In Need of a Beta Reader

[Unsound Mind]

Hi everyone. I've been writing a little fanfiction, and after the first four chapters I came to a realization: I need a beta reader. It's difficult to keep track of everything (game mechanics, lore, etc.) on my own. I'd like someone to bounce ideas off of to see if they make sense, and to generally be a safety net. 

 

If you have grammatical fluency, I will consider that a bonus. I only require that you have a handle on the game's mechanics, know the characters somewhat, and most importantly know the story that the game has already.

 

[shujuju]

I have quite a large vocabulary and a large understanding of the game and its mechanics, I would love to be a beta reader!

[Unsound Mind]

I have quite a large vocabulary and a large understanding of the game and its mechanics, I would love to be a beta reader!

 

 

Thank you! Do you have a preferred method of contact? I could private message you, or email you. The first four chapters can be found here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10086312/1/The-Book-of-Hidden-Doorways

 

I can't change those chapters anymore, but I would love it if you could read it through and tell me what you think of it so far. 

[geni0529]

I could try, my grammar sucks but I love reading, and I understand how the character would be.

[shujuju]

Thank you! Do you have a preferred method of contact? I could private message you, or email you. The first four chapters can be found here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10086312/1/The-Book-of-Hidden-Doorways

 

I can't change those chapters anymore, but I would love it if you could read it through and tell me what you think of it so far. 

 

 

I have a DeviantArt you can message me on: http://shujuju.deviantart.com/

 

My Email: dontstarvesketch@gmail.com

 

I am quite new to the forums but if there is some sort of message system we could use it

 

by the way I am honored to be a reader!

[Unsound Mind]

I could try, my grammar sucks but I love reading, and I understand how the character would be.

 

 

The more advice I can get, the better. If you want to beta read, give me the best way to contact you. It could even just be through forum private messaging.