage156 Posted September 18, 2016 Share Posted September 18, 2016 27 minutes ago, Donke60 said: Darkest dungeon Must. Resist. Erge. To. Correct. ... Dankest! Memes have taken over my life -_- 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donke60 Posted September 19, 2016 Author Share Posted September 19, 2016 I wrote another thingy man all the sad things i post i must be so deep and foreboding and so EDGYi should write something happy Idk anyway get it down below Spoiler standing near weeping soul Staring blankly at the dirt So much emotion yet none from me Little moves inside my heart I just walk away they say I have no soul though I respect the end pay my dues without blues thinking little in the end Monster is the name for me I should feel somethingo yet its so tame for me have I lost my humanity I do not know should I care is something wrong I do not know They shout and wail I know its health I find it stressing yet i'm the oSdd one Should I show more Could I care more Should I care more I do not know P.S. I don't know why but I thought I should put my motto for critism here and sense this place is the outside world for me besides screaming outside my window here ya go Spoiler we will criticize till something is perfection. then criticize perfection for being perfection for it is imperfection for that makes it great 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted September 19, 2016 Share Posted September 19, 2016 I don't know if it's because of me sucking big time when it comes to music, but I don't see the rhythm in these anymore. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donke60 Posted September 20, 2016 Author Share Posted September 20, 2016 14 hours ago, Mobbstar said: I don't know if it's because of me sucking big time when it comes to music, but I don't see the rhythm in these anymore. Yeah I was worried that would became a problem the last two posts are poems but I don't know of an easy way to explain the rythms of the lyrics and I don't know music composition when it comes to lyrics well 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donke60 Posted September 24, 2016 Author Share Posted September 24, 2016 Got a parody this time, this time the Lazy Song by Brouno Mars yay Spoiler Today I don't feel like doing anything I just wanna sit hear and camp don't feel like going on a quest So just let me lay here an rest cause today I just wanna sit here and camp. I'm gonna lay my head down and sleep on the roll Turn the t.v on with the game put on pause Nobody's goin' tell me I can't I'll be loungin in the tent just fishin in my baggie Flip on chat so the can tell me that i'm trashy Cause in my world im the freakin' man Yes I said it I said it I said cause I can Today I don't feel like doing anything I just wanna stay in my camp don't feel like going on a quest So leave a comment i'm the best Cause today I swear i'm not doing anything Nothing at all Ooh hoo ooh hoo Hoo ooh ooh Nothing at all Ooh hoo ooh hoo Hoo ooh ooh Tomarrow I'll wake up eat some food Meet a really nice girl an kill for the loot an sh's gonna flame me in chat I might mess around and get some really nice boots I bet my old clan will be so proud of me but gift your just have to wait Oh Yes I said it I said it Cause I can Today I don't fell like doing anything I just wanna sit in my camp Don't feel like going on a quest So leave a comment i'm the best Cause today I swear i'm not dong anything No I not gonna wear my gear Cause i'll be staying right here No no no no no no no no no oh I'll just stand in my empty land And let everything go poof Yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah Oh today I don't eel like doing anything I just wanna stay in my camp Don't feel like going on a quest So leave a comment i'm the best Cause today I swear i'm not doing anything Nothing at all Ooh hoo ooh hoo Hoo ooh ooh Nothing at all Ooh hoo ooh hoo Hoo ooh ooh Nothing at all If this does bad I;ll make this thread my blog. Oh that's terrible, and embarrassing, stupid and uh.. I need more negative adjectives. 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 12 hours ago, Donke60 said: Meet a really nice girl an kill for the loot A Boy And His Dog? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donke60 Posted September 25, 2016 Author Share Posted September 25, 2016 10 hours ago, Mobbstar said: A Boy And His Dog? what? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted September 25, 2016 Share Posted September 25, 2016 Can you do a parody of Mysterious Mose but with Max? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donke60 Posted September 25, 2016 Author Share Posted September 25, 2016 Yep sure thing 6 hours ago, minespatch said: Can you do a parody of Mysterious Mose but with Max? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mobbstar Posted September 25, 2016 Share Posted September 25, 2016 4 hours ago, Donke60 said: what? Spoiler 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donke60 Posted September 25, 2016 Author Share Posted September 25, 2016 I play one way heroics mystery chronicals and get the pet lovers perk so I can have a dog follow and help me (don't open unless you want to know what usally happens to the dog Spoiler Get sacrifeed in the boss fight as I run away like a girl thanks poochie 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donke60 Posted September 25, 2016 Author Share Posted September 25, 2016 (edited) Since i'm here let me post this it was short so I got it done today even if it makes it seem I don't but a lot of care in these Spoiler If your path, at darkness set, by full moon tell If someone whistles, mmm, that's the great maxwell Or on some dark and frgid night, while the blizard swells If someone whistles, ohh, that's the great Maxwell He sees all, he knows all, he pops in everywhere Some day you might meet see him their upon the throne So when you're goin' down the pathway, walk upon eggshells If someone chuckles, ohh, that's the great maxwell This was a request by @minespatch I know the original had that alliteration the beginning with mysterious mose but had to mess with syllables and I think it still has a lot of energy besides you can't have a song about maxwell talking about how great he is. If you want changes minespatch just let me know enjoy Edited September 25, 2016 by Donke60 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minespatch Posted September 25, 2016 Share Posted September 25, 2016 It's perfectly fine. The way you rewrote it, it feels like a commercial jingle for Maxwell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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