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(Fanfiction) To rule the world.


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Im so sorry.  Just read this and give me feedback.  https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10297326/1/To-rule-the-world

 

I don't want to post 20 chapters of pure noobish writing.  (So imma give a link)

 

Comment, critique, or just say random inhuman words.

I have no idea if any of you have a fanfiction account.  (Oh my god I will regret posting this here in about 5 minutes.)

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Im so sorry.  Just read this and give me feedback.  https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10297326/1/To-rule-the-world

 

I don't want to post 20 chapters of pure noobish writing.  (So imma give a link)

 

Comment, critique, or just say random inhuman words.

I have no idea if any of you have a fanfiction account.  (Oh my god I will regret posting this here in about 5 minutes.)

 

It's pretty good and the plot present is engaging to avid fans, although, the chapter lengths really do bother me.

Most notably in chapter one, I blink and it's over. I realize that writing while maintaining quality over quantity is hard, length should always be considered. When I write a chapter, I make the world count to be a minimum of 1,000 words, so it looks meaty at a glance and requires a page scroll, making the reader feel like something is being done....but that's just me, mkay?

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It's pretty good and the plot present is engaging to avid fans, although, the chapter lengths really do bother me.

Most notably in chapter one, I blink and it's over. I realize that writing while maintaining quality over quantity is hard, length should always be considered. When I write a chapter, I make the world count to be a minimum of 1,000 words, so it looks meaty at a glance and requires a page scroll, making the reader feel like something is being done....but that's just me, mkay?

I wrote the first chapter at school, so I was always hiding my paper from pesky students and teachers.  I tried to make something quick to the point.  I will try to make them more detailed and longer now though.

random inhumane words  Pretty good! I like it! :love_heart:  :wickerbottomthanks:  :victorious:

Thank you!  :wilson_flower:

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