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Geni's Random Art thread

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On ‎5‎/‎14‎/‎2017 at 9:44 PM, DragonMage156 said:

I take it these two are divorced? They don't seem to agree with each other.

No, they are not divorced, just fighting for reasons you will soon find out ;)

( it took me a day to think of how to respond to this :-:)

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These two look a little wonky because I was trying some new angles, but there are certainly good parts to it too, I love how the shadows came out on this one :)

Dark blue: Seth (Brown hair)

Yellow: Emma ( Blonde hair)

Red: Spidena (Black hair)

Seth u creepin boi.png

who dis, dis my kid.png

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Looking back at your first post in this thread, you really improved alot! Good job.

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16 hours ago, Ootay said:

Looking back at your first post in this thread, you really improved alot! Good job.

Why Thank you!

 

Anyway, Here's Part 12! Also, I'm quite busy the rest of this week with a choir recital tomorrow, then a play I am in on Thursday, and on Friday an overnight fieldtrip, so if there are no new pages its probably because i'm too busy ^u^;

Dark blue: Seth (brown hair)

Red: Spidena (Black hair)

Yellow/gold: Emma ( Blonde hair)

aww look there getting along.png

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ohp she mad.png

 

 

 

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If you are having trouble reading that last one its Spidena going "Why are you here all of a sudden Seth? 5 MONTHS with no letters, no communication, then you just walk in here in the middle of the night?!?"

 

 

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Posting the pencils really makes one appreciate the final product. Thanks for posting both versions.:wilson_smile:

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Posted (edited)

Hey guys! So this next part ain't the best because im running on like two hours of sleep but I really hope you guys enjoy it!

Seth- Dark blue

Spidena- Red

Emma- Yellow

Also, due to remarks that have been made to me in the past I feel I must explain a certain characters name. There is a character named Geni in this, now I know that sounds narcissistic or childish to name a character after myself but these characters (Geni in particular) are characters I created years ago when I was seven or six. As I grew up they became more three dimensional and not so cringe characters, but because some of these characters are so old certain things I just cannot change. I have tried for the longest time to come up a different name for her but NOTHING felt right, so despite past mockery of having a character with my name I have decided that there is no other name I woukd feel satisfied calling her by.

So I introduce the first mention of one of our main character in the comic, Geni.

 

 

 

 

this isnt that good but im tired so yeah sorry.png

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if you are having trouble reading it, it says:

Seth: The battlefield gets worse every day, casualties on our side are worse then ever, and the council is considering surrender.

Spidena: What!?!

Seth: It gets worse. About a week ago an attempt was made on my life. I survived but our other daughter, Geni, was blinded on one side.

Spidena: Oh my god!

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12 minutes ago, geni0529 said:

Also, due to remarks that have been made to me in the past I feel I must explain a certain characters name. There is a character named Geni in this, now I know that sounds narcissistic or childish to name a character after myself but these characters (Geni in particular) are characters I created years ago when I was seven or six. As I grew up they became more three dimensional and not so cringe characters, but because some of these characters are so old certain things I just cannot change. I have tried for the longest time to come up a different name for her but NOTHING felt right, so despite past mockery of having a character with my name I have decided that there is no other name I would feel satisfied calling her by.

That's totally fine imo. My persona existed without a proper name until just recently but even now I use her a lot in RPs and such.

Her name is actually a Japanese (well the Google version of it) translation of my real name. Perhaps you can try that. However, I agree that naming a character is the hardest part... well that and developing backstory and a personality ^^;

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Kind of interesting how your storyboard dialogue is compared to finalized version. Again, the digitalized version is a huge improvement.

Though I like how the penciled version had pupils on Seth.

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8 hours ago, DragonMage156 said:

That's totally fine imo. My persona existed without a proper name until just recently but even now I use her a lot in RPs and such.

Her name is actually a Japanese (well the Google version of it) translation of my real name. Perhaps you can try that. However, I agree that naming a character is the hardest part... well that and developing backstory and a personality ^^;

Names are terrible honestly, I feel you. Personalitys have always been easy for me though because most of theses characters have real life inspirations :3

7 hours ago, minespatch said:

Kind of interesting how your storyboard dialogue is compared to finalized version. Again, the digitalized version is a huge improvement.

Though I like how the penciled version had pupils on Seth.

I really like the pupils too, it's kinda something I'm on the edge on putting in the finalized version but I'm not sure about it yet. 

There is sorta a reason the dialogue is slightly different. The storyboard is just me either summing it up because I don't feel like writing or writing how I would say it, however when I write the dialogue for the finalized version it's how the characters would say it not me. Does that make sense? I feel like that doesn't make sense. 

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Posted (edited)

Hey guys here part 14! Are you enjoying the comic so far? We kind of started off at a very dramatic point so I wanted there just be some nice exposition and fluff, after all it can't all be angst (yet ;3)

Anyhow I noticed the way I drew Spidena standing, it kind of looks like she's doing 'BOI' and as a memer I felt I must mention this.

Spidena: Red

Emma; Yellow

Seth; Dark Blue

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Anyhow, here is what the comic says if you are having trouble reading it!

Spidena: How could you let that happen to our daughter!?! You- You- You blithering idiot, You-

Emma: Mooooom!

 

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14 hours ago, geni0529 said:

I really like the pupils too, it's kinda something I'm on the edge on putting in the finalized version but I'm not sure about it yet.

Well, to make the pupils work, maybe you should do them in lighter colors so they show terror more obviously?

18 minutes ago, geni0529 said:

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"I-'m sorry it red! to get to her there was just hundreds of men" IS that what he's saying?

Conflicted. I like the additional furniture in the pencil version.

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2 minutes ago, minespatch said:

Well, to make the pupils work, maybe you should do them in lighter colors so they show terror more obviously?

"I-'m sorry it red! to get to her there was just hundreds of men" IS that what he's saying?

Conflicted. I like the additional furniture in the pencil version.

Possibly... And he's saying " I-I'm sorry I tried! There were just hundreds of men!" You were really close though! Im surprised you could read that :3

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4 hours ago, geni0529 said:
  1. You were really close though! Im surprised you could read that :3
  2. " I-I'm sorry I tried! There were just hundreds of men!"
  1. I wanted to read what it said. Felt like the missing comment from the digitalized version could fill in some hidden context.
  2. Wait... What did he do? I'm confused.
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11 hours ago, minespatch said:
  1. I wanted to read what it said. Felt like the missing comment from the digitalized version could fill in some hidden context.
  2. Wait... What did he do? I'm confused.

Ah sorry that does seem confusing, probably why I cut it out. It says 'I tried' as in he tryed to protect Geni, but there were to many men. Does that help clear it up?

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Kind of. You might want to post that digitalized pages on your first post in a spoiler so people can catch up to the story.

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45 minutes ago, minespatch said:

Kind of. You might want to post that digitalized pages on your first post in a spoiler so people can catch up to the story.

Pfft- you seriously read my mind, i'm creating a master list right now ;P

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Posted (edited)

Hey guys here's a master list for the comic! There will be a link to this list on the first post of this thread too! This list will be updated every time there is a new part, and there will be a link to this list in my signature so its on every comic post! :)

Spoiler

Chapter 1

Part 1: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=901149

Part 2: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=901886

Part 3: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=902021

Part 4: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=905096

Part 5; http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=909649

Part 6: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=910124

Chapter 2

Part 7: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=920585

Part 8: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=920698

Part 9: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=920881

 Part 10: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=921185

 Part 11: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=921455

Part 12: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=924050

Part 13: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=924429

 Part 14: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=925499 

Part 15: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=925626

Part 16: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=926274

Part 17: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=926640

Part 18: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=929010

Part 19: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=929694

Part 20: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=930326

Part 21: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=930664

Part 22: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=930931

Part 23: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=931574

Part 24: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=931606

Part 25: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=932238

Part 26: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=933325

Part 27: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=933630

Part 28: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=934290

Part 29: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=934897

Part 30: http://forums.kleientertainment.com/topic/41617-genis-random-art-thread/?do=findComment&comment=935360

 

 

 

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Very organized. I'd put the images in the first post to save time but links work too.:wilson_smile:

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Posted (edited)

Here y'all go! Part 14!!!!!

Wow 14 already? jeez, anyways expect another part later tonight ;;)) Have a lovely day!

Seth; Dark blue

Spidena: Red

Emma: Yellow/Gold

lullaby!!!!!!.pngIMG_1114.JPG

Emma: Are you still going to sing me a lullaby?!?

Spidena: Yes Sunshine, I'm coming!

 

 

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I'm working on the next part as I'm typing but I just saw the newest Steven bomb and I cannot wait for the hour long episode ( it's airing on my birthday by the way so that's g8) anyhow in excitement I drew some lovely gems in my style.

Su spoilers kinda??? Not rlly

 

 

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I love her she's such a little crab I live for her.

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I think garnet was the hardest out of this bunch to draw honestly.

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Bird mom is best mom

 

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Comic part!!!! YAY!! 15 Woahh what?

Anyways I was a little torn because I don't really like this page, but its too late at night to fiddle with it some more so here ya go!

Spidena: Red

Seth: Dark blue

Emma: Yellow

youdiddlydarnscrewedupsethyboi.pngIMG_1115.JPG

Spidena: We will continue this later Seth.

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I liked the background on Emma's bedroom. Little bit shocked you didn't add the coffee maker in the next panel.

 

Topaz  lost weight. :wilson_ecstatic:Nice try on the gems.

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23 hours ago, minespatch said:

I liked the background on Emma's bedroom. Little bit shocked you didn't add the coffee maker in the next panel.

 

Topaz  lost weight. :wilson_ecstatic:Nice try on the gems.

1. The reason I didn't put the coffe maker is because it was quite late at night and I just kinda wanted to get it done as soon as possible /\~/\;

2. Yeah, I tried to make her broader and thicker but it just kinda looked strange ;-;

 

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Posted (edited)

WOAH DOUBLE POSSSTTT

Anyways here's part 16!

Spidena: red

emma; Yellow

Seth: Dark blue

 

what a cute child.png

IMG_1116.JPG

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